WBDaddy Posted September 14, 2016 Share Posted September 14, 2016 It would certainly make it easier for all involved if you dug up the links to your stories and posted them, so we don't all have to individually go through the process of doing so. Link to comment
WBDaddy Posted September 14, 2016 Share Posted September 14, 2016 Not at all, it's a matter of ease of access. I remember the first story ("Qualified"), and also recall being quite taken with it the first time I read it. Link to comment
TDAD22 Posted September 14, 2016 Author Share Posted September 14, 2016 Thanks, I appreciate the praise. It was on Abdlforums as well. Link to comment
WBDaddy Posted September 15, 2016 Share Posted September 15, 2016 So, now that I have more time (rehearsal interrupted my reading session earlier), I'm diving into YGWYN. - MAJOR technical problem - shifting from 3rd omniscient to 1st in the middle of the first chapter. Link to comment
TDAD22 Posted September 15, 2016 Author Share Posted September 15, 2016 In this case, I'm attempting to play in Personalias ballpark more, about the horror of the fantasy realized, I also just posted more of YGWYN so the story is more around 6000 words I think. Link to comment
WBDaddy Posted September 15, 2016 Share Posted September 15, 2016 I have no criticisms on that front. Link to comment
TDAD22 Posted September 15, 2016 Author Share Posted September 15, 2016 yeah I worry about readability with my stuff a fair amount, I never found yours distracting though. Link to comment
WBDaddy Posted September 15, 2016 Share Posted September 15, 2016 Emoting is the #1 goal of any serious writer, I think. Link to comment
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