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Rip this baby apart, please? (asking for critique) "Winter's Kiss"


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I think the way you changed the ending was good, especially considering the "age" of most readers who seem to prefer sweetness and "happily for ever"-solutions to stories. They way you ended it also leaves it up to the reader to imagine "how it really ends" which is an added bonus.

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