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34 minutes ago, harrycrosby said:

You can use it as a checklist, or to find a particular ending that you're looking for, or just to see the connections

This is amazing!  It's so cool to see it visualized like this <3

Makes me wish I did more with Henriette though... she's delightfully awful :D  I love [58]!

I'm glad you enjoyed the story enough to do this work!

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I have read through this and loved it. I am by no means done playing with it though. I did skip over the comments here just so the other attempts are fresh. Pat yourself on the back a couple of times for this one bbykimmy. 

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11 hours ago, bbykimmy said:

This is amazing!  It's so cool to see it visualized like this <3

Makes me wish I did more with Henriette though... she's delightfully awful :D  I love [58]!

I'm glad you enjoyed the story enough to do this work!

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Henrietta was fun. I thought she could have used one more option on the colored powders - You refuse to make a choice, and get both!

I just went through again and gave my likes for the day to everything having to do with pullups and proving you're an adult (or more realistically failing to do so), that's really pushing my buttons right now :D

I think I'm not quite as excited about BEST ENDING as some people because we only just met Ruby two sections before. It's not like there's this long history with the character like [81] Staying with Amelia, Good Ending #4. I think little endings in general aren't my favorite (although I like them more than brainwashed babies), Picturing myself in dimension stories, I always want an ending where the main character is a little and gets diapered, but still has something resembling a life, like [87] Kinky Porn Things, Good Ending #5. Chasing Emily was a long story that sort of ended along those lines.

On the choose-your-own-adventure structure more generally, I think it benefits more from fewer options that are more interconnected rather than just branching all the way down. For example the Flextech route is much more linked than Claudia (which I know was rushed). Having 5 different paths to the mechanical nursery also really helps with the helplessness feeling on multiple reads, you try so hard to not get back there but it seems inevitable. Dread it, run from it. Destiny still arrives.

Some of the endings are very similar and could maybe have been combined if the lead-ins were slightly different, like [90] Little School and [53] Reform School, or [86] Diapered Kitten and [18] Off to Catalon. You get there by a different path, but they're basically the same ending... Screwing up with portals landing you in a school, and betraying Claudia turning you into a pet. (Kicking her out while eating Pizza doesn't end well either, note to self NEVER betray Claudia).

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Alright, I've gone through 4 times and these are the endings I got:

Good Ending #5 - Once again the porn industry saves the day. ?

Good Ending #6 - Or... maybe it was 4? The one where you arrive home safely. Which NEVER happens!

Bad Ending #4 - Well, that sucked. ? But at least my mind was erased. So it's essentially no different than a bullet to the head.

Best Ending. - Okay, that one almost made me tear up a little. ? It was SO BEAUTIFUL! ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡ but I already used my Likes on different options! ?

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So far I've gotten a few of each bad and good plus I got the best ending (perfectly named to me) 

 

I liked the good end where she stays with Amelia (sorry if spelling is off I work in 5 hours and haven't slept, unashamedly addicted to diaper dimension stories and went hunting for the best ending) 

Amelia's Nursery seems like a lot of effort but I loved picturing it, but being a nerd I love the idea of being adopted by Gavin and Ruby going to work with daddy Gavin sounds like fun and foxes are so adorable 

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10 hours ago, Abbybaby said:

So far I've gotten a few of each bad and good plus I got the best ending (perfectly named to me) 

 

I liked the good end where she stays with Amelia (sorry if spelling is off I work in 5 hours and haven't slept, unashamedly addicted to diaper dimension stories and went hunting for the best ending) 

Amelia's Nursery seems like a lot of effort but I loved picturing it, but being a nerd I love the idea of being adopted by Gavin and Ruby going to work with daddy Gavin sounds like fun and foxes are so adorable 

@KWOceans created that nursery.  Her nursery designs are always amazing, so much better than mine.  She did me a huge favor by designing it.  If you compare Amelia's nursery to Henriette's nursery, the contrast is stark.

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3 hours ago, bbykimmy said:

@KWOceans created that nursery.  Her nursery designs are always amazing, so much better than mine.  She did me a huge favor by designing it.  If you compare Amelia's nursery to Henriette's nursery, the contrast is stark.

I havent gotten to all the endings yet but I can't wait to keep searching ^_^. Although i love the attention to detail in the nursery the attitude of the mommy/daddy is what i pay attention to the most so i love the endings where she has caring amazons but secretly also like putting up a little bit of a fight cuz I'm a brat :P

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thanks for an awesome story i loved best ending and good ending #4 

some of the others i just left as i realized that it was not going to end well down that rabbit hole

thanks for all the time and effort you put into it 

 

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I loved the one with Henrietta and the orgasm formula and the one where Claudia and Barb ended up as twins. I've gone down most of the paths and enjoyed those the most.

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Alright, took me a good bit longer then I expected/hoped, so I fear I'm a bit late to the party now....

 

First off, I've said it a million times I'll say it a million more, bbykimmy, kwoceans, you two are two of the very few authors I read, I love all your works, all the twists and turns and character depth and the emotion in these lines of letters manipulated into a fetish tale.... A FETISH tale... The same genre that just... Well not always the best of talent... 

 

But this, this little masterpiece here? I read the same sections dozens of times over just because... 1. I kinda sorta had to, but T2O.... I wanted to ensure myself that I could see this as a full story (well as much as you can) with all 26 of these endings... 

 

My absolute favorite still stands to be GE#4 with Amelia. That ending just kinda got alllll the right buttons and while maybe a bit short (probably just me being greedy) it was beautiful and made me really daydream for a day or two lol 

 

My favorite "bad" was probably... "Betray Claudia first" because that one just pushed all the right wrong buttons... Especially Barbara accidentally damning herself to no vocals in those last few moments. Like that got my crazy thinking and whew XD thanks... 

 

For the most part, I don't have a whole ton of Critique... Except Claudia, all the characters seemed to stay those characters no matter the path taken... Gavin always acted as I would expect him to... Henrietta very much either played a prime predator role or she was the boss with too much work... Amelia was very patient and gave ample chances to prove oneself... Yada yada... But Claudia, while sure i quickly glanced something about her being in later (I didn't actually read most these comments... Just quick scroll) she just seemed so.... "Well I (the author) need this here so here it is"... Ya know? I wish there was maybe a bit more in terms of the robonanny/mech daycare (also a personal favorite idea) I'm absolutely in love with this CYOA, no doubt a top favorites lol

 

TL;DR I rambled, move on now

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  • 1 year later...

Wow! This was great - I’ve only just found this sorry now :) I think I’d not last very long in the Diaper Dimension as my first attempt had me hypnotised in front of a tv in wet pants, and my second go had me boxed up as a baby doll! 

Thanks @bbykimmy - this must have taken a long time. I appreciate your hard work! :)

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On 12/7/2019 at 4:22 PM, Stbone said:

Wow! This was great - I’ve only just found this sorry now :) I think I’d not last very long in the Diaper Dimension as my first attempt had me hypnotised in front of a tv in wet pants, and my second go had me boxed up as a baby doll! 

Thanks @bbykimmy - this must have taken a long time. I appreciate your hard work! :)

It did take a long time!  It was a lot of work and a lot of fun.  I had hopes that this story would get me ALL THE POINTS... but it didn't lol.  Still, it was a fun exercise.  Thank you for reading it!

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I finally sat down to play through this, and I must say it was really something impressive. It had some pretty interesting moments and twists (in particular I thought the twins and the sack bad endings were very creative) and I think it did a good job of getting the player into the mindset of a little in the dimension. I won't say it was my favorite of your works but it was certainly one of the more impressive projects I've seen on this site. Thanks allot for sharing this with us. 

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I managed to find all ends WITHOUT the table. Well I kind of played with it for 4 hours but found it very funny.
My favorites:
Bad Ending: 3, 6, 7, 12, 13, 14
Short question why the Good Ending 2 is considered a good end. I my permanent compulsive orgasm doesn't sound funny.

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18 hours ago, Moon3ye said:

I managed to find all ends WITHOUT the table. Well I kind of played with it for 4 hours but found it very funny.
My favorites:
Bad Ending: 3, 6, 7, 12, 13, 14
Short question why the Good Ending 2 is considered a good end. I my permanent compulsive orgasm doesn't sound funny.

https://www.dailydiapers.com/board/index.php?/topic/64979-choose-your-own-adventure-barbara-davis-why-thirteen/&do=findComment&comment=1542374

There's the ending in question :D

Your point is valid - I guess at the time of writing it sounded like a good time to me lol.  Barbara/Tabitha is happy and it's not quiiiiiiite constant?  It talks about the intensity tapering off after a while, only to be rekindled...  I mean, it's definitely not an "everyone lived happily ever after"... but it definitely is a happy ending.

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  • 2 years later...

I know I’m super late to this party. This story was referenced in a post when I was commenting on a BabySofia story and I’m just now getting around to reading it. I LOVE the format. I managed several bad endings, even though I’ve read enough “Dimension X” stories to know the warning signs, before I landed on the Best Ending. This story lived up to the recommendation from the BabySofia story’s comments. I’ve not read many of the post-story comments and intend to go back and explore other possible threads. Wonderfully written and very clever!

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