My Life in Diapers Part 2

[waynecook52]

Well I

[LilKistopher]

sounds like a great time... but it also sounds like it was quite embarrassing too.

[Fulldiaper]

Two suggestions, and two P's, paragraphs, and punctuation. Paragraph's break up the story and into bite sized pieces. Three to four lines per paragraph make for good reading. An occasional comma to pause and then allow the reader to continue are also nice.