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Summer's Retreat (Chapter 1 Updated)

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I'm still working off and on with Student's Pet, however this is an idea that was stewing in my head for a long time. I don't expect to update this particular story very frequently. Because of that, however, I'm going to make each update I do make its own, self-contained story. That way if I end up leaving it by the wayside nobody will be stuck with some cliffhangery chapter that never completes itself. So, without further ado, I hope you enjoy Summer's Retreat.

The story has been reposted here: https://www.dailydiapers.com/board/index.php?/topic/60675-summers-retreat/

 

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Great start to this story. I enjoyed reading it very much. Can't wait for the next addition to the story.

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Jumping Jehoshaphat that was an excellent start. You have me totally hooked. Thanks for the first in what I hope to be an epic saga of Summer. Please continue.

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A little note to those following the story, in hindsight, and following a couple of critiques that mention the same issue, I'm going to be tweaking the ending a bit (bsically after Summer wakes up from her nap) since I felt I rushed things a bit. I got it done and got so excited about finishing it I posted it a bit quicker than maybe I should have. That said, I do want to thank everyone who's said they've enjoyed it sof ar. Hopefully my revision will be even better. It's already looking so, to be honest.

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I really liked this. I especially liked how this seemed to actually be a completed story yet we know there is more to come.

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So, as promised, I've re-done the ending to the story. If you CTRL+F "Summer awoke to" it'll take you straight to the updated section. Meantime if you wanna check out the original ending for comparison, I have it here Edited by BabyStevie26
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Great story. I'm wondering if she'll have more flash backs at to what had happened to put her in this state.

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Please tell me this is not a one off story... Summer sounds like she finally found the loving family she deserved in the first place. You have a fantastic and unique way of letting us peek into the subtle and hidden "between the lines" portion of your story, please continue to share with us.

I'm starting to feel like Oliver(or Olivia) Twist.... "Please can I have some more?"

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Wow I must've missed this one when it was initially posted. Such a great start! I hope to see it continue.

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Oh I can not wait for another chapter as that was very cool

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9 hours ago, Jayme said:

Please tell me this is not a one off story... Summer sounds like she finally found the loving family she deserved in the first place. You have a fantastic and unique way of letting us peek into the subtle and hidden "between the lines" portion of your story, please continue to share with us.

I'm starting to feel like Oliver(or Olivia) Twist.... "Please can I have some more?"

I don't intent for this to be a one-off. It is, however, a low priority project between Student's Pet (which I am working on) and a couple of non-diaper story things I have in the mix. That's one reason I specifically wrote this to be self-contained. If I never got around to it again, it's not just left completely dangling.

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I look forward to this and Student being updated!

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