Alexandrea In Diapers

[dl dossier]

Hi all, this is my first story and I am unsure if I should continue, let me know if you want to keep reading :-)

It was one of these things that she hated doing, Alexandrea or alex as she like to be known, had a great ability to find the worst shopping trolleys, always making life a little more difficult than it had to be. As she walked down the isles checking her list, She felt the familiar feeling of a damp pull-up pressing against her skin. The feeling over the years had become all too familiar and she had become accustomed to it, not even thinking about. As she grabbed the few items she needed she proceeded to the checkout. "Hi" she said to the checkout attendant, who said nothing back. as the few items she purchased were checked she paid the cashier, " are there some bathrooms nearby?" she asked the attendant. With a blank look she pointed to the left of the checkouts. "thanks" alex said in a sarcastic tone. She wanted to browse around the shops but though she had better put her shopping in the car and head to the bathroom to freshen up. She was walking out the door when she heard a familiar voice from behind her. " Hey Alex", alex turned "oh hi Jen, how are you?", "ok, these exams have been killing me, I can't wait till its all over for the semester" "yeah I agree, I finished mine on tuesday, do you have many more to go?" " only one this afternoon, we are all heading out afterwards do you want to come? we are heading down the pub for a few drinks", "yeah possibly I will give you a call and let you know for sure later on" "ok sounds good" Jen said. " I will catch you later" she said as she walked off waving. She got out to her car, a restored mini, she opened side door and placed all of her shopping on the seat. She grabbed her handbag out of the shopping trolley and pushed it into the trolley return bay. She walked back-into the store and headed to the bathrooms. She always liked to use the disabled bathrooms as they gave her more room to change. She had never been to this shopping centre before and the bathrooms were spacious and clean. She lifted her knee length skirt and unclasped her onesie. When wearing pull-ups, she didn't wear the onesie to hold anything up but more as a safe guard from people seeing her protection. She loved the current fashion trend and revelled in the ability to wear free flowing skirts without fear of easily exposing her pull-ups. She lifted the front of the onesie and slowly slid down her pull-up. as it fell onto the floor with a soft thud, she kicked to it one side. Fashion was agin on her side, large handbags were a blessing, she pulled a fresh pull-up and a travel pack of wipes from her bag. She was a nice looking girl and always took pride in her appearance and hygiene. At first when her specialist recommended she shave her pubic region she was a little taken back, "it will help and make cleaning up easier" the specialist promised. for the first few weeks she kept her pubic region trimmed but not shaved, at this hard time in her life it felt like the only thing that made her feel like a grown up. She was 18 at the time but she had lived with the condition for over 2 years.

She looked at her shaved region and briefly remembered how uncomfortable having hair once felt and she revelled in the smooth fresh feeling the hairlessness gave her. She wiped herself and stepped into a fresh pull-up. She wiggled the pull up up her legs and slightly forced them up over her things an into place. She preferred to wear adult pull-ups that were smaller in size for her already small stature. The tighter fit always made her feel more comfortable. Although even regular diapers were easy enough to conceal over fairly tight clothes, she did not risk it. The pull-up was tight and she jiggled her hips to get settled. She clipped her green onesie back into place and let her skirt fall down around her knees. making sure nothing was tucked in anywhere, she threw the used diaper into the trash, grabbed her belongings and walked out. She had tried teen diapers before, but the often childish designs on goodnights often made her feel weird, the fit was sure better but the absorption was not as good. She walked unaware of her diaper, as she had grown complacent with them over the years. At first it seamed like a hindrance, and highly embarrassing, but she always told her self that she was lucky and it could have been a lot worse. Rehab had been hell, but worth every second. she grabbed a few cd's and a new dvd from the cd shop and headed for her car. She got into her car and heard the seat crinkle as she sat down. She always placed a disposable seat pad under her seat cover incase of leaks.

She drove home and got stuck in the increasing traffic, but still made it home in under 20 minutes. She grabbed her groceries and walked to her front door. stopping to look at the 3 large packages on the door step. "great" she smiled to her self as she kicked open the door. She walked to the kitchen and placed the items on her counter and headed back to grab the packages. "Hi Alex, hope everything is well, you next delivery will be next week, call me if you want to change the order" the post-it was signed Ken. Ken was a great man, an older gentleman that owned the local pharmacy. Alex's supplies were an unusual request for Ken and his wife at first, but alex was by far one of the pharmacy's best customers and was rewarded with free deliveries. Ken and Janice had always been wonderful and very understanding and always delivered in plain packages. Not that it mattered on Alex's small acreage block. her house was set 100m off the road and had a dense cover of trees between her house and the road, meaning that even if the packages were not in unmarked packages, it would be impossible to see them. She grab two boxes and kicked the third inside. She shut the door and and took two of the three boxes upstairs to her change room. She had a change table on one side of the room that was custom made and a small desk and some walk in wardrobes on the other side of the room. The change table looked great and she loved it as a piece of furniture. To the naked eye it looked like a modern stylish side board, very sleek and clean. But to alex, she knew it was a comfortable and easy place to get changed. She walked up to the rear of the unit and press what looked like a decorative panel. It popped up and she reached in a and pulled out a change mat that slid into place on the top of the unit. She took of her skirt and her T-shirt, unclipping her onesie while hopping up onto the mat. The mat had a head rest at one end and was covered in a white medical grade vinyl. She lifted the onesie over her head before lying down. The cold vinyl sending a shiver down her back as she lay there in a pull-up and bra. She reached over the side and slid open a shallow draw and removed a fresh cloth diaper and pair of plastic pants. She tore the side of her pull-ups and dropped it into a waste basked on the side. She wiped and powdered herself, savouring in the sweet smell that she had grown to love before positioning the diaper and puling it between her legs. She fastened the Velcro bands and positioned the snap on plastic pants as she had the diaper and snapped them in-place. The pretty pink colour reminded her of her femininity. She stood and removed an oversize football jersey from another shelf and put it on, allowing it to hang over her diapered behind. She was not a large girl, at only 5.6 and 68kg she had small breasts, a tight body and cute behind. she walked down stairs and grabbed a bottle of water from the fridge and headed for the back door. two familiar faces stood waiting, tails waging. She opened the back door "Hey girls!" she said with excitement. Two beautiful border collies nudged at her hands for loving attention. Bonnie and Jess were only one year old and full of life. Alex sat on the back step and gave the dogs a good rub. Jess being her usual self shoved her snout under Alex's jersey and into her crotch, "hey, don't do that" alex yelled playfully, knowing the dogs inquisitive nature. she stood up and looked for the dogs favourite toys, large chewable bones made from a soft plastic. She threw the two bones into her back yard and the dogs took off to retrieve them. She loved her dogs, she treated them like family and they loved her for it. Well trained, the dogs knew the rules and did not follow her as she headed inside, instead opting to run and chase each other round on her property.

[daddy_tom]

Good first attempt at a story, you should definitely continue writing,

But if i could make a few suggestions; try to go a bit slower when you write, describe everything to us, let us know what the characters are thinking so that you can develop them through the story also try to write the story as you would like it and not how you think other people would like it that way it can be different and stand out.

Good luck!

[JDL23]

I'd advise you to break up your paragraphs a little more. Just as an example, whenever someone has a new line of dialogue, keep it as a separate line of text. It helps the reader determine who's speaking to whom and paces out the story.

[Frink]

Nothing outright bad here, but you really really need to break up the paragraphs. In the present form it's just hard to read

[~Skitty~]

also something a teacher taught me a long time ago, try to keep SHE and HE or I or YOU to a minimum, or atleast space them out.

"she did this and then she when where she always liked to eat. and she loved the food there while she punched."

gets kind of repetative and sounds more like your listing things about the character.

^-^ keep your story going though.

[Frink]

Nothing outright bad here, but you really really need to break up the paragraphs. In the present form it's just hard to read

I just realized this sounds a little harsh. I like the little teaser we've been given and would like to read more.

[Guest JS1989]

Hi this is going to be a good story and you’re going to be a good writer someday, but if you want our help you should break up your paragraphs more, proper grammar rules state that every time you have a different person talk, or change the subject matter you should use a different paragraph. You have pretty good spelling but you should always use a spell check and then copy and paste the story onto here. Like I said before you have good spelling I only saw one error which was in your first paragraph while you were writing about Alex's diaper change you said "Fashion was agin on her side" and again is spelt wrong. You must also proofread your story before you post it because some things won't be picked up by a spell check, like herself is one word not two and you also said "as it fell onto the floor with a soft thud, she kicked to it one side." and because that is a new sentence the "A" in as should be capitalized and you typed to before it like you intended. The above sentence would have made more since if it was written as "As it fell onto the floor with a soft thud, she kicked it to the other side to the stall." I know I just tore into your story a lot buy I'm not trying to be rude, just pointing out your mistakes so you can learn from them. I liked your story and please continue it.

[GeekSquad_in_Diapers]

I know this is kind of late, but I feel I was a little harsh with my first post. I'm sorry if I can across as mean or discouraged you from wrighting, it was not my intention.