Personalias Posted January 1, 2016 Share Posted January 1, 2016 Just posted a new one shot titled Link to comment
Personalias Posted January 1, 2016 Author Share Posted January 1, 2016 Thanks Cute_Kitten. Link to comment
WBDaddy Posted January 1, 2016 Share Posted January 1, 2016 I think you did a really nice job developing your protagonist in the short amount of time you gave yourself to do it. Link to comment
WBDaddy Posted January 2, 2016 Share Posted January 2, 2016 Truth be told, I don't know how else you'd be able to get that scene set the way you wanted it. Link to comment
Personalias Posted January 2, 2016 Author Share Posted January 2, 2016 Yeah....yeah. (sigh) yeah. Link to comment
Personalias Posted January 2, 2016 Author Share Posted January 2, 2016 Anybody else write themselves into a corner like that? Link to comment
WBDaddy Posted January 2, 2016 Share Posted January 2, 2016 9 minutes ago, Personalias said: Anybody else write themselves into a corner like that? All the time. Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted January 2, 2016 Share Posted January 2, 2016 11 minutes ago, Personalias said: Anybody else write themselves into a corner like that? Many times! Link to comment
Personalias Posted January 2, 2016 Author Share Posted January 2, 2016 44 minutes ago, Cute_Kitten said: Still reading ToC (been reading it with constant interuptions for like....over an hour now LOL) Not to intrude: Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted January 2, 2016 Share Posted January 2, 2016 1 minute ago, Personalias said: Not to intrude: Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted January 2, 2016 Share Posted January 2, 2016 8 minutes ago, Personalias said: Wow. Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted January 2, 2016 Share Posted January 2, 2016 Now for my commentary: It wuz good. I likeded it. Link to comment
Personalias Posted January 2, 2016 Author Share Posted January 2, 2016 CK, thanks for the feedback. Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted January 2, 2016 Share Posted January 2, 2016 Oh, yes, you conveyed that feeling those two are old hats at the game very well will little comments such as Mrs. Z saying she's getting old, not senile, etc. along with the tidbit of Ms. Avery preferring to change the strong willed ones. ^^ Smut, to me anyway- and this may be coming from someone who practically grew up reading fan fiction- "smut" I take to mean sex. Any and all kinds of sex fall under the "smut" umbrella. Link to comment
Personalias Posted January 2, 2016 Author Share Posted January 2, 2016 8 hours ago, Cute_Kitten said: Personally, Personalias Link to comment
BabyWarlock Posted January 2, 2016 Share Posted January 2, 2016 I found it a unique story with an interesting plot. I love the hinted relationship between the two teachers. I enjoyed the reverse psychology part and how it fitted in with the persuasion. I enjoyed your writing and hope to see more. Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted January 2, 2016 Share Posted January 2, 2016 1 hour ago, Personalias said: With regards to the puns CK, and I mean this in the nicest way possible: Link to comment
BabyWarlock Posted January 2, 2016 Share Posted January 2, 2016 Sorry to say this Cute Kitten but your puns are not the cat's pyjamas () Link to comment
Personalias Posted January 2, 2016 Author Share Posted January 2, 2016 You know what C_K? Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted January 2, 2016 Share Posted January 2, 2016 I see you've been having fun using the force. Link to comment
JustinDB87 Posted January 2, 2016 Share Posted January 2, 2016 I was just overly excited when I saw something new from personalias. Link to comment
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