diapernocturnus Posted December 27, 2017 Share Posted December 27, 2017 Wow did not expect that. Great story Link to comment
Shade_Koopa Posted December 27, 2017 Share Posted December 27, 2017 woah, that's one is one scary ending. So let me get this straight, Charlie had a brief moment of clarity and push his "Daddy" off the cliff and into the water? Man that sucks... While I loved the story, that ending is just horrifying. I can't tell if "Daddy" was killed by accident or if he expect it to happen. Geeze..so many mixed emotions to this.. Gotta know if this story has an epilogue. Just a sad ending to leave Charlie all alone like that. Link to comment
Sarah Penguin Posted December 29, 2017 Share Posted December 29, 2017 That was good. Hoping for a epilogue as well. Link to comment
Les Lea Posted December 29, 2017 Author Share Posted December 29, 2017 Thanks for your comments I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I hope it wasn't too traumatic for anyone? I deliberately left the ending open so that each reader could fill in their own epilogue should they desire. Link to comment
CDfm Posted January 6, 2018 Share Posted January 6, 2018 No beating around the bush with this story it was action packed from the very beginning and it continues on even after the story has ended. I have to admit that while I was a bit shocked at Charlie’s actions at the end, I was kind of glad to see Bronislav get what he deserved. I didn’t care much for how he was using people for his gratification. I hope Charlie has a nice life with that new woman and her husband. Link to comment
Les Lea Posted January 7, 2018 Author Share Posted January 7, 2018 I'm glad you enjoyed it. I occasionally like to put a curve ball into my writing and I'm always pleased when it gets such a terrific reaction Thanks again Link to comment
keith60 Posted October 16, 2023 Share Posted October 16, 2023 I hope there is going to be more to this story soon Link to comment
Les Lea Posted October 19, 2023 Author Share Posted October 19, 2023 Hi Keith Glad you found one of my old stories. Unfortunately, I have no plans to continue a 'what happened next' sequel. I know there are quite a few of mine (and others) stories towards the back pages of the 'completed' section and hope you find some extra good stuff there. All the best and thanks for your comment.😊 Les Link to comment
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