diaper Dropped in a new world. - ch 43 (2/27/21)

[Wannatripbaby]

6 minutes ago, redwelch2222 said:

ya, it's his birthday coming up and as a little gift, I added him to the story.

And a marvelous birthday present this was.

I haven't actually read this full chapter yet (just the rough draft you sent me.) So I'll read and comment on it tomorrow. It's been a long day and I just don't feel like reading at the moment.

[redwelch2222]

6 hours ago, Wannatripbaby said:

And a marvelous birthday present this was.

I haven't actually read this full chapter yet (just the rough draft you sent me.) So I'll read and comment on it tomorrow. It's been a long day and I just don't feel like reading at the moment.

lol glad you liked it.

cant wait to see what you think.

[Jayme]

One question, why are Alex's skills being scrambled?

[PinkTheDinosaur]

6 hours ago, Jayme said:

One question, why are Alex's skills being scrambled?

I think its a way to show how much he's losing control. 

[redwelch2222]

9 hours ago, Jayme said:

One question, why are Alex's skills being scrambled?

what pink said. thinking of doing codes in it or something later.

[redwelch2222]

important message!!!!!

 

this is very important to the story! I finally found someone to help me with my spelling and grammar! WOOOO!

so, now that ill be having some help, i was looking back at the early parts of the story and thinking, "this could use a bit of rewriting." so, now that I have some help I will be reposting this entire story(again). 

so, this means the main story will be put on hold for a little while as we work on the story once more. while it might be a little inconvenient, I think overall people will enjoy the fixed story. ill keep you all updated when I know more.

[redwelch2222]

 

[redwelch2222]

ok, so a few people have been messaging me about "Dropped in a new world."

they are asking why I haven't posted a new chapter, or whats taking so long.

if you don't already know, I'm reposting all of my old chapters with a lot of fixed spelling and grammar with some added details here and there that I didn't do before or fixed to plot points I needed to fix. (thank you again R682 for all your help!)

now re-editing my story doesn't take that much time. about half an hour to an hour per chapter depending on what I do with it.

but I'm also busy with some other stuff. 
first is my full-time job. with summer so close I've been working more hours and have less time then I would like to work on my stories. (hence why most of them are on hiatus at the moment...)

I am also looking into Artist and Manga/comic makers in hopes to make "Dropped into a new world" into a comic or manga. (i would prefer manga.) the prices for them are very high and I want to find the right one before I go spending a lot of money on art.
(also, before anyone says anything about go fund me, I would at least like a single chapter done first to show what the manga would be like before I start asking for help for it.)

also, for helping me with spellchecking my work, I've been helping R682 with one of his projects. along with a few other people I've been helping out such as Pinkthedinosaur.

so this is why I haven't posted a new chapter in a while. (there's also some personal things that have happened in my life, like a random baby walking into my house...) 

but I am happy to say, CH 33 will be made this week. I'm getting a few days off and I'm caught up on a lot of my works so ill finally be able to continue the story! 

its been killing me not being able to work on this story since I really want to get to the good stuff and finish this ark. 

also, since this might be a good time to bring it up, I am currently planning a MASSIVE event as soon as this arc ends. currently, I have talked to Pink and Wannatribaby about it and so far they are willing to help me. but I would like a little help from you all. 

currently, I am looking for diaper stories with action, adventure, and or magic. if you know of stories like that, or know someone who is writing a story like that, please tell me. if posable I would like to get more people into this event when it gets here.

[Wannatripbaby]

4 hours ago, redwelch2222 said:

but I am happy to say, CH 33 will be made this week. I'm getting a few days off and I'm caught up on a lot of my works so ill finally be able to continue the story! 

PRAISE THE LAW-DAH! 

4 hours ago, redwelch2222 said:

currently, I am looking for diaper stories with action, adventure, and or magic. if you know of stories like that, or know someone who is writing a story like that, please tell me. if posable I would like to get more people into this event when it gets here.

Well there's @Selpharia with "Of Capes, Cowls, and Cuddles." That's about as action-y as it gets.

There's also (can't remember the author's name) from "A Too Late Magical Girl." I read a few chapters of that one. And while I didn’t really like it, it definitely meets the criteria.

[ELLIE52]

29 minutes ago, Wannatripbaby said:

There's also (can't remember the author's name) from "A Too Late Magical Girl." I read a few chapters of that one. And while I didn’t really like it, it definitely meets the criteria.

InkuHime, author of the great diaper dimension classic "Chasing Emily."

[Guilend]

1 hour ago, Wannatripbaby said:

There's also (can't remember the author's name) from "A Too Late Magical Girl." I read a few chapters of that one. And while I didn’t really like it, it definitely meets the criteria.

Haha funny you mentioned this story. I stayed up till 1:30 this morning reading it. I couldn't stop till i had read all of the chapters. 

 

5 hours ago, redwelch2222 said:

but I am happy to say, CH 33 will be made this week. I'm getting a few days off and I'm caught up on a lot of my works so ill finally be able to continue the story!

Yaya I can't waot. When i first started reading this story, i was having a hard time getting into it, but once you got to the part where they first head out on their adventure the gamer in me just couldn't get enough of the monster hunting or the slime moster. Now i am hooked.

[Wannatripbaby]

50 minutes ago, Aries said:

Yaya I can't waot. When i first started reading this story, i was having a hard time getting into it, but once you got to the part where they first head out on their adventure the gamer in me just couldn't get enough of the monster hunting or the slime moster. Now i am hooked.

Same here. At first I was like "(sarcastically) great, another ABDL story in the style of a D&D-esque fantasy romp. How original. " But for whatever reason I was compelled to give it a shot. And BOY am I glad I did! I actually might not have ever joined DD if it weren't for this story! Or at the very least I certainly wouldn't have ever written Angel Hunter. And for that I will be forever greatful to @redwelch2222 

[PinkTheDinosaur]

7 hours ago, redwelch2222 said:

but I'm also busy with some other stuff. 
 first is my full-time job. with summer so close I've been working more hours and have less time then I would like to work on my stories. (hence why most of them are on hiatus at the moment...)

lol take your time ^.^ it's a great story but don't push yourself too much!

7 hours ago, redwelch2222 said:

I am also looking into Artist and Manga/comic makers in hopes to make "Dropped into a new world" into a comic or manga. (i would prefer manga.) the prices for them are very high and I want to find the right one before I go spending a lot of money on art

that's awesome! though I guess it would be hard to find someone willing to make a diaper manga without being paid a lot.

3 hours ago, Wannatripbaby said:

PRAISE THE LAW-DAH! 

lol who?

1 hour ago, Aries said:

Yaya I can't waot. When i first started reading this story, i was having a hard time getting into it, but once you got to the part where they first head out on their adventure the gamer in me just couldn't get enough of the monster hunting or the slime moster. Now i am hooked.

lol i think what makes it good is that it appeals to gamers for the game feel, but makes it simple so that anyone can read and still have an idea of whats going on. ^.^

1 hour ago, Wannatripbaby said:

Same here. At first I was like "(sarcastically) great, another ABDL story in the style of a D&D-esque fantasy romp. How original. " But for whatever reason I was compelled to give it a shot. And BOY am I glad I did! I actually might not have ever joined DD if it weren't for this story! Or at the very least I certainly wouldn't have ever written Angel Hunter. And for that I will be forever greatful to @redwelch2222 

lol this story is definitely a diamond in the rut! the first few chapters are a little hard to get through at first (the remake of the first chapter is much better!) but once you get past that it gets much better!

 

[Wannatripbaby]

27 minutes ago, PinkTheDinosaur said:

lol who?

It was supposed to be a funny way of saying PRAISE THE LORD! But I keep forgetting that most of you aren't religious. My bad. 

[PinkTheDinosaur]

1 hour ago, Wannatripbaby said:

It was supposed to be a funny way of saying PRAISE THE LORD! But I keep forgetting that most of you aren't religious. My bad. 

lol no i get it was a funny way of saying PRAISE THE LORD, i was just wondering what LAW-DAH was.

[redwelch2222]

5 hours ago, Wannatripbaby said:

PRAISE THE LAW-DAH! 

Well there's @Selpharia with "Of Capes, Cowls, and Cuddles." That's about as action-y as it gets.

There's also (can't remember the author's name) from "A Too Late Magical Girl." I read a few chapters of that one. And while I didn’t really like it, it definitely meets the criteria.

thank you for the suggestion! ill read the stories and if they're what I'm looking for then ill invite them!

5 hours ago, ELLIE52 said:

InkuHime, author of the great diaper dimension classic "Chasing Emily."

thank you for the suggestion 

4 hours ago, Aries said:

Yaya I can't waot. When i first started reading this story, i was having a hard time getting into it, but once you got to the part where they first head out on their adventure the gamer in me just couldn't get enough of the monster hunting or the slime moster. Now i am hooked.

3

sorry the beginning is a little hard to get into but I'm glad you gave the story a chance and continued to read

3 hours ago, Wannatripbaby said:

Same here. At first I was like "(sarcastically) great, another ABDL story in the style of a D&D-esque fantasy romp. How original. " But for whatever reason I was compelled to give it a shot. And BOY am I glad I did! I actually might not have ever joined DD if it weren't for this story! Or at the very least I certainly wouldn't have ever written Angel Hunter. And for that I will be forever greatful to @redwelch2222 

lol i remember when you told me that!  and im glad i helped you make Angel hunter. its a great story!

2 hours ago, PinkTheDinosaur said:

lol take your time ^.^ it's a great story but don't push yourself too much!

that's awesome! though I guess it would be hard to find someone willing to make a diaper manga without being paid a lot.

lol i think what makes it good is that it appeals to gamers for the game feel, but makes it simple so that anyone can read and still have an idea of whats going on. ^.^

 

6

thank you. i wont.

and ya, its expensive and i need to find at least one of them willing to add the diapers...

lol that's what i was going for.

[redwelch2222]

There was a flash of light that blinded both Alex and Bab.

“What the heck!” Bab yelled as she rubbed her eyes to get rid of the bright spots in her eyes. “What was that for!”

“Melanthe, are you sure now is a good time to test that?” Layna asked her sister.

“Better now than later.” Melanthe commented.

“Test what?” Bab yelled as her vision started to clear and she looked at Alex.

Alex stood motionless, his eyes not blinking.

“Alex?” Bab asked when suddenly Alex started screaming and clutching his head! “ALEX!”

Bab was about to run over to him, to try to see what was wrong when Layna appeared before her and grabbed her.

“Sorry, this has to be done,” Layna told Bab calmly.

“What has to be done!” Bab screamed despite no one being able to understand her.

Alex finally stopped screaming as he looked up with bloodshot eyes. The first person he saw was Melanthe.

Suddenly with more speed then Bab had ever seen posable from Alex, he lunged straight for Melanthe yelling like an animal.

Melanthe didn't flinch as Alex grew closer before her vampire guard got in front of her and using only his palms, shot Alex back and into a wall.

“ALEX!” Bab screamed as he got up and roared again.

But the roar was cut short as the werewolf guard grabbed Alex by the back of his head and smash it into the floor.

Bab couldn't stand it anymore and shocked Layna forcing her to let Bab go before she fired a bolt of electricity at the werewolf guard.

The guard leaped away as Bab ran over to check on Alex.

His face laid in a small puddle of blood before Bab rolled him over. He was unconscious but still breathing.

“I would say a 4 and a half.” Melanthe commented.

“What's going on!” Bab yelled as electricity started to surround her.

“Bab calm down.”  Melanthe told her. But instead, Bab raised and aimed her arm right at Melanthe. “Your friend is a ghoul and we needed to see how dangerous he would be as one.”

“My queen has only temporarily awakened his ghoul side. Should he blackout and release that side of him, we wanted to know what type of threat he is.” the vampire guard told Bab.

“You see, your friend is not the first to be infected by a ghoul. We need to see what type of threat they pose to others and asine guards to them to either restrain or kill if needed.” Melanthe told Bab.  

Bab still glared at her sister but stopped her electricity.

Bab turned to Alex and could see he was still breathing.

“You'll be escorted to your rooms for the night. We will talk more about this later.” Layna told Bab as walked over and placed a hand on Bab’s shoulder. “He'll be alright when he waked up.”

__________________

“And that's how we got here,” Bab explained.

“But why a jail cell?” I asked then looked around again.

While it was a jail cell, the bed I was on was definitely a lot nicer than what they would give a prisoner.

“It's for our protection,” Bab told me. She then stuck her hand out and started waving it.  “Gard! Can you let us out?”

A moment later a vampire came into view and gave us a small bow before unlocking the cells.

“I hope you have rested well.” the guard told us. “Queen Layna is currently waiting for you both in the throne room. Also, Sir Alex. it has been requested that you stay on a schedule with your pills and I must ask you take some now.”

“O-ok I will,” I told the guard who bowed again and went back to his post.

“My sisters asked him to take care of us here,” Bab explained as she walked into my cell and got on my bed. “The cells are to protect both of us should you have another episode. Keeping you contained here so you don't wander off and keeping me safely away so you don't accidentally hurt me.”

“Bab I wouldn't…” I started.

“I know, but it’s what my sisters think is best,” Bab told me with a slight smile on her face. “Anyway, the pills your taking should last for about 8 hours before the side effects kick in and you start hallucinating for about an hour.” 

“Ok, good to know,”I tell her as I take a pill right then. That's when the smell hits me and I know Bab’s in a dirty diaper. “Come on, let's get you changed real fast before we go see your sister.” 

After a change we are lead back to the throne room were only Layna and her guard sit on the throne.

“Where's Melanthe?” I asked as I looked around.

“Unlike the rest of our kind, my sister and I have unique bodies that need constant rest,” Layna told us. “So we take turns watching over our kingdom. From the hours of 7 AM to 5 PM I rule. That is when my sister awakens and for the next 2 hours we both rule until I go to sleep and my sister rules from 7 PM to 5 AM. then I will awake and the proses will start again.”

“But weren't you both awake when we got here?” I asked. 

“On special occasions, like when our sisters arrive, we will wake up early and disrupt the cycle,” Layna told us. “Now, before we do anything else…”

Layna then walked over and picked Bab up to hug and squeal as she exclaimed at how cute Bab was. Much to Bab’s announce.

Over the next few hours, we ate our meal (to us it was breakfast but it was hard to tell the time here.) and Layna absolutely insisted on feeding Bab and giving her a bottle.

I could only giggle at Babs frustration for being treated like a baby by her sister.

After that, we were finally introduced to the Layna’s guard Gideon.

For werewolves are far different than in my world. In my world, the person would turn into a monster during the full moon if they were bitten.

Here, when someone is bitten, they will slowly turn into wolf over the course of a month. And they would not be able to change back. Thankfully they keep their minds even in their new form.

During that of a full moon, however, they do turn into what we would call a werewolf. But will turn back to wolf when it's over.

They are also divided among classes.

Alphas are the 2 strongest in the pack. Which both Layna and Gideon are.

Unlike the other werewolves, the Alpha is the only one who is able to fully control their transformations and turn into a human form.

The only way to become an Alpha is to fight and kill the previous Alpha and eat there heart.

Beta’s are the next ones. They are typically the leaders of their packs under the Alpha and are able to transform into there werewolf forms at will.

Gamma is under them and is the most common. They can't transform at will but have control of themselves during a full moon.

Delta’s are the lowest and are humans who have only recently become a werewolf. They have no control over themselves during a full moon. 

Something I found very funny about Layna, and possibly Melanthe, is when they were behind closed doors they act far definitely than when they are seen by there subjects.

In the throne room they couldn't stop cuddling up to Bab, but as Layna gives us a tore of the castle, she is like what you would expect from a royal.

As we moved on, we wound up meeting some old friends. 

“Fertuitus! Harrison!” I yelled out as I rushed over to greet the vampire and vampire hunter. “How are you guys going?”

“We are doing well Alex,” Fertuitus said as he gave a small bow. “How was your journey here?”

“Did you get cured already?” Harrison asked and suddenly the room went quiet. “Oh…”

So we told them what happened and how I cant get the cure.

“I'm so sorry Alex,” Fertuitus told me.

“Its fine,” I replied. “Shit happens.”

“So did you find out anything about Xar’s master,” Bab asked and I translated.

“Sadly no. most likely they went into hiding after Xar was killed.” Harrison told us.

“We have sent specialists to look for any clues on who this Master is,” Layna told us. “As soon as we find out who they are we will send our troops.”

At least that was good to know.

It was here that Layna also told me that Fertuitus would be assigned to handle me should I go out of control.

To be honest, I didn't like that I needed a handler, but considering how my mind is when I hallucinate, it was probably for the best.

We continued our tour for a few more hours before we ran into a small problem with Bab. she used her diaper…

“Let's go back to the throne room so we may deal with that,” Layna told us calmly as she leads the way back to the throne room.

“A-Alex, could we just go back to the cell?” Bab asked me.

I knew exactly why she wanted to do this and I nodded yes.

But before I could speak up, we ran into Melanthe.

She had just woken up for and was looking for us so she could see Bab.

I don't know how it happened, but 10 minutes later I'm sitting next to both guards as I hear Bab screaming out profanities as her sisters change her diaper and coo at her.

They were behind the two large thrones to give them some privacy from us males.

(thankfully they had Fertuitus and Harrison stay outside while they're doing this.)

Every now and then I would hear Bab scream my name and call me a bastard before I saw a bolt of electricity. 

I didn't want to know what the hell they were doing to bab to make her this upset.

But despite Bab shooting her sisters, the guards never moved a muscle to protect them from the attacks.

“Aren't you both supposed to protect them?” I asked wondering why they weren't.

“There sisters.” the vampire told me. “We won't interfere with there matters unless we are asked.”

“Plus, I think they deserve to be shocked for messing with there baby sister like that,” Gideon commented.

I couldn't help but laugh a little at how they saw this. But I respected that.

Soon the girls were finished and I busted out laughing when I saw what they did to Bab.

A baby blue sparkle dress that barely covers up her triple thick diaper. Her hair was done in pigtails, she had both mittens and boodies on, and a new pacifier was in her mouth.

Oh man did Bab look pissed

“Wy whill kwill wu oll!” Bab screamed behind the passafier.

She then started shooting off electricity at her sisters again and I couldn't help but laugh more as she waddled around with her massive diaper!

When all the fun and games were over, I fixed her diaper problem and had her back into a normal diaper before we had lunch with her sisters. 

Despite Bab’s sisters fighting who would feed her this time, Bab practically jumped in my lab to stay away from them. Guess if she’s going to be babied, she would rather it be from someone who respected her then her sisters.

heck, at this point I wouldn't be surprised if she jumped onto Gideon’s lap to get away from her sisters.

But that didn't stop them from trying to spoon feed her something or beg me to let them give Bab her bottle.

Once lunch was over it was time for Bab and me to return to the cells and get ready for my hallucination.

“You'll be ok,” Bab said out loud. I think mostly for herself then me.

“Ya, I'll be fine,” I say as I rubbed her head.

Once we were in our cells it was just waiting for it to finally happen.

I don't even know when it happened. I just remember closing my eyes….

**********

“A-Alex…” I heard sniffling as I was gently shaken.

groggily I opened my eyes and saw my teary-eyed little sister standing beside my bed. I didn't even need to see what she did to know she wet herself again.

“I-I-I” Scarlett stammered as I got out of bed and gave her a hug. Just something to calm her down.

She managed to stay dry for over a week and her dad let her wear panties to bed. But sadly that didn't work out.

“It's ok. Accidents happen,”I tell her but she is still sniveling knowing in the morning her dad will get mad she wet the bed again.

But it's too early in the morning to be dealing with this.

“It's ok. Just get out of those wet clothes and put on your pull up,”I tell her as I grab an old towel to lay on her bed where the wet spot is.

A few moments later Scarlett is in just her nightshirt and a pink hello kitty pull-ups.

“I-im sorry…” Scarlett tells me as I get into bed and hold the blanked open for her to climb in.

As she climbs in I hug her close. 

“Its ok, big brother will always be here for you,”I tell her.

“Really?” Scarlett asked.

“Really,”I tell her with a smile.

“Then why weren't you there?” Scarlett asked me.

“Huh?”

Scarlett’s eyes went pitch black as blood came out of her nose!

“YOU LIED!” Scarlett yelled as I started screaming and trying to get away. “YOU LIED BIG BROTHER! YOU LIED!”

Scarlett got on top of me as she took ahold of my neck.

“I SCREaMED AND SCREAMED anD YOu WEren't THERE!” Scarlett yelled as my body coked for air. “I’m DEad becAUSE OF YoU!”

**********

I'm gasping for air as I wake up on the floor of the cell.

What the hell is going on? Why am I having hallucinations of Scarlett? And why does it keep going back to her dead!? 

I know her and her dad left when I was still a kid. My mom and I were devastated when they left.

As I finally forced my sour body up I looked over at Bab’s cell and saw her on her bed.

After asking the guard to help me out of the cell and into her’s I could see she was crying before she fell asleep. 

Most likely crying as she saw me go mad and knowing I don't have long for this world.

Taking the chance, I changed Bab’s soggy diaper before tucking her into bed with her pacifier and a stuffed bear.

“Rest up,” I whispered as I gave her forehead a small kiss before I walked out of the cell.

Fertuitus was waiting for me right outside the jail cells and he helped escort me to the throne room. Inside Melanthe and her bodyguard greeted me.

“I see your hallucination is over. Where is my sister?” Melanthe asked. slightly disappointed I didn't bring her.

“She’s napping at the moment. I wasn't the only one having a rough experience,”I told her.

“I see, I'm sorry to hear that.” Melanthe told me.

“There is something I would like to ask about my hulusanations,” I told her just trying to get to the point of why I came here without Bab.

“What would you like to know?” Melanthe asked me.

“Why do I see my sister dead in my arms?”

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Alexander March
Amh - xn16
Zco - 102 (+4)
Vjox -69 (+3)
Ed -62 (+5)
Pyc -59 (+2)
Nb -11 (+1)
Eam -65

S'fp -glszsob
Qpusgsdoy -glszsob'd trgd
Vri - Jpdww (B) (kltmlfq: fbyhuk)
U dhfo -tdh

partner-Bab Ados
Stats- lv18
HP-94 (+20)
Attack-24
Defence-24 (+95)
Speed-24 (+9)
Regen-34 (+3)
Manna-326

class-Sage
Skills-Healer +
Weapons-none
Element-lightning

Money ----
gold 30) 
silver 30)
bronze 30)
copper 32)

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A duck lands on the water in the middle of the ocean. Bobbing up and down as small waves push it.

Qwack.

The duck has no reaction as water begins to engulf the duck into a bubble and pull it down into the water below.

Down it goes past all forms of sea life. Most of which could eat the duck in a single bite. But the duck is unfazed by them.

Finally, it gets right where it wants to be as the duck see’s the final person it must deliver its message to. The woman looks at the duck as it gives off a single echoey qwack within the bubble.

The woman reaches out and takes ahold of the note from the duck and reads it.

“Tell my mother I will be there for her when she needs me.” the woman tells the duck who quacks before it is sent back to the surface.

The woman frowns as she knows what she is going to need to do as she walks on the ocean floor to go kill her mother.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

********************(author notes)********
Thanks again for reading. If you still don't know why it took me so long to write this please see the updates i've posted for details. 
I'm still planning on fixing all of my chapters but i'm hoping to get more reguler chapter updates soon.

 

[Guilend]

Ok, that is odd, it seems i some how missed a lot of chapters and now totally confused. I don't know what happened.

[Wannatripbaby]

7 minutes ago, Aries said:

Ok, that is odd, it seems i some how missed a lot of chapters and now totally confused. I don't know what happened.

Don't worry, you aren't going crazy. Redwelch made a separate thread to upload the "fixed" chapters 1 through 10 (or was it 11?) But evidently the process of fixing them was taking a LOT longer than he anticipated and he decided to continue with the story. Just go back and read everything after chapter 10. I promise you it's a hell of a ride.

[PinkTheDinosaur]

1 hour ago, Aries said:

Ok, that is odd, it seems i some how missed a lot of chapters and now totally confused. I don't know what happened.

red got a proofreader and is having them fix a lot of problems with the story. hence why he's uploading all of them again. this is the original. eventually, the fixed version will catch up but until then he's going to try to continue the story.

-

as for my review of the chapter, I LOVED IT ^.^

I loved the fight scene at the beginning and showing off the guards. cant wait to see what they can really do!

I also like the cell idea to keep them both safe yet they can leave at any time, well, after Alex has his hulusanation.

Bab's sisters were very funny as well. constantly babying her ^,^ i can't wait to see more of that!

by the way, what is the vampire guards name? please don't tell me its Dracula...

also, WHAT HAPPENED TO SCARLET!!!!!!!!!!

AND THE DUCK! and kill someone's mother? o.O please tell me more!

[redwelch2222]

3 hours ago, Aries said:

Ok, that is odd, it seems i some how missed a lot of chapters and now totally confused. I don't know what happened.

as they said, im reposting fixed chapters. right now im up to ch 8 with the fixes. if you would like to read the full story without getting lost then check out my deviant art page. it has everything by chapter for the first arc (the first 20 chapters + the special chapters) https://redwelch2222.deviantart.com/gallery/64307515/Dropped-in-a-new-world-arc-1-royal-blood

2 hours ago, Wannatripbaby said:

 I promise you it's a hell of a ride.

 

lol it sure is  

1 hour ago, PinkTheDinosaur said:

as for my review of the chapter, I LOVED IT ^.^

I loved the fight scene at the beginning and showing off the guards. cant wait to see what they can really do!

I also like the cell idea to keep them both safe yet they can leave at any time, well, after Alex has his hulusanation.

Bab's sisters were very funny as well. constantly babying her ^,^ i can't wait to see more of that!

by the way, what is the vampire guards name? please don't tell me its Dracula...

also, WHAT HAPPENED TO SCARLET!!!!!!!!!!

AND THE DUCK! and kill someone's mother? o.O please tell me more!

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glad you liked it

i wanted to give them a sense of dominance in this chapter and help show them off. if I compared them to any other characters, they would be like Monark and Elroy for how strong they are.

with Eva, she didn't really care either way what Bab looked liked, so to contrast her character, I made these two overjoyed to baby little Bab. plus it was sugested to me a while ago to have more people baby Bab so here they are

no, his name's not Dracula, but he is in here somewhere... 

I don't know. you'll have to wait and see.

qwak? 

[Guilend]

Ok, took me all day lol, but i just git caught up, i am so loving it.

[redwelch2222]

6 hours ago, Aries said:

Ok, took me all day lol, but i just git caught up, i am so loving it.

lol glad you liked it  what was your favorite part?

[Guilend]

5 hours ago, redwelch2222 said:

lol glad you liked it  what was your favorite part?

Not sure if i have a favorite yet, but i really liked the part where the princess and Alen excape from her mother, and her sister jumps in to make sure they het away. After every turn in the castle i was sure they wouldn't make it. Wonder if her sister's punishment is going to be. I can't wait to find out.

[PinkTheDinosaur]

9 hours ago, Aries said:

Not sure if i have a favorite yet, but i really liked the part where the princess and Alen excape from her mother, and her sister jumps in to make sure they het away. After every turn in the castle i was sure they wouldn't make it. Wonder if her sister's punishment is going to be. I can't wait to find out.

well she's pregnant, so i dont see to bad of a punishment.