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It has been 48 whole hours. Where is my update fix? I am almost, ALMOST tempted to start writing my own story.

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One thing that I notice as I read through it, is that there often seems to be the use of the word waive or waived instead of wave and waved. Sometimes it's the right use of the word, and sometimes it isn't. I don't know if that's just from your spellchecker or not. or if it's intentional and I am just misreading it.

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3 hours ago, Mayiel said:

One thing that I notice as I read through it, is that there often seems to be the use of the word waive or waived instead of wave and waved.

I have noticed this too. When the writing in general is as good as Sofia’s it doesn’t bother me much - but at the same time it stands out more.

I’m not sure what an author can reasonably do to avoid homophones: spell-checkers can’t help, grammar-checkers won’t spot substitution of one verb for another and finding a competent and efficient volunteer sub-editor would be tricky in this millieu. (Finding volunteers would be easy- finding one whose help would be worth the hassle - not so much.)

Maybe in this case deleting a few offending words from the dictionary used by the spellchecker would work? Any time you actually wanted “waive”, you would have to accept a red squiggle, but the trade-off  should be worthwhile.

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5 hours ago, Mayiel said:

One thing that I notice as I read through it, is that there often seems to be the use of the word waive or waived instead of wave and waved. Sometimes it's the right use of the word, and sometimes it isn't. I don't know if that's just from your spellchecker or not. or if it's intentional and I am just misreading it.

Sorry about that, I'll try and watch out for that one. On all of my works (not here) that I've published on other sites and for sale I've used an editor and we've gone a couple or more times through the work to avoid it. Naturally I try and avoid needing to change much... but there are constantly things to catch. I'll go back through and proof my main document for that one and keep an eye out for it in future posts. If you ever see something specifically let me know - I'm happy to change errors!

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Hmm, now I have an idea where somebody in-universe makes the same mistake I did (thinking the Little/In-Betweener cut-off point is 5 feet, not 6) only to learn that hard way about their mistake once they cross over - like, say, a girl who's 5'6" who makes the trip but then has to be told that sorry, but you were misinformed, and you are in fact a Little here, not an IB, now let's get you outta those grown-up clothes and into a nice, comfy diapie...

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8 minutes ago, DKN117 said:

Hmm, now I have an idea where somebody in-universe makes the same mistake I did (thinking the Little/In-Betweener cut-off point is 5 feet, not 6) only to learn that hard way about their mistake once they cross over - like, say, a girl who's 5'6" who makes the trip but then has to be told that sorry, but you were misinformed, and you are in fact a Little here, not an IB, now let's get you outta those grown-up clothes and into a nice, comfy diapie...

YMMV within the universe of course! I just tried to scale everyone as accurately as I could. Helps me with visualizing how characters interact. Of course it also shows when someone is smaller than a 3 year old just why they might end up as someones baby! 

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6 minutes ago, DKN117 said:

Hmm, now I have an idea where somebody in-universe makes the same mistake I did (thinking the Little/In-Betweener cut-off point is 5 feet, not 6) only to learn that hard way about their mistake once they cross over - like, say, a girl who's 5'6" who makes the trip but then has to be told that sorry, but you were misinformed, and you are in fact a Little here, not an IB, now let's get you outta those grown-up clothes and into a nice, comfy diapie...

But don’t you worry someday you might just grow a couple more inches, and have a chance to earn your big girl panties back.

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Gosh I just love your writing this story is all around one of my favorites I haven’t been on pins and needles for a story since chasing Emily. And this is shaping up to be just as interesting with more twists and turns. Now there’s the mafia a hag of a den hen and Stacy dealing with the fact she wants to be coddled like her “little” sister. Love it 

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Thinking about it, why hasn't Amanda invested in odor control diapers. A pair of plastic pants to cover Stacey's diapers, would eliminate any odor by forming an air tight seal. Then Stacey could nurse again without issues. Stacey could even have them locked on to avoid others changing her as Amanda would have the key.

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5 hours ago, ThomasG said:

Thinking about it, why hasn't Amanda invested in odor control diapers. A pair of plastic pants to cover Stacey's diapers, would eliminate any odor by forming an air tight seal. Then Stacey could nurse again without issues. Stacey could even have them locked on to avoid others changing her as Amanda would have the key.

The school will probably still expell her for acting like a baby.  They did say that it was for sanitary reasons. Stacy luck someone will call LPS saying that Stacy is being neglected or abused and then be taken away from Amanda and Fred.

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17 hours ago, Baby Pal said:

The school will probably still expell her for acting like a baby.  They did say that it was for sanitary reasons. Stacy luck someone will call LPS saying that Stacy is being neglected or abused and then be taken away from Amanda and Fred.

Actually no, the Plastic Panties are a sanitary guard preventing leaks and a security one given someone tried to kidnap her on campus. With Stacey regularly returning to Amanda's office between periods, and if Stacey aced the Placement Test, well the University may very well overlook a technical violation in the interest of keeping Stacey as a star pupil and Amanda as a star researcher. Heck, Amanda depending on how well Stacey scored on the computer programming placement test, could get Stacey a Research Assistant spot on her staff.  

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Chapter 33:

 

RIGHT THEN I just wanted to cry for my mommy, but I reminded myself I was a big college student and forced myself to just grimace. Well, a big college student in the biggest damn diaper ever invented!

I heard several giggles but one girl, Natasha, took pity on me, “Piggyback ride?” she asked me with a smile as she stood in front of me.

I nodded, “I think that would help…”

She helped me stand up, then knelt in front of me to let me climb onto her shoulders. The sad thing was that I knew this was the littlest Nest of littles and she was easily able to handle me on her back! “Better?” She asked.

“Other than my pride?” I whispered to her.

She giggled and grabbed onto her loop, “We’re ready to go Miss Madison!”

“Hmm… if you get tired Tasha let me know and I’ll take over for you.”

“Thanks Miss Madison, but Stacy has to be the lightest little ever! She actually makes me feel big! I got this!”

There were some giggles, and I watched Laura roll her eyes further down the line, but no one said anything else as Madison pulled our little caterpillar rope along. Thankfully for us it was only about two blocks to get to the football stadium, just on the other side of the big residential halls. “Right this way,” Madison said as we entered a gated area and we were led onto an enormous football field.

Some mass chaos ensued for the next several minutes while they organized the class into a huge capital ‘E’ on the field. All of the littles were directed to go to the front in order to be seen. Natasha was able to take a break from holding me and set me down towards the middle. “Thanks,” I told her and gave her a hug.

“Don’t mention it shrimp,” she said to me with a smile as she returned my hug.

For a while a photographer was giving us directions that most students seemed to be happy ignoring. After a while I saw Amanda show up along the side rails, and I was relieved know I would have a way home that wasn’t going to involve making some poor friend carry me! Just as the photographer said, “Now on three, everyone say ‘Griffins,” my bladder demanded further attention. Knowing it was useless to resist I let the urine run into the overgrown pillow that was the diaper. The results were almost instantaneous, and resulted in a photo I knew had to be comical as I fell down onto my butt. There was no way I could stand as the padding expanded even further beyond anything I could imagine!

I just groaned and smiled though for the next two pictures while looking up to the camera from my padded seat on the ground.

“That’s it ladies and gentlemen! Casino night starts at eight, hope to see all of you there! Well, all of you except the littles who need your sleepy time!” a loudmouth Amazon yelled. I decided he must be one of the orientation leaders as he shouted through a megaphone.

“Asshole,” I heard from somewhere nearby followed by a loud smack, and a little screaming from a spanking.

I tried to struggle back to my feet, but quickly realized that effort was pointless. As I sighed and tried to figure out what I was going to do to get to Amanda, I was relieved to look up and see she was already almost there to me. Before she got to me Madison said, “Time to go Stacy.”

“I know, my mommy’s right there,” I pointed at Amanda less than ten steps away.

“Oh, well then, we’ll see you sometime tomorrow maybe?” She asked.

“I don’t know actually. We may have other plans, I’ll try and let you know if I am coming though so I can find out where you are?”

“Okay,” she said with a smile and ended up helping me stand for a second as Amanda walked up. “Sorry, she was all out of her cute diapees, so I had to go dig into the storage closet. All I could find in her size were some infant diapers.”

“That’s okay, we were both kind of worried about her running out, but decided to take a chance,” Amanda told her, “I appreciate you found something to change my sweet baby girl into.”

“No problem Professor, good night!” She said as Amanda scooped me up into her arms. I watched Madison pick up the end of the rope and begin pulling the girls along back towards the dorm. As they walked away I saw Laura wave at me, then make a weird face, as I definitely heard loud farts from multiple girls in the line. All around me several other lines of littles seemed to be similarly letting loose of gas.

“Hmm…” Amanda distracted me then as she tickled my side and smiled at me, “I might have to get some of these to keep you out of trouble!”

“Ugh… there’s already two in my backpack… and Madison put the rest in the changing table…” I groaned. “Don’t let me ever forget to have like a dozen extra diapers every day!”

Amanda laughed a lot and said, “Did you have fun at least?”

I shrugged, “I got to know the others a little better I guess. We were talking about scores on the CARE exam and Madison didn’t believe me on mine… she ended up scanning my ID and verifying that I’m too smart before noticing that I was the little that was nearly kidnapped today.”

“What’d she say?”

“Well she was pretty shocked and just kind of blurted it out… I think everyone else was pretty terrified for me. On the other hand though, every little basically expects to get kidnapped at some point… so it’s kind of normal… Madison was actually nice to me after that though.”

“Except the diaper?”

“She probably did enjoy that, but for her I think she was being downright sugary sweet.”

As she came to the end of the fence with everyone else I saw a security cart waiting for us again and clung tightly to her as it drove us to her car. The officer watched us get into our car before he drove away. I couldn’t help but notice that Amanda locked the doors as soon as she got in too.

“So… umm… did you hear anything else yet?” I asked.

“About what?” she asked in an odd voice.

“The thing?”

“No, no one has any in-stock so we’re out of luck for a day or two.”

“Oh,” I said.

I guessed that meant the car was, or might be bugged, and I just sat quietly and played with my watch a bit. Just then though I realized I needed to pee again. As I let loose into the padding I couldn’t feel a single bit of dampness on my skin. There would be no chance of leaks with this monster diaper - it almost seemed to laugh at all that I put in! As we pulled into the garage I noticed that Amanda did something quickly with a keypad on the center console before the garage door closed. I fidgeted in my seat waiting for her to come get me.

“Let’s go show your sissy and Daddy just how cute you look in that ridiculous diaper!” Amanda said with a smirk as she picked me up.

She started to set me down on the ground next to the car, and I said, “Umm… Mommy… I literally can’t even stand in this… carry me?”

She laughed, “Only to the kitchen,” she said with a smirk.

“What…?” I complained as she grabbed my backpack and held it in her other hand and walked through the door into the house. True to her word she sat me down on the ground and I lasted a second before I landed on my rear and stared at her departing figure. “You’re mean!” I called after her as I figured I would have to crawl.

I soon discovered that even crawling was difficult then! When I finally covered the distance to the living room I saw Fred with his camera, Bella standing next to him in her pajamas giggling, and Amanda with her cell phone taking a picture or a video too. At the bottom of the stairs I just sat down and said, “Would someone please get this pillow off of me?”

When the laughter finally settled Amanda kindly picked me up and carried me upstairs to the nursery and laid me down on the changing table. I let out a huge sigh of relief as she gave me a hug and set me back down on the floor in a thin Pamper. “Should I leave these in your backpack?” She asked me as she fought for a moment to open the front compartment and giggled at them.

I had no response so I just glared at her before wordlessly sitting down at my computer. As I started to login she said, “Actually sweetie, can we move you and your laptop down to Mommy’s work room for the moment?”

“Sure… umm… why?” I asked curiously.

“Baby Bella needs to go to bed here in a few minutes and you can work in there without keeping her up?”

I nodded, “I guess… Just out of curiosity… does she really need to go to bed this early?”

Amanda knelt down and hugged me, “Remember the changes we did to you with the nanites? They really do let you get by with a lot less sleep than her. Remember also that you’re not from this dimension… The 7:30pm bedtime of the dorm is actually really smart as most littles tend to need twelve hours of sleep a night.”

“But that only leaves half the day to do anything?” I asked in confusion.

“The only other way you can see that time expand is if they take an hour nap in the morning and in the afternoon. I’m going to try and get Bella onto a schedule like that, but we still have to sort out where she’s going once I start working again…”

I nodded knowing that was going to be tough to figure out without putting her in a crazy daycare. “You need a hand grabbing your power cord?” She asked me as I closed the lid and grabbed the laptop.

I nodded and she grabbed the converter, strip, and power cord and led me down to her workshop. I saw she had that other highchair setup there and I asked, “Why didn’t you just have Bella use this one?”

“I didn’t even think of it,” Amanda said, “but this one would be a bit small for her I’m afraid.”

“The short jokes today are getting old!” I groaned.

She laughed as she plugged everything in and then lifted me into the highchair, put the tray on, and helped me plug it in. “There, comfy?” She asked.

“I could use a bottle…?”

“A bottle? Not a big girl cup?” she raised her eyebrows.

“Please?”

“Okay, let me go get you one,” she told me and I opened up the computer as she left.

I wasted no time in logging in and searching for keyloggers. To my amusement I found someone had in fact installed something – or rather tried. I had setup the system to totally sandbox anything that might try and get in, so it wouldn’t do anything like they wanted. I took a quick moment to activate a dupe program I’d designed for fun back home that made the spyware think I was doing various web surfing activities. Of course if the person checked they would discover the websites didn’t work in this dimension… but messing with them would be fun! Especially since I was pretty sure in this case it was Amanda!

‘I’m guessing she’s curious…’ I thought, ‘I doubt she’s being malicious with it. It’s a new toy to her!’

I logged in and opened my e-mail account to look at everything there. To my surprise I had received a lot of e-mails since I had last checked. I remembered I hadn’t e-mailed my parents much of an update so I figured that would have to happen tonight since I had some time before bed still. I noticed though that there was an e-mail from ‘Dr. Og Wernstrom’ who had proctored the test earlier and curiously opened it up.

‘Good evening Ms. Westerfield,

I wish to inform you that I have graded your test and I have some concerns. I would like to meet with you, your mother, your advisor Dr. Butler, and Dean Sanders tomorrow at 1pm. Dean Sanders and Dr. Butler have already indicated they will be able to attend, please let me know as soon as possible if you are able to make the meeting,

Dr. Og Wernstrom

Associate Professor

Computer Science

Emerson University’

 

‘Great…’ I thought, ‘either I completely bombed it, or blew it away and they’re sure I cheated…’

I figured Amanda was probably feeding Bella still so I decided to wait until she came back in to worry about that e-mail. Another university wide e-mail informed me that my math placement test could be in a different location and I needed to check a chart by last name. To my relief the letters ‘Q-Z’ were being moved to the lecture hall in the Kilby building, so I’d be just downstairs from Amanda’s office again. The test was set to begin at 10am, so that would be plenty of time to get there and wake up.

I looked through the other e-mails and saw a campus wide alert had gone out about our incident earlier. I clicked it and saw my sketch and information to stay on the lookout for anyone suspicious on campus. If spotted we were to call the security extension immediately! I was curious then to see if there was anything on the local news about it, but was disappointed that none of the local sites seemed to be carrying information on it. ‘Must be trying to avoid bad press for the university…’ I decided with a shake of my head knowing that many times universities would sweep problems under the carpet.

I clicked through a few other messages that really weren’t important before starting an e-mail response to my mom’s from the other day.

 

‘Hi Mom,

I don’t know if I’ll have time to type up everything that’s happened since last Friday - but I’ll try. I know Amanda is probably coming to give my bath soon, so sorry if this ends up short! The last two days have definitely not been dull, and neither was the weekend!

I think I mentioned a little bit about it in my last e-mail, but Friday when we were on the plane to the city, Selegansol, a little sat down next to us. For the most part, if my hair is covered, my new appearance lets me blend in as a regular Amazon newborn. Amanda had kept me in a sling and hidden me as one most of the time going through the airport, so that way I didn’t draw extra attention and taunts. The little just glanced at us, but otherwise kept to herself, when she sat down. About midway through the flight one of the stewardesses gave her a hard time about not drinking the cup in front of her, and pretty much forced her to drink it. I kind of guessed, and rightly, that it was spiked with something! I didn’t want to see her ambushed like that, so I quickly gave her an antidote medicine that Fred has disguised into an easy to hide form for me. Amanda let her know I wasn’t a regular baby then and began talking to her in whispers. She made a quick decision to try and help the girl, and Bella decided to let her help her when she realized her other options were worse.

In the end Bella verbally had to give Amanda permission to adopt her to protect herself. Amanda then made the stewardess give her a diaper that would fit her, and put on her in the bathroom. It was supposed to just be a ruse to get her off the plane and safe, but in the airport Bella saw the stewardess and another woman talking with the man that had been her contact for a clothing deal she’d been trying to make. She was completely devastated by that fact! It became apparent that she had been lured with a fake business deal to catch her… We quickly discovered there was a pretty significant group behind it, so we ended up going to an adoption center and making Bella my ‘sister’ officially to protect her.

After all of that we ended up at a hotel that basically is the Disney World of this dimension. Apparently LooneyTunes got the park here, and Disney’s just movies and toys. It was fun that next couple days going around and I was actually able to get into a tank and go swimming with these massive dolphins! I’ll have to get a picture from Amanda to send you… It was a blast! Sunday we ended up enjoying their waterpark and I was given permission to swim without the floaties littles usually have to wear, and in the regular pool that most littles get into…

Oh yeah… that’s because we kind of had a couple more run-ins with that group that tried to kidnap Bella. They’re not a good group of people and we had some more excitement with them. The park provided us security though to the airport and we hoped we left our problems there. We did run into them again there, but Amanda was amazing and took care of the problem and security took them away.

On Monday Fred and Amanda’s dad moved Bella out of her apartment, while Amanda got me situated on campus with my student ID and went to the first Little orientation event. I also got assigned a ‘Nest’ so that I’m sort of a part of the littles dorm even though I don’t live there. I’ve made a couple other friends that are sort of my size… actually even the shortest of them is still almost two heads taller than me… I wish I knew why I shrank so much!

Today we went and got…

 

I was typing still when Amanda came in, “Mommy?”

“You about ready for your bath?”

“Actually before that can we talk and you maybe let me have some copies of some pictures before I send an e-mail to my mom?”

She looked at her watch and shrugged, “Sure, what about?”

“Well first did you see the e-mail from Doctor Wernstrom?”

“No?”

I minimized my current e-mail and pulled that one up.

“What in the world?” she said squinting at the small font. “It sounds like he thinks you cheated?”

“I know… do you think he thinks you coached me beforehand?”

She shrugged, “It’s possible, but I didn’t do anything more than talk about coding languages with you. You’re just naturally one of the best student coders I’ve seen.”

I blushed, “Thanks…” I timidly asked, “Do you think I’ll be in trouble?”

“Well to manage to cheat on that test would be really tough! You’d have to be an amazing hacker and have gotten access to it in advance,” she glared at me, “which I know you actually are, but they don’t!” I giggled, “And a memory beyond even yours I think! Also, I’ve never actually had much of a reason to be involved with them other than to write the AI problem.”

“That one may be the problem though?” I asked.

“Did you solve it?”

I shrugged, “I think so?”

“Hopefully he brings a printout of your test and I’ll be able to show him some reasons it’s your work. You have a lot of quirks I’ve noticed in your code that still leave it functional, but aren’t standard practices here. Really you’re like a dinosaur with most of your code!”

I stuck my tongue out at her, “I know, that’s why I’m here!”

“Okay, you said you wanted pictures?”

“Me with the dolphin? Maybe one from earlier with our new haircuts so I can show her who I’m talking about with Bella?”

She nodded, “Give me a few minutes and I’ll e-mail you those. It’ll be a bit quicker…”

“Thanks!” I said and went back to my e-mail.

 

Today we went to get Bella and my hair styled in the morning. I’m attaching a picture so you can see my new haircut and what Bella looks like. I really like my hair! I mean I know I still look like I’m in elementary school, but at least it is an improvement over daycare bound? Which unfortunately I think describes Bella’s haircut…

Unfortunately things seem to be continuing with whoever we made mad, so Bella has volunteered to play baby more… I’m not sure how I feel about it – but I am sure it’s nothing Amanda is forcing her into at least… It’s weird that I’ve only been here a few weeks and already feel a bit jealous about someone else moving into my space! Guess being an only child couldn’t last in both dimensions!

This afternoon after a university luncheon (you should see the size of crab legs here!!!!) I took my placement test for computer science. I felt like I did pretty well and I have a feeling I’m one of the very few who finished the test today. Not sure anyone else did actually… I just barely clicked submit before it ended, so hopefully it was okay. There was an email from the proctor though that wants to meet with Amanda, my advisor, little’s dean, and myself tomorrow. That part sounds odd and I just hope everything is okay. I’m personally guessing he’s going to have some bias that there’s no way a little could have completed the test without cheating… I’m REALLY glad I have Amanda in my court though! I know she’ll make things work out!

 

“Check your e-mail sweetie,” Amanda said as she patted my head, “then wrap up your e-mail and let’s get you in the bath.”

“Kay Mommy,” I told her. I minimized the window and found her e-mailed pictures.

I hadn’t had a chance to see the pictures of me and Suzy swimming, but Fred had clearly outdone himself and gotten some amazing ones! I immediately decided that one with me holding onto Suzies fin leaping out of the water was my favorite! My face and smile were fully visible - and it would be my new profile picture if I ever did social media stuff in this dimension! I selected that one, one with Amanda and I and our dolphins, one with all of us plus the characters before dinner, and then one that Amanda had taken with both Bella and I that morning with our haircuts. I quickly compressed them a bit more for the trip through the dimensional link, before I attached them to the e-mail.

 

Amanda just sent me those pictures and I’ve attached them. I think you’ll be aweing a bit. I need to go now, I’ll e-mail you again when I get a chance. Not sure what the next couple days will be like.

Love you!

Stacy

 

I clicked send and saw Amanda waiting for me, “Ready?”

I nodded, “Thanks for being patient.”

“I know you had a lot to tell your mom,” she said as she took my closed laptop from me, my cord off the chair, and then released me from the highchair. As she picked me up she gave me a squeeze, “I love you Princess, I want you to know that. You’ve only been here a short while but I can’t imagine what life will be like without you.”

I smiled at her, “I love you too Mommy,” and returned the hug.

She carried me to the bathroom and I chose to use the diaper for what little urine I had and realized she’d never brought a bottle to me and I was really thirsty. “I’m thirsty…” I told her.

“Oops… I never brought you a bottle,” she said, “I’m so sorry…”

“Any chance you could get me something before the bath? I really am thirsty…”

She stood back up from where she’d been about to set me down and carried me downstairs to the kitchen. From the fridge she pulled out a juice bottle that had already been poured and handed it to me, “Here you go sweetie.” She began walking upstairs while I was drinking out of it still. I was so thirsty I had about three-quarters of it gone before we got back to the bathroom. “You really did need something, I’m so sorry I forgot about you baby,” she told me with a squeeze.

I pulled it out of my mouth, “It’s okay, I know Bella distracted you.”

She hugged me and sighed, “We’re both going to have to get used to me having two girls to care for.”

I nodded and she grabbed the bottle from me and pulled my jumper over my head, top over my head, then pulled the tapes of my diaper open while I stood and she wiped me real quick with a wipe. “Can you take off your socks while I check the water?” She asked me.

I nodded and pulled them off leaving me naked for a moment.

“Let’s put this shower cap on your hair,” she told me, “it’ll make getting ready tomorrow a bit easier.”

I nodded and after she placed it on my head she plunked me into the bath.

“Water okay?” She asked me.

I nodded and let her begin to wash me. She was gentle and thorough as always and asked, “I’m trying to remember, what’s tomorrow’s schedule?”

“It should have just been my math test and a visit with my advisor maybe? He hadn’t sent me an e-mail yet?”

“But now we have the meeting with everyone…”

“Yeah,” I sighed. “Do you think I’m in big trouble?”

She shook her head, “You didn’t cheat. There are cameras running to make sure you weren’t looking around at other students. You turned your phone off, right?”

I nodded, “I didn’t even have it – you had it,” and thought for a second, “I didn’t my watch though?”

She shook her head, “You and I both know it can make video phone calls, but it’s something that would have been obvious to everyone. The video will show you weren’t looking at it either. It’s a protective measure for you as a little so I don’t think they’d have any ability to say anything.”

I nodded, “Hope your right.”

“The worst thing they could say is that I somehow pre-taught you the exam, but like I said – you do weird things with code that are uniquely Stacy. I read the e-mail and responded myself that we would be there. When I did I saw Doctor Butler listed too - which is a good thing. He knows my code and after ten seconds of looking at yours he’ll know it wasn’t mine.”

“Anyway it’s just the test tomorrow otherwise? There’s a movie night at 9pm, but of course that’s not for the littles.”

“It’s so unfair that the littles get to miss all of the best parts of college orientation!” Amanda said sadly. “We could have our own movie night tomorrow night if you wanted?”

“Really?”

“Make it a pool party and invite Megan?” She suggested.

“How about your parents too?”

She shook her head, “If I invite them it’s a family rule I can’t only invite one sister along… So I’d have to invite Cassie and Chloe.”

“Yuck,” I said. “Just Megan then!”

“You can show her your big girl bed then!” She smiled at me.

“Why didn’t you buy another crib?” I asked.

“I told you earlier… as much as it goes against my instincts - I have to let you grow up some. The original plan was to convert your crib into the toddler bed last week.”

“What happened?” I asked curiously.

She flushed and looked embarrassed, “It was too easy to want to just keep you safe in a crib? Every instinct of my being wants to just keep you as a baby… This weekend reminded me more of the stakes.”

“What about Bella?” I asked.

“Once things cool off again I’ll ask her if she would be happier in a big girl bed too.” She shook her head, “I have a feeling though she’ll tell me she’d rather keep the crib though.”

“That’s weird…” I told her. “Is she at least going to be able to play with her sewing stuff at all?”

Amanda shook her head, “Not until things cool down a bit. Once it does maybe we can set her up to do it if your Daddy or I can watch her.”

“I feel bad for her,” I told her, “But I’m also jealous…”

“I know, I read over your shoulder… I’m sorry.”

“Do I have to be a big girl all of the time at home?”

“For a while I think that’s a good idea Stacy… I’d put you in training panties at home if they made them small enough for you.”

I laughed at her, “They barely make diapers small enough for me!”

“You know I think Madison kind of did feel bad for you,” she told me.

“Given she didn’t mess with me in any other way I think you’re right…”

“Come on sweetheart, let’s get you out of the tub now before you shrivel up into a raisin.”

“Not that!” I told her as she pulled the plug and wrapped me in a towel. She sat me down on the counter for a moment and handed me a toothbrush to use. As I brushed my teeth she pulled the shower cap off of my head and pushed my hair behind my ears to keep me from getting toothpaste on it. I spit out the toothpaste and she handed me a cup to rinse out before I spit again.

“Let’s get you dressed for bed then,” she told me with a smile.

She quietly carried me into the nursery, which was lit only by a couple nightlights, with Bella’s snores surprisingly loud right then. Silently she dressed me in a thick princess diaper and pulled one of my pink nightgowns over my head before carrying me back out into the hallway and downstairs. I had a moment of hoping that maybe she would let me nurse from her, but that was quickly dashed as she picked up a warmed bottle that had to be plain old milk.

I sighed and she squeezed me tight, “I promise I’ll let you nurse Friday night,” knowing the problem, “if you can make it through Saturday without a poopy accident we’ll do it again Saturday night too.”

“So we can get back to bedtime?” I asked hopefully.

“I hope so,” she told me with a smile, “but if it does anything with your control over your poopy we have to stop. Hopefully it won’t be too late for you by the time we realize that.”

That made me think of the littles departing earlier, “I think there will be some poopy littles in the dorms tonight…”

“Why do you say that?”

I sighed, “I’m pretty sure someone spiked the punch at dinner.”

Amanda sighed, “Sounds about right… Well, as long as they have a pull-up or a diaper on tonight they’re okay.”

“Tomorrow during the test they won’t be though? That counts as in class?”

“No, they won’t…” she said softly as she carried me to the rocking chair, and gathering me up in a blanket that she had draped on the chair.

I felt calm and relaxed as she sat down and eased me into her arms and laid me back to hold the bottle to my lips. I made no motion to hold it myself and just suckled it gently as she began to hum a sweet lullaby.

 

‘WHAT THE HELL is that!’ was my next thought as a loud siren klaxon rang through the air. I sat up in my new bed and saw Bella looking terrified in the crib. I heard a car screech away and suddenly Amanda was in the room grabbing first me, then Bella, into her arms!

“It’s okay,” she shushed us as she then hurried to their bedroom and shut that door, locking it behind her.

“What’s going on?” I asked her.

“That’s the intruder alarm.”

Sirens filled the night as she took us into their walk-in closet and sat down. Bella began whimpering and having a full blown panic attack then while I just wondered why I hadn’t grabbed my switch. ‘What would a shrunken 9mm even do to an Amazon?’ I wondered darkly. ‘I need to do something else with it in case something like this happens again…’

As Bella cried fairly quietly, Amanda wrapped us into a protective hug and said, “shush, it’s okay…”

As the door to the closet suddenly opened I smelt a smell telling me that Bella had another reason to cry now. I looked up, afraid it would be an unknown attacker, but instead it was just Fred, who knelt down and wrapped us all in a hug.

“It’s okay girls,” he said while wiping off tears from my face that I didn’t know I had, “the police are here. They’re looking around downstairs and want to speak with us too.”

“Okay,” Amanda said, her voice a little shaky, “you want to take Stacy. I’m going to need to change Bella before we go downstairs.”

Bella was hiccoughing non-stop all of the sudden and I wondered if there was any point into bringing her down at all. Fred took me and gave me a tight squeeze, “It’s okay,” he told me as he and Amanda split up at the staircase. Downstairs I could see that someone had smashed through the glass of the back door. It seemed clear to me that they had shattered the glass, tried to get in, and then were being frightened off by the alarm sounding.

“I thought the backyard was supposed to be covered now with some new sensors…?” I whispered to him.

He squeezed me tight, “It’s supposed to be, and that is a good question,” he told me. “I’m not sure how they got around that grid.”

Several cops were walking around with flashlights looking everywhere. “Sir, you have a pretty sophisticated system here, do you have cameras hooked up by chance?” A young officer asked.

Fred sat me down in the playpen and grabbed for his phone. ‘Gee thanks…’ I thought as I was penned away like some dumb baby then and sat down with a sigh. “Here you go officer,” he said as he played a video with sound that I could hear glass break on, then the alarm went off.

“They’re all wearing masks…” the officer frowned. “And gloves it looks like too…”

“I doubt we find much Rookie,” an older officer said. “Go look around the other side of the fence. Maybe someone dropped something before they hopped over.”

“Yes sir,” he said and walked away.

Amanda came down about then with Bella swaddled tightly in a light blanket. She cuddled her in her arms like a small infant closer to my size. She’d thrown a robe on too before coming down. “Sir, I noticed as we looked at your address that it seems like there was an incident this afternoon with your wife and daughter?”

Fred nodded, “Amanda was with Stacy at the university and someone shoved her down and tried to grab Stacy and run with her.”

“The school gave us a sketch,” he said while opening up the tablet he had for notes, “was this her?”

“Yes that’s the drawing my daughter gave.”

“Well it looks like she’s been identified but not picked up yet…” he said and walked over to me, “Is this her?” He leaned over the rail of the playpen and showed me a picture of the same woman that Amanda had identified earlier.

“Yes sir,” I said, “who is she?” I asked to pretend I didn’t know yet.

“Her name is Serena Ricci, and she’s a bad lady,” he told me like I was an idiot.

“I got that part when she tried to kidnap me and scramble my brains officer.” I glared at him.

Fred reached back over and picked me up from the playpen. I think he did so to keep me from jumping over the rail and decking the cop!

“Sorry, I guess you would have, huh?”

“Excuse me?” A woman detective asked towards Fred mainly, “Did you just have one security system or two?”

“It’s actually three,” Amanda told her.

“Three systems?” she asked in surprise, “Why?”

“Just a hunch,” Fred told them. “When we adopted our baby girl over here this weekend we seem to have gotten a group angry at us.”

A knocking on the front door interrupted anything else they would have said. “Excuse me,” Fred said and I sat in his arms as he peeked through the peephole for a second and then opened up the door.

“Hi Joe,” he told Grandpa who had shown up.

“What the hell happened?” He asked.

I watched the lead detective gulp before he reached his hand out and said, “Hey Joe, how are you doing?”

“Pretty good Jake, except this crap happening to my daughter!” He looked at the back door and then at us, “Is everyone okay?”

“Yes Daddy,” Amanda told him as he gave her and Bella a hug.

He gave me a friendly wave before saying, “Your video cameras get anything?”

“Not anything usable…” Amanda said.

“I’m going to go back and look at the backyard myself. How did they get past that system?”

“I think the detective here was about to tell us that Joe,” Fred said.

He looked at the detective who had been asking questions and she seemed to gulp nervously before saying, “It looks like they managed to splice the power line and feed over on the system that was on the exterior. I think they believed they’d knocked down the whole system, but Ma’am you said you had two other systems?”

“Yes, redundancies just in case…” Amanda looked nervous, “I never would have dreamed they’d be needed though. That first layer is not your average system…”

“Let me go take a look at it,” Joe said and I watched as he left the room.

“Joe’s your dad?” The older detective asked Amanda.

“Yes sir, he is, how do you know him?”

“He’s helped us out a number of times over the years. I also sparred with him during a training seminar he did one time when I was younger and dumber… Didn’t make that mistake again!”

Amanda laughed, “He’s pretty intense.”

There was another thirty minutes taken up of questions and signing of a report then. When they left at about 3am with a promise of extra patrols it was just a relief to get them out of the house. Fred and Amanda still held us, although Bella had long since succumbed to her stress and went to sleep in her arms. My body was having the opposite reaction and as Joe came in it didn’t help when he said, “Mandy, I don’t know how we’re going to stop these guys… they’re not amateurs.”

“What did you find Dad?” she asked.

“Why don’t you put the girls back to bed first and then come to look with me?”

“Can I come?” I asked.

He looked at me oddly but nodded, “She might see something else I don’t too.”

Amanda whispered to Fred, “Here, can you put Bella back in her crib and I’ll take Stacy?”

“Sure,” he said and they performed a baby swap maneuver that was more than a little awkward for me, but Bella never stirred. “I’ll stay upstairs with her until you get done.”

“Thanks honey, I’m guessing she’ll be a little upset when she wakes up again.”

Amanda stood and watched him go upstairs for a moment before readjusting me on her hip and saying, “What did you find?”

“Over here,” he said as he led out the broken glass door. At the edge of the closes fence post to the house you could see they’d pulled a board away and accessed a cable running along it for one set of motion sensors. Some alligator clips were visibly still hanging onto the line. “I think this was their first point of entry,” he said.

“Makes sense…” she said as she examined it, “Not bad actually… but that only got that side of the yard down…”

“They hit the system control panel over here next,” he told her.

A gray box concealed some of the guts of the new system. As she came up to it I could see a little black cube hooked into it with some leads of some sort sticking out.

“What is it?” I asked.

“I don’t actually know Stacy… You Dad?”

He nodded, “It’s military grade equipment – we give them to our special ops people for when they run into systems like this.”

“Shit…” Amanda said. “How can they be this pissed off about one little?”

“There’s got to be something more going on here…” Joe said.

“Is this booby trapped?” She asked him as she pointed to the device.

“They didn’t used to be,” he told her. “Be careful…” he warned.

Amanda sat me down on the ground and used her fingers to pull the little device loose. When nothing happened except the alarm starting to beep we all breathed a sigh of relief.

“Come on, let’s get you both back inside. Do you want to come over to our house tonight to sleep?”

“Daddy I have two babies…”

“We still have a crib upstairs in the nursery they could use?”

Amanda shook her head, “It’s not like we have a long time to sleep now anyway. I’m going to put this one back in her bed now, so she get some sleep before her math exam.”

I groaned, “Why couldn’t they have picked another night to do this stuff?”

“Well Stacy, as soon as I figure out who’s behind this there’s going to be some hell to pay from me. No one messes with my family and gets away with it!”

“Thanks Daddy,” Amanda said at the bottom of the stairs. “I’ll send Fred down so he can help you figure out the door in a moment.”

“Sounds good,” he said.

“Come on Princess,” she told me and carried me up the stairs. She walked down the hallway to her workshop first though and put the cube in a box that she had.

“What’s that?” I asked her sleepily.

“Souped up Faraday cage,” she told me. “Just in case it’s more than it obviously is. It’s also thick enough that if it’s an explosive the box should contain it…”

“That’s a pleasant thought…” I said as she carried me into the nursery. Fred was watching over a sleeping Bella from the rocking chair as we came in.

Amanda felt my diaper, decided it needed changed, and walked over to the changing table to quickly change me into another of the princess diapers. “Try and get some sleep if you can,” she whispered as she tucked me in my new toddler bed. Something about not having the rails actually made me more nervous about everything.

“Mommy?” I asked.

“Yes sweetie?”

“Paci?”

She smiled and found one that she placed in my mouth before kissing me on the forehead and said, “Good night, we’ll keep you safe – I promise!”

“Lub you,” I told her around the pacifier and watched as she and walked away.

“Love you too baby,” she told me.

I tossed and turned for a long while then. Between Bella’s occasional whimpers, other sounds in the house, and everything it took me a long while to fall asleep in my new bed. The last time I looked at the clock it said 5:30am.


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Yeah, something tells me Stacy would need some heavier ordnance to seriously harm an Amazon, not some "piddly" 9mm. ...How effective against Amazons would a couple of the Halo-verse's overpowered (to deal with 8-foot-tall, super-strong, energy-shielded & power-armored aliens) guns be - the M6 pistol with its 12.7x40mm armor-piercing exploding rounds, or the M90 shotgun with its 8-guage magnum buckshot?

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53 minutes ago, DKN117 said:

Yeah, something tells me Stacy would need some heavier ordnance to seriously harm an Amazon, not some "piddly" 9mm. ...How effective against Amazons would a couple of the Halo-verse's overpowered (to deal with 8-foot-tall, super-strong, energy-shielded & power-armored aliens) guns be - the M6 pistol with its 12.7x40mm armor-piercing exploding rounds, or the M90 shotgun with its 8-guage magnum buckshot?

i mean the amazon are big but their still basically human so a civilian would still likely stunned by shocked and pain. although getting lethal pen without a precisely targeted shot would be more difficult. personally if i had to go to this dimension for any reason  i'd probably carry an all composite 10mm casseless holdout. 4 barrels with 5 ceramic in each. electric mechanism and novel explosives allows for high velocity and variable rate of fire. i'd also have a few ceramic coated composite knives soaked in a paralytic and telescoping stun baton for cqb.

 

or actually for the knives it think the best thing would be something like fentanyl or one those other high powered synthetic opioides in dmso, some of them can knock an elephant on it's ass and actually be an inhalation hazard to humans and canines

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And the story thinken.  Two attempts in one day make you wonder if it is even safe for Stacy to go to school.  I have a feeling that the short night will have an effect on Stacy math test tomorrow and not in a good way either.  Well there goes every one perfect potty charts, hopefully it will be through their system come time to take the math test.  All I can say is please put out the next chapter, I’m can’t wait to see what you have planned to happen next.

47 minutes ago, ThomasG said:

A 9mm is sufficient, three to the chest, and any target will go down with either burst lungs or a burst heart. 

It was implied that Amazons have tougher skin when Fred told Stacy that little couldn’t hurt Amazon’s with their teeth no matter how hard they bite down while feeding. I would like to think that a 9mm would have an effect on an Amazon, however we do not know how shrinking the gun when Stacy came through the portal had on the power of the shoots.  They might only be like bee stings to an Amazon.

 

 

 

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54 minutes ago, Baby Pal said:

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It was implied that Amazons have tougher skin when Fred told Stacy that little couldn’t hurt Amazon’s with their teeth no matter how hard they bite down while feeding. I would like to think that a 9mm would have an effect on an Amazon, however we do not know how shrinking the gun when Stacy came through the portal had on the power of the shoots.  They might only be like bee stings to an Amazon.

 

It will still be effective if nothing else due to hydrostatic shock...

One of the things that concerns me though is that if this organization is known to be as powerful and as resourceful as they are, there should already be a dedicated task force in place monitoring for them.  In fact the second incident might not even be related to the first... the comment about the AI alogorythm caught my attention.  What if there is a second player out there that is more interested in what she can do for them?

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That was s very intense chapter. I saw it had been added and had to stay up and read it even though I haven’t gotten but 4 hours of sleep since Wednesday morning. It was so worth it though. Loving the story. I really have no idea what it is going to take to take down this group. I am sure it’s going to involve outsmarting them. It’s not firepower that is going to do the trick.  I was also happily surprised that I was still able to give it a like. I was sure I was out for the day.  I am already anticipating the next chapter. 

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4 hours ago, Samriis said:

It will still be effective if nothing else due to hydrostatic shock...

You need 7.62x61mm for killing someone by hydrostatic shock alone via a single bullet, do recall Andrew Jackson survived a shot from Mr. Burr that just barely missed his heart. The M-16's oft derided 5.56x45mm round may not have the penetration of other rounds, but its tendency to fragment on hitting soft tissue will sever numerous blood vessels and cause fatal internal bleeding that is very difficult if not impossible to fix even with rapid medical care. Also bullet type matters. Much of the problems with the M-16's alleged lack of stopping power comes from soldiers carrying AP rounds into combat against unarmored foes hopped up on combat drugs, instead of normal rounds.

Now given even the Taliban are now running around with body armor, helmets, NVGs, and actually aiming and using proper fireteam tactics (7 years after ISIS figured it out but still), Stacey may need to re-evaluate her plans. Her best option may be a poison needle against an armored target attempting to grab her. A hairpin would be a good way to delivered the coated poison, but that requires training and discipline. An Epipen type device is another way. 

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4 hours ago, ThomasG said:

You need 7.62x61mm for killing someone by hydrostatic shock alone via a single bullet, do recall Andrew Jackson survived a shot from Mr. Burr that just barely missed his heart. The M-16's oft derided 5.56x45mm round may not have the penetration of other rounds, but its tendency to fragment on hitting soft tissue will sever numerous blood vessels and cause fatal internal bleeding that is very difficult if not impossible to fix even with rapid medical care. Also bullet type matters. Much of the problems with the M-16's alleged lack of stopping power comes from soldiers carrying AP rounds into combat against unarmored foes hopped up on combat drugs, instead of normal rounds.

Now given even the Taliban are now running around with body armor, helmets, NVGs, and actually aiming and using proper fireteam tactics (7 years after ISIS figured it out but still), Stacey may need to re-evaluate her plans. Her best option may be a poison needle against an armored target attempting to grab her. A hairpin would be a good way to delivered the coated poison, but that requires training and discipline. An Epipen type device is another way. 

To keep it simple let’s say Stacy is 1/2 her original size 6’ down to 3’, so if the gun shrunk about the same amount 9mm is now about the size of 4.5mm.  How large of hydrostatic shock are you going to get?  Will that be able to do enough damage on a larger person which can disperse the force over a greater area, reducing the amount of damage that the Amazon would get if the were a regular person.

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11 hours ago, DKN117 said:

Yeah, something tells me Stacy would need some heavier ordnance to seriously harm an Amazon, not some "piddly" 9mm. ...

I think it's going to be a case of brains over brawn when it matters. Definitely doesn't help that 9mm had to shrink with her when she arrived! 

 

10 hours ago, YourFNF said:

i mean the amazon are big but their still basically human so a civilian would still likely stunned by shocked and pain.

I think you're right about an average Amazon trying to kidnap her on the street. The people they're dealing with have either had military training, or at the very least training from the hard knock school of life...

9 hours ago, Baby Pal said:

And the story thinken.  Two attempts in one day make you wonder if it is even safe for Stacy to go to school.  I have a feeling that the short night will have an effect on Stacy math test tomorrow and not in a good way either.  Well there goes every one perfect potty charts, hopefully it will be through their system come time to take the math test.  All I can say is please put out the next chapter, I’m can’t wait to see what you have planned to happen next.

 

Stacy definitely isn't safe... but she's not anywhere in this dimension.

9 hours ago, huntercd76 said:

This is getting intense, I wonder how Bella and Stacy will deal with the stress?

Good question :)

 

9 hours ago, SGTbaby said:

Love it and all the excitement 

Thanks for the comment! Glad you're enjoying it!

8 hours ago, CDfm said:

That was s very intense chapter. I saw it had been added and had to stay up and read it even though I haven’t gotten but 4 hours of sleep since Wednesday morning. It was so worth it though. Loving the story. I really have no idea what it is going to take to take down this group. I am sure it’s going to involve outsmarting them. It’s not firepower that is going to do the trick.  I was also happily surprised that I was still able to give it a like. I was sure I was out for the day.  I am already anticipating the next chapter. 

Thanks for the like -  who knows on taking them down!

4 hours ago, ThomasG said:

You need 7.62x61mm for killing someone by hydrostatic shock alone via a single bullet, do recall Andrew Jackson survived a shot from Mr. Burr that just barely missed his heart. The M-16's oft derided 5.56x45mm round may not have the penetration of other rounds, but its tendency to fragment on hitting soft tissue will sever numerous blood vessels and cause fatal internal bleeding that is very difficult if not impossible to fix even with rapid medical care. Also bullet type matters. Much of the problems with the M-16's alleged lack of stopping power comes from soldiers carrying AP rounds into combat against unarmored foes hopped up on combat drugs, instead of normal rounds.

Now given even the Taliban are now running around with body armor, helmets, NVGs, and actually aiming and using proper fireteam tactics (7 years after ISIS figured it out but still), Stacey may need to re-evaluate her plans. Her best option may be a poison needle against an armored target attempting to grab her. A hairpin would be a good way to delivered the coated poison, but that requires training and discipline. An Epipen type device is another way. 

I agree it's not going to just be a single bullet to fix her problems... especially with the shrinking of the weapon that occurred! 

 

 

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5 minutes ago, Baby Pal said:

To keep it simple let’s say Stacy is 1/2 her original size 6’ down to 3’, that would imply that the 9mm is now about the size of 4.5mm how large of hydrostatic shock are you going to get.  Will that be able to do enough damage on a larger person which can disperse the force over a greater area, reducing the amount of damage that the Amazon would get if the were a regular person.

Against an Amazon, I'm toting a shotgun with buckshot for close range as it would be the equivalent of putting 9 9mm rounds into their body. Otherwise a high capacity magazine 9mm handgun is a must for putting multiple rounds into them rapidly in three-shot grouping in the chest and to the head.

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