SoakedinTexas Posted June 11, 2016 Share Posted June 11, 2016 This story has been great, good dialog and interactions through out. But I always get hung up when the wife starts cheating on the husband after she has put him in this position. Just never have liked the cheating wife role in stories. I guess because I have been cheated on before and know the pain it actually causes. But I do love the story. 1 Link to comment
anziel Posted June 12, 2016 Share Posted June 12, 2016 A way one of a kind story Elfy, I can't wait for more! Amazing story! Link to comment
Elfy Posted June 12, 2016 Author Share Posted June 12, 2016 I will probably be posting the second half of the chapter tomorrow. Link to comment
litttle_bear Posted June 14, 2016 Share Posted June 14, 2016 Anyone know when hes posting the rest? Link to comment
Elfy Posted June 14, 2016 Author Share Posted June 14, 2016 Here is the second half of the chapter. For anyone interested in commissions. I write commissions for Link to comment
junyour Posted June 14, 2016 Share Posted June 14, 2016 The first thing I would like to say is the chapter was worth the wait. Look forward to seeing more,hopefully soo Link to comment
ppbenn Posted June 14, 2016 Share Posted June 14, 2016 2 hours ago, junyour said: The first thing I would like to say is the chapter was worth the wait. Look forward to seeing more,hopefully soo Agreed, fantastic writing Elfy. I love the how you described the conflicting emotions Nick had, and also how he was essentially a prisoner without bars. I hope you continue soon, your stories are always a treat to read. Link to comment
SGTbaby Posted June 14, 2016 Share Posted June 14, 2016 Jack sounds like he has plans for little Nicky. I look forward to the next chapter. I am really enjoying how this is developing! Link to comment
garyg Posted June 14, 2016 Share Posted June 14, 2016 Love your story but I am wondering why a straight male would want to change another man's wet nappy. Link to comment
Elfy Posted June 14, 2016 Author Share Posted June 14, 2016 Well... a. He may not be a straight male and b. Nappy changes and the like don't have to be sexual... Can be caring, can be a power thing. I guess things will be clearer in later chapters Link to comment
sub-scott Posted June 15, 2016 Share Posted June 15, 2016 I hope that this story never ends. Link to comment
Bigboy85 Posted June 15, 2016 Share Posted June 15, 2016 Am I the only one who thinks Sarah is a little heartless. I know this turns her on, but to flirt with another man and possibly Link to comment
bitmap666 Posted June 15, 2016 Share Posted June 15, 2016 Love this Elfy!!! Cannot wait for the next chapter!! Link to comment
Elfy Posted June 15, 2016 Author Share Posted June 15, 2016 Well... I look at it as being very complicated. Sarah does love Nick in that intangible way that people can love each other. At the same time Nick has taken her for granted and basically abused her love for him since they met by freeloading off of her. He never helps out and is basically all around a slob. Sarah does love Nick but she also feels bitterness towards him. Just because you love someone doesn't necessarily mean you always like them. She got him nappies in the first place because he had started wetting the bed and needed protection, he even failed to tell her he wet the bed or do anything to clean it up. Sarah started discovering that she liked the way putting Nick in nappies felt and she discovered a power in doing it that she had never felt before. She found herself becoming much more dominant and enjoyed this feeling. Nick, due to a combination of the nappies and his more domineering wife found himself shrinking into a more submissive state. Sarah and Jack have been friends for quite a while and they have flirted and often gone out and done things like go for walks and things like that together. There has always been an attraction between the two that they both realised was there but neither acted on. Now circumstances have changed. Sarah is seeing Nick less and less as her husband and more and more as a baby... Or at least something less than a husband, more of a play thing maybe. She loves him but its a different kind of love. With circumstances as they are it opens a spot to be Sarah's lover. A spot Nick still wants but finds himself increasingly unable to get. It may not be the greatest writing and it may be inconsistent at times but I wanted to write characters that are more than just black or white, good or bad, etc... Whether it works or not is up to the readers to decide! 1 Link to comment
ppbenn Posted June 15, 2016 Share Posted June 15, 2016 Very well explained and personally I think you're doing a great job writing. Link to comment
Sarah Penguin Posted June 15, 2016 Share Posted June 15, 2016 Is fun, fanks for the update Link to comment
FretaBWet Posted June 16, 2016 Share Posted June 16, 2016 It works for me so thank you for all your hard work. Hugs, Freta Link to comment
Sir Stinkypants Posted June 19, 2016 Share Posted June 19, 2016 Magnificent! A truly glorious tale, cleverly crafted!! Link to comment
anziel Posted June 21, 2016 Share Posted June 21, 2016 Really like where this is going! thanks! Link to comment
bitmap666 Posted June 23, 2016 Share Posted June 23, 2016 Cannot wait for the next update! Loved this last one! Easily my favorite story so far. Link to comment
Dreamsofdiapers Posted June 24, 2016 Share Posted June 24, 2016 I just had to finally register for an account here after lurking for about a month to tell you how amazing this story is, and how excited I am to see it continue!! I seriously check everyday for an update lol. I love reading about the position baby finds himself in and hope he is about to experience humiliation on a level he can't even fathom - even after all he has experienced! can't wait for the next chapter!! and THANK YOU!! Link to comment
mistressdbaby Posted June 26, 2016 Share Posted June 26, 2016 Omg what an update poor little man! Sent from my SM-G925F using Tapatalk Link to comment
Dreamsofdiapers Posted July 3, 2016 Share Posted July 3, 2016 What's happening with this story? Been a while since you posted anything - chapter or comment - on this thread. Can't wait to see where it goes. Link to comment
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