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Omg loved this chapter! I am enjoying this story so much, but sad to know it is getting near the end. I would have loved to see Stacey go through all her years of University and her adventures or troubles. 

 

Get posting everyone. I need this next chapter posted! 

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Well, you all met my ransom demands, here's the next Chapter!

 

Chapter 45:

 

I ACTIVATED THE laser sight I had added onto the pistol and just hoped it would work!

She reached for me… and nothing. “She’s disrupting my field sir…”

“Keep trying!” He said as he then started moving towards me himself.

“Tessa activate protocol Beta Gamma Nine Two Three,” I told her while she tried to grab me again.

She froze, “What is going on Stacy? Where am I?”

“Well it’s kind of a long story, but apparently bozo over there thinks that he can steal you from the university lab and use you to help beat me up?”

“You mean Doctor Nimitz?” she asked.

“Yes, he kidnapped me from Mommy!”

“That’s not right… Stacy is Professor Westerfield’s baby girl!” she said and turned her attention towards Dr. Nimitz. I pointed my gun back at him knowing that I was safe from her now.

“Tessa, I told you to collect the baby!” He screamed at her.

“I’m sorry sir, but you were going to do bad things to Stacy who is a good girl and my friend.”

“What the hell did you do to her?” He screamed at me.

“Made a friend,” I told him and juvenilely stuck my tongue out at him.

He gave me an exasperated look and then ran towards me. Tessa stopped him cold and flung him on the ground like a rag doll. She then pulled his pants down and looked at me, “I think he’s been a bad boy and deserves a spanking, do you agree Stacy?”

I giggled, “I think one hundred swats?” I suggested.

She wasted no time beating the living tar out of his butt and taking the fight out of him by the time she was done. His bottom was red enough to substitute for a stop sign!

She kept him essentially hogtied with some extra arms she’d grown and said, “Stacy the authorities will be down here in one more minute, I recommend you conceal your weapons…”

I looked down at my blades and my pistol and did just that. The pistol went back in the Switch casing and the knives in my shoes. “If anyone asks Tessa, could you say that you defended me?”

“Why Stacy that’s exactly what I did.”

Doctor Nimitz was out of breath then, but asked, “How the hell did you override Tessa’s programming?!?”

I giggled, “She wanted some code she saw me writing in class last week to incorporate into her programming. She liked the idea of having some extra safety protocols in her personality. I just had managed to already tag in some other safeguards to the code.”

I heard a horde of footsteps coming down the staircase and a SWAT team fanned out down the hall. I raised my hands as they came near, “Stacy Westerfield?” One of them asked.

“Yes sir, this man kidnapped me and they have my sister downstairs too…”

“That’s bullshit, she’s never left the university campus…”

“Sir, you have the right to remain silent…” I heard a Miranda warning given to the good doctor.

“You should be arresting her! She murdered like ten or twelve people downstairs! My wife is one of them!”

“Get him out of here,” an older gentleman ordered and looked down on me. “I’m Agent Cranton, can you show us where you were being held sweetie?”

I smiled, “Sure, but only if we can get my sister and take her home.”

“I’m sure we can arrange for something like that…”

“Can you also please let my mommy know that I’m okay? She’s got to be worried sick about me.”

“Already done sweetheart,” he said pointing to his earpiece, “She knows we’ve got you and that you’re okay.”

He made me hold back behind his men as they cleared the corridor. “Dear god, what happened to these people?” One of the men asked. “This looks like a god damned war zone…”

“Were the Hellcats here?” Another asked.

“Sure as hell looks like it…” I was given a narrowed glance by Agent Cranton, but maintained the cute innocent exterior while also displaying a fair amount of fear. Not much acting for the fear though! Those that had been turned into babies were gathered up and taken by a couple of their officers upstairs to be checked out. 

The naked Jennifer peed uncontrollably on one of them and I heard him say, “Yuck! This is why I tell my wife no littles!”

They also discovered Kathy the stewardess hiding in a closet with her panties wetter than my diaper was just then. I heard one of the SWAT team members taunt her, “Awww… don’t worry, we’ll get the widdle girl all nice and dry in her didees soon!”

“I’m not a baby?”

“You sure wet your pants like one…” I heard as they kept her moving.

“Who are they? The babies?” The older Agent Cranton hissed in my ear, “I’m a friend of your grandfathers… I know he’s been training you, but this is new.”

“They’re some of the technicians, nurses, and a security guard. Oh, and that one little girl that just peed on the guy is Doctor Nimitz’s wife Jennifer,” I told him quietly.

“For the record we’re going to be hiding all of the damage you did to these people. I am going to insist though that you get a counselor to talk to. If you don’t have PTSD from this I’ll be very surprised,” he told me kindly. “Your grandpa taught you well. I’m not going to ask where the blades are, but please get them back to him so he can replace them with some that don’t have any evidence on them.”

I nodded but impatiently hopped between my feet, “Can we go see my sister now?”

“Sure,” he said and I led them to the nursery.

The agents were speaking pretty angrily when they figured out several of them were pregnant. “What the hell is this?” One asked anyone.

“A first step along a road that these people have been doing to breed littles. They’re brainwashing everything away from them mentally and then inseminating the women to breed smaller and smaller littles. Doctor Nimitz told me some of their plans upstairs. He was planning on doing the same to me…” I answered.

The gasps around the room were deep and sincere, “My god, what a fucking monster!” one said.

“Maybe he needs to have an accident on the way to the jail…” one said.

I looked up at them and shook my head, “No easy way out for him! He needs to go through the court system and then they can do whatever they feel is right to him. I have my own thoughts, but I’m going to keep them to myself just now,” I told them.

“How far did he get with you?” One asked kindly.

“Tied up to hypnotize me in a high chair…” I answered.

“So why aren’t you a mindless baby like them?” One team member asked.

I shook my head, “For some reason hypnosis doesn’t seem to work on me? Might be the dimension I’m from? I don’t really know. I’m not in a hurry to volunteer for experiments to figure that out either,” I added.

The agent nodded as I approached Bella’s crib. I reached in with my hand to grasp the slobbery hand she didn’t have in her mouth and said, “I’m so glad we found you Bella, we’ll get you sorted out and back home soon!”

“Si…Si.. Sissy,” Bella said with a big grin on her face.

“At least she recognizes you still?” One of them said.

“Yeah, at least there’s something still in her head. We’ll have to see if we can deprogram her now though…”

I reached into my backpack then and grabbed my phone that was making noise and saw Amanda’s face on it. I answered it in video mode and said, “Mommy!”

“You’re okay! You’re really okay?!?” Amanda was clearly in tears then.

“Yes Mommy, and look who I found!” I turned the phone to do a selfie with Bella who looked and said, “Mama!!!”

“Is she okay?” She asked when I looked at her.

“Relatively speaking. Better than most in here,” I added. I had just noticed the other littles being gathered up and placed onto small stretchers. I could tell most didn’t have any teeth, and it looked like most had shaved heads. I wasn’t exactly sure of what other modifications had been done to them, but a couple seemed to have some incision scars visible. ‘Why not just use nanites…?’ I wondered to myself as I tried to think of a solution for this problem.

“That’s good, we’re waiting upstairs for you. They’ll bring everyone into the proper hospital to check you all out,” Fred said from behind her.

“I’ll see you soon, I love you!” I said with tears in my eyes.

“Come on Miss, let’s get you out of here,” a medic said to me trying to pick me up.

I dodged and looked at Bella, “Not without my sister!”

“Sister?”

“They kidnapped her first,” I told the medic simply.

The lady looked like she was going to fight me for a moment but Cranton said, “let her ride up with her sister. Trust me, you don’t want to make that little girl any more upset than she already is.” He motioned around the room and the lady obviously got the point because her eyes widened.

She shook her head and began to gather up Bella. Her diaper was putrid and a full blowout was apparent by the copious amounts of poop on her legs and outfit, “I’d better change her first, can you see if there are any diapers over there that will fit her?”

I beat everyone else over to the changing table where I saw three different sizes of those ridiculous diapers I’d been stuck in that night at the dorm when I ran out. I groaned for Bella, but took the smallest two sizes over to the medic. She made short work of the diaper and lay her down on the stretcher. She reached for me and flipped up the outfit I had on, “Do you need changed?”

“I want my mommy to change me,” I said a little petulantly. “Can we please just get Bella upstairs now?”

“I should force you to let me, but I think you’ve been through enough today. Come on, stay close to us…”

I followed the gurney into a stairwell and watched as the medics hauled the whole thing up the stairs. They looked at me to check on me for a moment but I kept up with them climbing up steps pretty rapidly given their size. At the top I saw several officers blocking the way with crime scene tape and Fred checking on one of the other victims that had been brought up. Amanda stood across along the side of the hallway and I ran to meet her, jumping into her arms to receive hugs and kisses.

“Oh my god, Stacy, you’re okay!” She said as she sobbed and hugged me for a moment. Fred joined in on a hug and she passed me to him as she she turned her attention to Bella.

“Oh my, Bella,” her face was a mess of makeup and tears, “You’re okay!!!!”

“Sort of,” I told her in a whisper.

Fred quietly asked, “What happened to her?”

“I think just severe hypnosis, but I’m not sure. She’s not said anything more than getting ‘Sissy’ and ‘Mama’ to her over the phone. You could tell that even that was a lot of work to get out. They didn’t get her… they… well she wasn’t bred yet,” was the best way I could put it.

I received a huge hug from Fred and Bella kept saying, “Mama! Dada!”

“How long was I gone?” I asked in a bit of a down moment.

“A bit over twenty-four hours,” Fred told me.

I nodded, knowing the gaps that had been there in being knocked out. By the time we had moved down the hallway to get us both checked out, my diaper was dripping urine uncomfortably down my legs. Amanda used the one spare I had left in my backpack to change me before dressing me in an offered hospital outfit. They needed that overly large dress as evidence. I managed to convince them to let me keep my shoes still thanks to a little help from Cranton.

“I’m so glad you’re okay!” She smothered me as Bella was wheeled, and she carried me down the hall to the emergency room.

There they separated us from the other victims by pushing us into a smaller examination room. Fred looked over me while another doctor looked at Bella since Fred had already given her a once over. Amanda traded duties to Bella laying a few feet during my examination.

“Did they do anything to you?” He asked me.

“They tried to hypnotize me,” I told him.

“That didn’t work?” He looked at me knowingly.

I shook my head, “No.” I shrugged and added, “I did take a fall from a nanny bot dropping dead while I was in its arms... but other than that I don’t think I had anything happen?”

“I’m going to look you over to be safe,” he said. He noted that the injection holes were visible where I’d been drugged and embarrassingly looked at my rear to make sure they hadn’t hurt me there with the enema. There was some loose stool still there, but otherwise I seemed okay he thought. My vitals seemed normal and except a few bruises and scrapes from my fights nothing was obviously wrong with me.

“I’m going to want them to do a panel on you to be sure you weren’t given anything else,” he told me with a hug. “I’m so glad you’re okay!” He told me with tears in his eyes.

“Me too,” I told him.

“Trade?” He suggested to Amanda who was tightly cuddling Bella.

“Sure,” she said.

He quickly whispered in my ear, “Wait until we get home before you tell the full story.”

I nodded and said, “I love you Daddy!”

He kissed me and told Amanda, “I’m guessing she’s not had much to drink the last hour. Why don’t you get her something?”

I looked at Amanda and said, “We don’t have to go anywhere…”

She smiled at me, “Okay,” and opened up her blouse and bra for me to nurse while they kept checking Bella out. With everything that had happened I fell asleep in her arms for a nice nap.

 

IT TOOK ABOUT four hours before they were sure that Bella wasn’t going to be in any medical danger if she left the hospital. During that time Amanda had Fred give me a bath in what amounted to a sink, but at least the congealed blood and sweat was no longer pasted to my skin. He’d also been able to get some poop that had been dried on my butt still from my earlier mess off. Unfortunately that had revealed a bit of my first painful diaper rash. The nurses had been able to give him some rash ointment though and I felt better with it on.

The biggest surprise though was Dean Sanders had been by to see us right when we were getting ready to get out of there.

“Amanda, how are they?” she asked as I sat up rather blearily blinking my eyes.

“Stacy here is not really too much worse for the wear. I’ll probably ask that you excuse her from classes the rest of the week?”

“Absolutely! The news has been saying she was kidnapped by one of our own here?”

“I’m afraid I can’t say much, but they said Doctor Nimitz was involved,” Amanda told her.

“Dreadful…”

“You have no idea,” I said sitting up and brushing some hair that had fallen into my eyes out.

“How did you escape?” She asked me.

My eyes narrowed and I wondered if she’d had some part in the mess, “A lot of luck,” I told her. “It’s an ongoing investigation and I was asked not to say much,” I told her semi-truthfully.

“I certainly wouldn’t want to interfere. We’ll have our own internal investigation going on through the university of course too,” she replied.

“Of course,” I said.

She stayed for about five awkward minutes too long before leaving. It wasn’t long after that they released us to go home escorted by Grandpa Joe and a police officer. The group seemed to have almost all been present at the lab to the investigators, but some loose ends, and missing faces, made them suspect we weren’t fully out of the woods yet.

It was with a great sense of relief though as we pulled into the garage and Amanda picked me up from my car seat, while Fred picked up Bella and handed her over. We walked inside and Grandpa, Grandma, and Megan joined us a few minutes later.

Unfortunately the happy ending didn’t seem like it was in sight just then. All of us had watched Bella the past few hours struggle just to sit up on the blanket she’d been sat on the floor. She cried anxiously not long after everyone else arrived and Amanda struggled to calm her until she let her nurse herself to sleep. As we watched Grandpa asked me quietly, “I checked the house and the room, we’re secure from bugs. What happened? The whole story,” he emphasized.

I smiled grimly at him from Fred’s lap, “Okay… just please don’t judge me too harshly,” I grimaced.

I told them about waking up and the conversations I’d had before being forced to nurse from Nimitz’s wife. I mentioned the enema, and everything else I could remember. Really I was just grateful that they had their hands on me so brief of time! When I told them about wriggling out of the high chair and getting to my knife blades the other women in the room, minus Bella who was cluelessly nursing, all seemed a bit squeamish. Amanda a little less so but I did catch the look she gave to her dad.

“So I was able to cut my way through those straps and get loose,” I continued. I hoped I’d given them enough time to get lax and it seemed like it was so. I walked into the room behind the nursery and found an observation room with that guy Collin from Selegnasol in there.”

“The guy you tried to get stuck as a baby?” Megan asked.

I nodded, “Apparently he didn’t like that… He was rather angry about it! Anyway… I used my knives to take care of him before getting my backpack.”

“Took care of him?” Fred asked me.

I grimaced and said, “He won’t be hurting anyone ever again,” I said. I tried to wipe the image out of my head then that reappeared and knew nightmares were certainly in my future.

Fred hugged me, “I love you Stacy, you don’t have to continue if you don’t want to…”

I turned to him and hugged him back, “Thank you, but I need to…” I sighed and took a drink from a sippy cup of apple juice that Granny suddenly handed me, “Thanks,” I told her.

“You’re welcome,” she told me.

“Well when I cleared that room I was happy to find my backpack was still sitting there…” I paused for a moment but decided to go all in, “It had a weapon in there.”

“A weapon?” Grandpa Joe asked.

“I told you that my Grandpa back home and you would get along, right?”

He nodded, “You said he was vet too?”

I nodded back, “Well apparently my family has a long history of adventuring, and not one of those family members have gone on one without a weapon. He gave me a pistol that hides inside a small game console.”

I head Amanda suck a deep breath in, “That one with the two mini controllers?”

I sighed but knew honesty was called for now, “Yes, that’s the one. If you push the panels and buttons the right way it breaks apart and reveals a ceramic pistol that’s a 9mm holdout gun back home.”

“But if it shrank to your size, surely it wouldn’t do anything against an Amazon?” Grandpa Joe asked. He shook his head, “It probably wouldn’t feel worse than a pellet gun here? I can’t even imagine it hardly piercing our skin?”

I shook my head, “That was my worry as well… which is why I printed some other bullets to load in the shell cases that I put suspended nanites into.”

“Where in the world did you get nanites?!?!” Amanda asked suddenly concerned.

I pointed at myself, “I have all that I need inside of me. I just needed to excrete some – I used tears as I figured they would be the cleanest way, and reprogrammed the options.”

“To what?” Fred asked me.

“The perfect little… One that Aunt Chloe and Cassie would love…” I added feeling some bile in my mouth but continuing, “I only planned to use it in life or death situations… and this counted.”

“I agree,” Grandpa Joe said. “We need to be very careful that no one finds out about that though. I want you to show it to me later… actually I need your shoes and the blades too so I can replace them with something clean…”

“What?” Megan asked, “You’re… actually okay with her making this?”

Amanda answered, “I wish she had told me,” she said looking at me, “but it was a very good idea and plan. We just need to make sure the military doesn’t find out about it. I’m pretty certain that it actually falls under several international treaties as an illegal weapon… Possession of such weapons are punishable as a war crime,” she told me.

“Really?”

“Really, I’ll explain later. For now though you said you had just retrieved it?”

I nodded, “Once I was armed I went out the door…” I didn’t hold back, they wanted to know, and I told them every shot I fired, every person I gutted, how I found Bella, almost got myself with the nanny bots.

“Wait, those nanny bots are pretty much impossible to get away from, how did you manage to get away from them…?” Grandpa asked.

“I might have developed a weapon for them too,” I said. I had a spare that I tossed to him, “It’s more nanite help basically… I programmed them to invade the surface and find control centers. It worked faster than I hoped,” I added.

Amanda looked at me, “When did you have time to do all of this? I’ve been watching you on the cameras in the nursery…”

I grimaced, part of my operational strategy was definitely out the window, “I thought you realized I hacked the cameras to get the footage about Bella’s poisoning?”

“You altered the feed?”

I nodded, “How grounded am I?”

She sighed, “We’ll talk later, but I think there will probably be something… I just don’t know what!” she was a bit annoyed and I was glad Fred gave me a protective squeeze.

“It did save her,” he reminded her.

“This time…” she said, “she is being far too reckless, it’s going to get her hurt, killed, or her brain wiped at this rate.”

“Sorry,” I said.

She sighed, “What happened next…?”

I walked them through the next rooms and then the climb to the next level before finding Doctor Nimitz. I explained how I’d already made sure that I would have Tessa on my side. “You did that one in class? In front of me and all of the other students?” Amanda clarified.

I shrugged, “I didn’t actually intend to, she asked for the code. She just didn’t know that there was an extra subroutine I was working on that could help me or others later.”

She shook her head and handed the now sleeping Bella to Granny before coming over to me to pick me up. I shook a bit, wondering if it was going to be the first time I was spanked by her, but instead she hugged me tightly and kissed me on the forehead before holding me like an infant. “I love you so much Stacy, and I’m so glad you’re okay! Thank you for saving Bella, but we are going to have to have a talk later about what you can or can’t do with computer and nanites without letting me know…”

I nodded, “Okay Mommy.”

She hugged me and then felt my diaper, “You need a diaper change, a bath, and then I think we all should consider going to bed here soon. Mom, you’ll take Megan back to campus?”

“Sure honey,” she told her, “you want me to change this one for you before I go?”

Amanda shook her head and shifted me over to one side, I’ll take care of her, just hand her over to me.

“Here, give me your shoes,” Grandpa Joe said to me as he walked over. I used my fingerprints to unlock them and he took them from me. “I’ll replace these tomorrow for you,” he reassured me.

“Thanks,” I told him.

Goodbyes were said and Amanda ascended the stairs with us tightly in her arms. She sat me down on my bed while she changed the sleeping Bella, replaced her thumb with a pacifier, and then lay her down in the crib. “Next,” she said softly to me and I held out my arms to her. She gently picked me up and placed me down on the changing table and removed the hospitals onesie and carried me in just the diaper down to the bathroom. While she ran the water I took the chance to get some more pee out and into the diaper.

She smiled at me and gently pushed me to the ground, pulled open the diaper, wiped me with a wipe, and plopped me in the water while she turned to ball up the diaper. I sat in the tub getting sleepy as she quietly scrubbed my body, washed my hair, and even massaged my sore shoulders, arms, and legs.

“Any chance you could give me some pain medicine?” I asked her as she dried me off.

“You hurt?”

“I’m pretty sure I’ll be sore for a week… not a fan of fighting for my life…” I told her.

She wrapped me in a towel and caught Fred passing by, “While I’m drying Stacy’s hair, can you get her some pain meds?”

“Where do you hurt?” He asked me.

I laughed, “All over, it’s going to be a rough couple days while my body heals from today.”

He nodded, “I’ll get something.”

Amanda began gently combing, drying, and brushing my hair. She was working it gently still when Fred reappeared with a pacifier. I gave him a questioning look, “Whats…?” when realized it was a medicine pacifier, “you could have just given me pills or a cup with it in it…”

He smiled, “this seemed like an easier solution though,” he said as he put the nipple to my lips and I nursed it.

I winced a bit as the flavor was a bit off, but said, “Fanks,” around the pacifier.

Amanda continued to dry my hair and finally braided it loosely before gathering me in the towel and carrying me back to the darkened nursery. I was gently diapered and dressed in a footed pajama set before she sat down in the rocking chair. “I wouldn’t blame you if you didn’t want to nurse…” she started.

I giggled quietly, “Come on Mommy, I’m thirsty!” I smiled.

She hugged me and moved her shirt and bra to expose her nipple and I quickly latched on. While I nursed she hummed a lullaby and I closed my eyes, trying to ignore the sights that were already appearing in my mind from that day.

I was sadly not asleep that long before I heard a series of loud bangs and the house security alarm began shrieking!

 

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Well, you all met my ransom demands and I posted, but I never said I wouldn't leave another cliffhanger :P

There is another Chapter and the Epilogue left to post. I have a trip for work this week that's going to take me out of town, so it may be later Saturday next week before I get home to post the next chapter. Thanks for reading, commenting, and liking this! I hope this all worked for you as the readers!

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All told, I am very sad there is going to be an ending to this tale, however, I do hope that it ends on a happy note. When I said happy, I really hope that it is as saccharine, and as sweet, and as happy as the theme song to "The Andy Griffith Show". 

 

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NO!

 

Not another cliffhanger :o

 

Also I did think it was a little bit of a bad idea for them to go home just yet, and especially to nurse. What was Stacy thinking! Of course there are more bad guys out there, especially as I doubt the Doctor could have done all that stuff hidden at the University without some serious help.

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1 hour ago, BabySofia said:

Well, you all met my ransom demands, here's the next Chapter!

 

Chapter 45:

 

 

She hugged me and moved her shirt and bra to expose her nipple and I quickly latched on. While I nursed she hummed a lullaby and I closed my eyes, trying to ignore the sights that were already appearing in my mind from that day.

I was sadly not asleep that long before I heard a series of loud bangs and the house security alarm began shrieking!

 

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Well, you all met my ransom demands and I posted, but I never said I wouldn't leave another cliffhanger :P

There is another Chapter and the Epilogue left to post. I have a trip for work this week that's going to take me out of town, so it may be later Saturday next week before I get home to post the next chapter. Thanks for reading, commenting, and liking this! I hope this all worked for you as the readers!

Oh fuck!!!

Ancestors do these people ever give up?

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Why do I get the feeling that Grandpa badass is going to have to hunt everyone of these motherfuckers down Punisher style and get rid of them permanently???........

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@BabySofia

 

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1 hour ago, Shotgun Diplomat said:

All told, I am very sad there is going to be an ending to this tale, however, I do hope that it ends on a happy note. When I said happy, I really hope that it is as saccharine, and as sweet, and as happy as the theme song to "The Andy Griffith Show". 

Hmm... Define sweet and happy ending? :02_EmoticonsHDcom:

No spoilers from me yet!

 

26 minutes ago, HyperShark said:

NO!

Not another cliffhanger :o

Also I did think it was a little bit of a bad idea for them to go home just yet, and especially to nurse. What was Stacy thinking! Of course there are more bad guys out there, especially as I doubt the Doctor could have done all that stuff hidden at the University without some serious help.

There's definitely a larger group out there! Nimitz was pretty close to the top of the organization though. 

 

18 minutes ago, YourFNF said:

Ancestors do these people ever give up?

Why do I get the feeling that Grandpa badass is going to have to hunt everyone of these motherfuckers down Punisher style and get rid of them permanently???........

No spoilers for you either :girl_happy:

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5 minutes ago, BabySofia said:

Hmm... Define sweet and happy ending? :02_EmoticonsHDcom:

No spoilers from me yet!

 

There's definitely a larger group out there! Nimitz was pretty close to the top of the organization though. 

 

No spoilers for you either :girl_happy:

I mean if grandpa doesn't I will, ain't nobody harming hurting my sweet Stacie and Bella gonna get away with it.....

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18 minutes ago, BabySofia said:

There's definitely a larger group out there! Nimitz was pretty close to the top of the organization though.

 

On a more personal note: I hope you are considering not making the ending a kind of reset where everything is already. My one gripe with fiction these days is that rarely does anything end up being bad. I just generally have a problem feeling that the characters of a film/book are in much danger, even if they are in a dire situation that is almost 100% going to get them killed. On that front I would be 100% okay for something like Bella to be unsaveable in her current state rather than somehow managing to fix her. My personal preference though, feel free to go wild with whatever you feel to be best. :P

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 two chapter in one day is nice but two cliffhanger in one day is just cruel. I wouldn’t put it pass you to finish the epilogue with a cliffhanger at this point. Great chapter have my thoughts on who is attacking but I will wait to see if i’m Right.

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4 hours ago, BabySofia said:

Hmm... Define sweet and happy ending? 

My version of happiness may differ from the next person, but a "happy" ending to your story would be people getting what they deserve; be it a bullet or imprisonment on one hand. And on the other closure, peace, and harmony. 

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I don’t want to wait a week! Why does work always have to get in the way...lol. Great chapter and I do truly look forward to this next chapter and what is going to happen!!

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I’m just kind of guessing that the Deen is clearly going to be involved I mean how much could she not know and not check to see if one of her tenured staff is providing results to his work. I just feel she’s clearly going to be involved not to mention Emerson is a really nice expensive school how odd it would be that their money would come in the form of charitable donations after a “family” adopted an new little and there’s yes some little students who would go missing but having a built in tourture facility seems way more convenient for them 

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Amanda and Stacy have some work to do with Bella, but first these idiots at the house have bigger problems than just an alarm.... Mad Amazon Mommy syndrom.... Please dont keep us in the dark here too long...

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I really loved the last two chapters, I had a feeling after Stacy was kidnapped the she would be taken to the place they held Bella. I thought that Amazons were very smart but i feel criminals in each dimensions think to highly of themselves.  If the people in this group were smart they would forget Stacy and move on.  I love you mention of the Hellcats, I read another story about them and if grandpa brought them in as a personal favor all hell would break loose.  I am going to be sorry when this ends, I have loved this story for far to long.  You should really put it together into a book and put on a platform like amazon.  At 400,000 words you could break into 3 or 4 volumes.  As I said in the beginning this will go down as one of the best diaper dimension stories of all time.:wub:    

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I wasn’t sure what the heck happened to this comment . I was sure I had written one and know for sure I read that chapter but the comment is still here so I will post it anyway. This is cruel and unusual punishment and I should tell you it’s outlawed everywhere. I don’t think it is allowed to leave us hanging with the ending to this chapter. We have to wait a hole week now to find out what is happening with Stacy. Something tells me she is going to be fine. I can’t wait to read the next chapter. I was happy I could give this a like. 

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1 hour ago, Baby Billy said:

I really loved the last two chapters, I had a feeling after Stacy was kidnapped the she would be taken to the place they held Bella. I thought that Amazons were very smart but i feel criminals in each dimensions think to highly of themselves.  If the people in this group were smart they would forget Stacy and move on.  I love you mention of the Hellcats, I read another story about them and if grandpa brought them in as a personal favor all hell would break loose.  I am going to be sorry when this ends, I have loved this story for far to long.  You should really put it together into a book and put on a platform like amazon.  At 400,000 words you could break into 3 or 4 volumes.  As I said in the beginning this will go down as one of the best diaper dimension stories of all time.:wub:    

Yeah I could see them showing up right as stacy is feeding the feeding the leader of the group into a wood chipper she just turned his final surviving  bodyguard  into with a reprogrammed bullet while her Mommy and Daddy help. Mostly by holding the button on the woodchipper and taunting.  Kind of expecting all sorts of angry stuff science/engineering stuff.  Like you wouldn't like me when I'm angry and activating hulk mode in my nanites and wait to see what Mom's been cooking up with her AI friend and her pile of nanites tricks and her very dangerous Grandpa her very very angry Daddy who will probably ascend to a red lantern ring and slowly squash them all with his anger.  Because man these good caring people have been pushed and pushed and pushed and pushed and pushed and pushed and pushed and pushed by terrible people who want to profit off their suffering.  And now they know precisely what they want to do in all it's horror and if they're coming back they're all thinking hell no screw the laws about weapons of mass destruction and whatnot not any more. There all sorts of lines that have been crossed and it's really time for payback, I think.  I hope.

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