SGTbaby Posted September 12, 2015 Share Posted September 12, 2015 Awesome job on this chapter. I look forward to reading more. This is one of my favorite stories to check for updates!! Link to comment
ausdpr Posted September 12, 2015 Share Posted September 12, 2015 So I've been meaning to get through this story, and am on the first page, and noticed you were looking for opinions on engagement back then (not sure if that's changed sorry). Essentially, I'm finding the violence, talk of death, the fetishization of underage characters, etc, a bit hard to get through. At the same time, it's not completely out of place in the diaper dimension, and young characters can always theoretically be AR'd. I'm going to keep going since it seems that most of that is just in the early parts before the story starts, but it is, I suspect, a part of why it had a hard time getting going. Page 2 is a lot more fun. The littles starter-kit is quite a nice idea, as is the implication of there being elements which Ellie isn't going to jive as smoothly with. Link to comment
darkarus99 Posted September 12, 2015 Share Posted September 12, 2015 What happened with the previous family, of Maya? I imagine that part of losing custody of their daughter they were deemed unfit to be adults and we put up for adoption or were required to relearn how to be a responsible adult Link to comment
JonhSmith13 Posted September 13, 2015 Share Posted September 13, 2015 I imagine that part of losing custody of their daughter they were deemed unfit to be adults and we put up for adoption or were required to relearn how to be a responsible adult Link to comment
DKN117 Posted September 13, 2015 Author Share Posted September 13, 2015 (edited) Edited September 13, 2015 by DKN117 Link to comment
SGTbaby Posted September 13, 2015 Share Posted September 13, 2015 love it!! Can't wait to read more of this! I love the quick updates as well! Link to comment
DKN117 Posted September 14, 2015 Author Share Posted September 14, 2015 (edited) A lot of the updates for Day 2 will be kinda short and not too heavy on plot-stuff; just some cuteness, some bonding, some warm-&-fuzzy stuff. I've got a bit more planned for Day 3, though. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Edited September 14, 2015 by DKN117 Link to comment
BabyKayla Posted September 14, 2015 Share Posted September 14, 2015 I really, really love this story! It's so refreshing to see an innocent ABDL story Link to comment
SGTbaby Posted September 14, 2015 Share Posted September 14, 2015 I don't mind short updates other than they make me want more. I do like the updates and the way the story is developing! Nice addition! Link to comment
DKN117 Posted September 15, 2015 Author Share Posted September 15, 2015 (edited) Edited September 15, 2015 by DKN117 Link to comment
SGTbaby Posted September 15, 2015 Share Posted September 15, 2015 Another excellent addition. The short chapters are just as good as the long! Please keep going! Link to comment
DKN117 Posted September 16, 2015 Author Share Posted September 16, 2015 ...Hey, what happened to "The Little Helper"? Where'd it go? That story looked like it had such promise... ------------------------------------------------------- It was now mid-afternoon, a couple hours after lunch. Timothy Emery was making his way back into the living room from the neighboring kitchen, finishing off a snack he Link to comment
Jayme Posted September 16, 2015 Share Posted September 16, 2015 Not to take over your thread but "The Little Helper" will be updated on Wednesdays every week according according to the author. Another wonderful chapter in the saga of Ellie, I eagerly await more Link to comment
DKN117 Posted September 16, 2015 Author Share Posted September 16, 2015 Not to take over your thread but "The Little Helper" will be updated on Wednesdays every week according to the author. Check the Story Time forum. "The Little Helper" has VANISHED. Using my Browser's History to go to it results in "Sorry, there is a problem. We could not locate the item you are trying to view. Error code: 2F173/1". Link to comment
diaperpt Posted September 16, 2015 Share Posted September 16, 2015 ...well, your response didn't vanish from here!! Link to comment
SGTbaby Posted September 16, 2015 Share Posted September 16, 2015 Another awesome short update!! I admit I rush home after work and check hoping there is an update to this! I also agree Baby Banker, I want to be Ellie and this happening to me. I love the diaper dimension stuff. Link to comment
dmavn Posted September 16, 2015 Share Posted September 16, 2015 Love love the story too.. Mm.. Perhaps it's in the powder?... If so, I want some.. Link to comment
DKN117 Posted September 18, 2015 Author Share Posted September 18, 2015 A few hours later, Timothy was off fulfilling Ellie Link to comment
SGTbaby Posted September 18, 2015 Share Posted September 18, 2015 Short and sweet!! And a wonderful update!! I do wonder if and when Ellie will be taken to a doctor for an illness and how she will handle that but I also look forward to other outings as well Link to comment
ausdpr Posted September 18, 2015 Share Posted September 18, 2015 It's fun to see the amazons taking such complete control of their littles like that. Link to comment
DKN117 Posted September 19, 2015 Author Share Posted September 19, 2015 Day 2 is almost done, but I've got another thing planned for Day 3. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- It was about 20 minutes later when Timothy returned home with fast-food and a couple of bags containing Ellie Link to comment
JonhSmith13 Posted September 19, 2015 Share Posted September 19, 2015 some, feedback:why Jessica and Timothy do not have, own children?What is the work of Katie? All must have a source of income.In, "Alisa's Adventures in the Diaper Dimension" mentions that hypnosis is illegal, but many people use it.Hypnotic rattle is a contraband item? -- Some people purchased smuggled products without knowing (some plants, animals and equipment are illegal in some countries for various reasons) In Japan, it is prohibited the sale of guns (Firearms). But it is permitted to sell bullets and components to build pistols, rifles and other Link to comment
SGTbaby Posted September 19, 2015 Share Posted September 19, 2015 Always a great addition and I like the idea of them living close together Link to comment
DKN117 Posted September 21, 2015 Author Share Posted September 21, 2015 A couple hours later, it was a little past 10:00, and the two Little girls looked a little sleepy as they sat together on the couch, the end credits of the movie they Link to comment
SGTbaby Posted September 21, 2015 Share Posted September 21, 2015 Great addition. I liked day 2 and am looking forward to day 3! Link to comment
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