Hades Posted December 22, 2014 Author Share Posted December 22, 2014 CH. 17 Zeke/Alexander Blackburn Link to comment
babyscoots Posted December 22, 2014 Share Posted December 22, 2014 Great story. Please continue it. Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted December 22, 2014 Share Posted December 22, 2014 Loving this got caught up on it today. I especially like Zekes attitude. Link to comment
fading.kitten Posted December 23, 2014 Share Posted December 23, 2014 Ha. I agree with Cute.kitten. Zeke's attitude is priceless. Link to comment
Hades Posted December 25, 2014 Author Share Posted December 25, 2014 To my small cadre of commenters, thank you so much for all the encouragement. I had to rush these chapters so I hope they are ok. I really wanted to update before Christmas. Thanks again guys and happy holidays. Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted December 26, 2014 Share Posted December 26, 2014 Zeke's definately got some issues. Well, I think they all do- hence the whole "having a year to get their shit straight and get out of those bodies" but my reader's intuition is guessing Zeke is gonna have a harder time dealing with those issues. Link to comment
fading.kitten Posted December 27, 2014 Share Posted December 27, 2014 Dunno. You've got Zeke's issues but also it isn't so clear what would keep James there. It will be interesting to see how it plays out. Link to comment
Hades Posted December 31, 2014 Author Share Posted December 31, 2014 CH. 21 Ashley/ Maria Blackburn Link to comment
fading.kitten Posted January 1, 2015 Share Posted January 1, 2015 To this I say, oooh drama. Link to comment
Hades Posted January 1, 2015 Author Share Posted January 1, 2015 CH. 22 Zeke/ Alexander Blackburn Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted January 1, 2015 Share Posted January 1, 2015 That was intense, in a good way! ^.^ Link to comment
Shotgun Diplomat Posted January 1, 2015 Share Posted January 1, 2015 This story gets better and better as it progresses, thanks so much for the great writing. Link to comment
crazycat701 Posted January 2, 2015 Share Posted January 2, 2015 Just terrific. I love the emotional intensity that gives a sense of powerful realism to the concept you've created. Link to comment
Hades Posted January 4, 2015 Author Share Posted January 4, 2015 Hey guys, thanks so much for all the comments. Just to let you know, I've decided Link to comment
Hades Posted January 9, 2015 Author Share Posted January 9, 2015 James/ Edward Blackburn Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted January 9, 2015 Share Posted January 9, 2015 Well done. Very realistic feel- love how you handle the characters and their emotions. Link to comment
fading.kitten Posted January 10, 2015 Share Posted January 10, 2015 Enjoying the new chapters. The characters are fleshing out nicely. Link to comment
babyscoots Posted January 14, 2015 Share Posted January 14, 2015 The waiting is killing me, please hurry with the next chapter Link to comment
dmavn Posted January 14, 2015 Share Posted January 14, 2015 Wonderful story though I will have to stop reading at work.. Making me cry.. Link to comment
Hades Posted January 15, 2015 Author Share Posted January 15, 2015 Ashley/ Maria Blackburn Link to comment
Hades Posted January 20, 2015 Author Share Posted January 20, 2015 Erica/ Laura Blackburn Link to comment
fading.kitten Posted January 20, 2015 Share Posted January 20, 2015 Interesting as always. Thanks for the update. Link to comment
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