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Story Synopsis: This a new story is about a voluptuous woman (35 years old) Lilly who's career it has been to be a luxury brand influencer. For the last seven years Lilly has been at the top of her influencing career, modeling cloths, shoes, endorsing beauty product's, travel destination's, etc. It was during a trip to Tuscany where she met her soon to be husbands Bryan. Bryan who was ten years her senior had a "dad" bod and was the VP of a film studio. They fell madly in love, at that time Bryan who was just a single dad after his wife of 19 years passed away three years earlier. Bryan had a son named Paul (17 going on 18), Paul unlike his dad had a toned body but was quite and kept to himself. Three years later Lilly is still a top influencer but no longer the TOP one. She's getting older and is struggling to keep herself relevant. Meanwhile her friends also influencers & married have found new success as influencers......MOMMY influencers with their infants, toddlers and preschoolers. Lilly was never one to want to have a baby, getting Bryan fixed to keep her figure. However when it's suggested that Lilly can try teenage step mommy influencing videos with Paul. Lilly thinks to herself she must be crazy as an influencing video goes wrong and Lilly ends up "mothering" Paul for 30 seconds and the clip becomes one of her most recently popular & profitable ones, setting us on our path...... Chapter One: Lilly stared at the mirror, meticulously smoothing her platinum blonde hair into flawless waves, each strand gleaming under the vanity lights. At thirty-five, she'd painstakingly built an empire, one glamorous, curated post at a time. Once, Lilly's name dominated social media’s glamour spectrum; her extravagant travel vlogs, couture-filled closets, and meticulously staged selfies commanded millions of followers. Every endorsement deal had been a glittering jewel in her digital crown, each more luxurious than the last. But today, as her perfectly manicured finger scrolled through analytics, the steady decline in followers felt like tiny needles prickling her porcelain skin. Anxiety flickered in her carefully charcoal-outlined eyes as her reflection grimaced back at her. "You ready, Lilly?" Kim called from downstairs, her voice echoing with the unmistakable cheer of someone whose influencer career was effortlessly thriving. "Coming!" Lilly forced brightness into her voice, quickly swiping away her dwindling follower count and smoothing out her silk blouse. Descending the marble staircase of her pristine Sarasota home, Lilly’s smile tightened at the sight of her influencer friends—each glowing, effortlessly chic mothers expertly juggling toddlers, diaper bags branded with luxury logos, and carefully positioned smartphones. Her stomach knotted when Kim, cradling a squirming, giggling two-year-old, flashed a triumphant grin. "Seriously, Kim, your engagement lately has been insane," Tiffany gushed, adjusting her own baby’s organic cotton bonnet, her voice tinged with admiration and envy. "Mommy content is the new goldmine," Kim said smugly, bouncing her child gently on her hip. "Audiences adore real parenting struggles—it's authentic, relatable." Lilly felt her lips twitch involuntarily. Authentic. Relatable. The words tasted bitter in her mouth. Her polished lifestyle—luxury vacations, elite fashion events, exclusive skincare routines—once her currency, now seemed hollow beside the charming chaos of motherhood. "What's it like, Kim?" Lilly found herself asking, genuine curiosity softening her voice despite herself. "Being a mommy, I mean?" Kim's eyes lit up, face animated with a warmth Lilly had rarely seen. "Exhausting, messy, nonstop. I haven't had perfect nails in months because I'm always elbow-deep in mashed peas or diaper cream." Kim laughed warmly, kissing her son’s forehead. "But honestly? I wouldn’t trade it for anything. It's pure chaos, Lilly, but it fills you with so much love, you forget about everything else." Lilly’s heart twisted, an unfamiliar ache settling in her chest. Could she ever feel that way? Could motherhood really become her new platform? "Lilly, maybe you should consider it," Kim teased lightly, casting a glance around the elegantly childless space. "You've got Paul already—instant teenage content! Teenagers can be just as relatable." Lilly forced a laugh, masking her irritation. Paul. Bryan's gangly, withdrawn eighteen-year-old son from his previous marriage. Their interactions were mostly limited to polite avoidance, marked by awkward silences and sidestepped glances rather than genuine familial warmth. Just days ago, they'd argued awkwardly in the kitchen over something trivial. "Paul, have you seen my phone charger?" Lilly asked, her tone sharper than she'd intended. Paul barely glanced up from his cereal bowl, his voice a monotone. "No." "Well, it's not where I left it," she pressed, irritation rising. "Did you take it to your room again?" He sighed heavily, eyes narrowing slightly. "Why would I? I've got my own." "Because you've done it before," Lilly snapped, crossing her arms defensively. Paul shoved his chair back, frustration clear in the tense lines of his body. "Just forget it, okay? I'll buy you a new one if it's that important." The tension between them had thickened into a quiet resentment, their coexistence fractured into strained silences and terse exchanges, punctuated only by Bryan’s occasional interventions from afar. Hours later, as her friends waved cheerful goodbyes, Lilly sank onto her velvet sofa, her mind racing. Bryan, as always, was miles away on another endless business trip, leaving her alone in their pristine yet eerily empty home. Paul, hidden upstairs, absorbed in video games or whatever else consumed teenagers these days, seemed worlds apart. She'd never wanted children—babies were messy, noisy, an inconvenience to her meticulously curated existence. Yet now, desperation gnawed at her. The allure of revived success flickered temptingly, brighter than her long-held reservations. Chapter Two: Lilly woke the next morning surprisingly energized, slipping effortlessly into her brand-new Lulu Lemon leggings and Skechers slip-ons. A smile played on her lips as she recalled Kim's absurd suggestion about creating "parenting content." Parenting Paul, the teenage wastoid? Utterly ridiculous. But then again, perhaps borrowing Kim's adorable toddler Sammy occasionally—"Auntie Lilly" videos could provide the fresh content she needed. As she descended the stairs for her morning run, she paused outside Paul's bedroom door, compelled by an unfamiliar curiosity. Quietly pushing open the door, Lilly was momentarily startled by the sight—Paul lay sprawled across his bed, uncovered, vulnerable, and oblivious. Suppressing a giggle, she noticed Paul's immature frame and whispered to herself, amused, "Well, there's certainly one thing you didn't inherit from your daddy." Shaking her head lightly, she gently draped a sheet over him before silently exiting. Paul stirred awake shortly afterward, his skin prickling from embarrassment and unease. Had Lilly been in his room? Heat rose in his cheeks, shame tightening his chest. Quickly, he forced himself through his morning exercises—sit-ups, push-ups—trying desperately to shed his anxiety. Showering hastily, he avoided eye contact with his own reflection, feeling overly self-conscious about his youthful build. His mother's absence was palpable, the ache for her nurturing presence always a quiet pain. Andrea would have made mornings easier, warmer somehow. Entering the kitchen, Paul sighed at its emptiness. No breakfast—no renewal for the meal service, a subtle neglect. He envied Amber, whose mom made legendary breakfast nachos for her and her friends. Just as his thoughts spiraled darker, Lilly breezed in from her run, glowing and energized but clearly distracted. "Good morning, Lilly," Paul attempted a polite smile. "Good run? Want breakfast?" She paused, assessing him skeptically—his messy hair, childish Ninja Turtles shirt. "No thanks, Paul," she replied lightly, hiding amusement behind politeness. "Shouldn't you get going? You have school." Paul watched her retreat upstairs, irritation simmering beneath a veneer of indifference. Muttering "Dumb bitch," under his breath, he grabbed a Sunny D and protein bar, resigned to another lackluster morning. At school, the familiar anxiety knotted Paul's stomach. His solace lay in Drama and English, but everywhere else he was painfully average. Zach and Mitchell greeted him enthusiastically at his locker. "Hey man, your stepmom’s newest post is fire," Zach teased, elbowing him playfully. Paul grimaced, forcing a laugh, "Dude, that’s gross." It was humiliating having Lilly admired openly by peers. His embarrassment deepened as Amber and her cheerleading squad walked past. Paul’s breath caught, heart hammering. Amber's silky black hair cascaded over her shoulders, her emerald eyes sparkling as she laughed with friends. He daydreamed briefly about holding her hand, walking proudly beside her, hearing her whisper secrets just for him. Reality crashed back when she passed without even a glance, leaving Paul feeling utterly invisible. In gym class later, Paul dribbled the basketball awkwardly, his lanky limbs betraying him. Marcus and Dylan, star athletes, mocked openly, jeering loudly. "Hey, Pauly, pee-wee leagues are that way!" Dylan sneered, causing laughter to ripple through the class. Flustered, Paul felt heat rise to his face, humiliation making his hands shake. Suddenly, a shove sent him sprawling, and in a sickening moment of panic, he nearly lost control of his bladder. Mortified, he stood quickly, feeling his face burn red as he whispered to himself, "Great, still dribbling at 17. No girl's ever gonna want this." Back home, Lilly’s mind raced after her Zoom call with Kim and Mindy, jealousy simmering. Mindy's Huggies deal echoed in her thoughts—a five-year partnership because followers loved "real motherhood." Lilly stared at her declining follower count, resentment twisting her stomach. A spark of inspiration struck suddenly, an idea blooming. She remembered the awkwardness in Paul's demeanor, his shy uncertainty. What if she embraced teenage motherhood content instead? She could dominate a fresh niche, revitalizing her career. Yes, Paul was her ticket back to the top. "I'll My-Fair-Lady him," she whispered excitedly to herself. "Turn him into someone confident, someone followers will root for." Smirking, she considered how she'd charmed Bryan—through his stomach. Cooking Paul's favorite meal, peppercorn steak with twice-baked potatoes and steamed lemon-infused garlic green beans, would soften him up perfectly. That evening, Paul walked in warily, immediately struck by the tantalizing aroma. Lilly, standing poised in the kitchen, smiled warmly. "Hungry, Paul?" Her voice unusually gentle. "Yeah," he answered cautiously, taking a seat. "Smells incredible." The meal was undeniably delicious, each bite softening Paul's defenses slightly. Lilly watched carefully, sensing her opportunity. "Hey, Paul," she began carefully, voice gentle yet persuasive. "Would you… want to film something casual with me?" Paul hesitated mid-sip, skepticism clouding his expression. "Film what exactly?" "Something simple, maybe a day-in-the-life type of thing, or testing new products together," she proposed smoothly, attempting to mask her desperation with calm sincerity. His brows knitted suspiciously. "Why me? Isn't that what your friends' kids are for?" "Exactly," Lilly admitted, smiling with calculated authenticity. "Family content is really popular, and technically, we’re family. Could be good for us, Paul." Paul eyed her critically, thoughts racing. Finally, he sighed, nodding reluctantly. "Fine, just don’t make it weird, okay?" "Great!" Lilly exhaled, surprised by the genuine relief she felt. "It won’t be weird, Paul. It'll just be… authentic." He rolled his eyes softly but surprised himself by continuing the conversation casually. They shared stories of their day, Paul opening up cautiously about his humiliating gym class experience and the persistent ache of feeling invisible. Lilly found herself genuinely laughing and sympathizing, forgetting briefly her calculated intentions. As dinner ended, Paul, feeling oddly content, suggested hesitantly, "Maybe we could catch a movie sometime. Together, or separately if you prefer." Lilly smiled warmly, nodding. "I'd like that, Paul." Upstairs, Paul lay awake, conflicted. Lilly was manipulative—controlling—but tonight had felt almost…normal. His father's words echoed clearly: "Respect Lilly, but you don’t have to call her Mom." Paul hadn't, wouldn’t. Still, as he drifted off, he admitted begrudgingly to himself that dinner had felt comforting, like a glimpse of family he'd long missed. Meanwhile, downstairs, Lilly checked her phone eagerly—her initial teaser post about "teenage step-motherhood" had exploded in views. Her heart raced, excitement building. "This could work," she whispered triumphantly. "Maybe, just maybe, I've finally found my way back to the top." Chapter Three: Kim’s kitchen buzzed with warmth and the aroma of homemade applesauce as Lilly stepped inside, a gentle breeze following her through the open door. Kim was at the center of it all, apron splattered artistically with fresh applesauce, a picture of motherly charm as she attempted to feed her squirmy two-year-old, Dylan. The toddler giggled, smearing applesauce everywhere except his mouth. "Lilly! Come in, grab a seat," Kim greeted cheerily, dodging Dylan’s tiny hands. Lilly slid onto a kitchen stool, eyes sparkling with excitement. "So, guess what? I'm finally doing it—the teenage makeover series! Paul has reluctantly agreed to be my first victim." Kim clapped excitedly, nearly dropping the spoon. "Oh my gosh, this is exactly what you needed! Teens are so hot right now. Maybe something like 'Stepmom Style Rescue' or 'Teen Transformation Tuesdays'?" "Perfect! And maybe a ‘Date-Night Disaster’ episode," Lilly laughed, enthusiasm spilling over as they bounced ideas back and forth. Their excited chatter halted abruptly as Dylan spat out applesauce, giggling at the mess he'd created. "Oh, great," Kim sighed dramatically, wiping Dylan's chubby face. "This could definitely go viral." "Careful, Kim," Lilly teased gently. "Don't expect compliments from any clean eaters. Paul stained his shirt with spaghetti last night. He's 17, not 17 months." Kim laughed loudly. "Paul’s always been adorable. Maybe your teenager needs a teenage-sized bibby!" Their laughter echoed through the kitchen, Dylan joining in gleefully at the sound of their voices. Later in the day sunlight danced over the clear blue water as Paul, Zach, and Mitchell splashed around Paul's backyard pool, passing a basketball between them. Paul leaped, throwing a wild shot that missed spectacularly. "You going FIU for sure, Zach?" Mitchell called, expertly snatching the rebound. "Pretty much set," Zach said, sinking an easy shot. "How about you, Mitch?" "University of Miami," Mitchell replied, puffing his chest out proudly. "Already got my acceptance letter." Paul's stomach twisted. "Cool," he shrugged, attempting casual confidence. "I'm thinking LSU, TCU, or Maryland State." Internally, Paul winced. If only they'd hurry up with those waitlist decisions. Don't blow your cover now, man. "Good luck getting into any of those," Zach teased playfully. "Unless Amber's going with you. Then you might have a shot." "Dude, totally," Mitchell laughed. "No chance in hell," he added, dramatically humming Vince McMahon’s theme song. "Shut up, guys," Paul protested weakly, cheeks reddening. "Amber and I totally held hands once." "By accident," Zach countered immediately, mimicking awkward hand fumbling. Mitchell doubled over laughing. Humiliated, Paul's embarrassment morphed into a mischievous impulse. He launched the basketball hard, unintentionally catching Zach squarely in the groin. "Dude, what the FUCK was that?" Zach shouted, collapsing dramatically into the water. "Language!" Lilly’s voice sliced through the laughter sharply. The boys turned, instantly quiet, captivated by Lilly casually walking toward the sauna. Her white bikini top hugged her curves perfectly, emphasizing her slender waist and gently accentuating her graceful neckline. The matching white bikini bottom sat elegantly on her hips, highlighting her toned legs and shapely figure. Each step she took was confident yet casual, effortlessly drawing attention with a gentle sway that emphasized the natural elegance and allure of her figure. Paul blushed deeper. "Sorry," he muttered. "Remember, Paul, we're filming today," Lilly said breezily. "Play nice." Mitchell helped Zach stand, leaning close with a teasing whisper, "I hate when your stepmom leaves, but love watching her walk away." "Hey, Paul," Zach called weakly, recovering slowly. "Is today's video X-rated or triple-X?" The boys erupted into laughter again, splashing water playfully, while Paul's embarrassment smoldered beneath the surface. "Hey lovelies! Welcome back! Today I'm sharing essential tips for parenting your teenage stepchild!" Lilly chirped into her phone camera as Paul walked reluctantly into frame, visibly uncomfortable. "Can we just not?" Paul groaned, tugging at his shirt awkwardly. "Aw, honey, it'll be quick," Lilly cooed in a soothing, maternal tone usually reserved for toddlers. "Today, we're tackling teen grunge," Lilly continued cheerfully, ignoring Paul’s protest. She began pulling clothes from his closet, her voice dripping with saccharine sweetness. "Let's see what's hiding in here!" Each item Lilly revealed intensified Paul's embarrassment. "Really, Paul? Is this a shirt or a cleaning rag? Oh, these jeans—did you wrestle a bear in them?" Paul’s anxiety grew with each critique, his face heating painfully. Lilly's internal monologue screamed with frustration. How can he go out dressed like this? We need something that screams confidence, not ‘I found this in a dumpster.’ She triumphantly pulled out an outfit from Paul's childhood—a checkered polo shirt, khaki shorts with suspenders, and a bowtie. "Oh, how adorable! You still fit into this!" "Stop, Lilly! Enough!" Paul snapped, voice shaking, embarrassment turning to anger. "I’m not a toddler! Get out of my room!" "Oh, sweetie," Lilly soothed dismissively, gently patting his arm as though calming a child. "Just a little stage fright. It'll pass once you see how popular this gets. Trust me." "I said STOP!" Paul shouted fiercely, stunning Lilly into silence. "Get the hell out of my closet, my room, my life!" Lilly blinked, caught off guard by his intensity, and silently backed out. Hours later, Lilly sat editing footage in her home office, smiling fondly at the screen. She carefully selected moments where Paul appeared adorably frustrated, giggling at his childish protests. Oh, Paul, she thought affectionately. You really are too precious. She paused on the clip of Paul in the childhood outfit, hesitating before deciding it was too good to exclude. Adorable, yes, but we definitely need to upgrade your style. Her eyes drifted to her calendar, counting down—395 days until Paul left for college. Lilly sighed dreamily, imagining a luxurious cruise with Bryan. Just the two of us, no interruptions. God, we need that. "Only 395 days left," she whispered happily. Engrossed, she swiftly reviewed clips, missing one critical segment—a small slip, an accidental comment recorded clearly. She uploaded the video obliviously, unaware that this seemingly innocent oversight would soon send their lives spiraling into an unexpected, unplanned future, far removed from her dreams of a leisurely cruise.

Hi everyone, I am pretty new to writing abdl fiction, so please be nice but constructive. Feedback is appreciated. Premise: 22-year-old Anderson Keller is Hollywood's bad boy, but an incident has turned his career upside down. Enjoy! Chapter 1: Anderson paced in the living room of his Hollywood apartment as all the entertainment news sites and shows were airing his dirty deed in front of the whole world. “This is Evening Tea with Josh Tea. Tonight's top story Hollywood Bad Boy Anderson Keller shows us he is just a stinky boy.” The entertainment host announced before letting out a chuckle. “Let's roll the clip,” the entertainment host instructed. The screen cut to a video of Anderson. There was Anderson in tight light wash skinny jeans and a tight heather grey t-shirt. Filmed by strangers this morning in a popular WEHO coffee shop. After coming back in from a wrong order. “Are you guys stupid, I said oat milk, you fucking excuse of a person,” Anderson biliterated the poor barista who looked on the verge of tears. “I do not look this good every morning if I consume fucking dairy.” Anderson continued slamming the iced latte down on the pick-up counter making a mess. “Now clean this up and get me your manager. You are so fired.” Anderson continued. Tears started to stream from the barista's face as she ran to the back to get her manager. Some customers booed at Anderson while some started to get their cameras to film the incident. “Oh, shut up!” Anderson growled. A man in his early thirties with green highlights came out the back to meet with Anderson at the counter. “I am so sorry we got your order wrong mister, what can we do to make it right? A remake?” The manager offered. “I want the girl who poisoned me fired. I want your ass to make me a new sugar free vanilla latte with oat milk and I want a refund,” Anderson fumed. Soon enough Anderson's stomach gurgled like it was fighting a war. Anderson grabbed his stomach and groaned. “Hey, are you alright,” the manager asked. “Where are your bathrooms?” Anderson replied with a question. “On the other side of the store,” The manager pointed to a door on the far side of the coffee shop. Anderson with stomach in hand attempted to rush to the bathroom but became unsteady. He grabbed a chair to hold himself up. He was almost there. “UGH,” Anderson groaned as his stomach was losing a battle. He fell to his knees as his stomach cramps were only getting worse. One sip of a latte with dairy was the victor. As everyone filmed and watched Anderson mess his jeans. Anderson with tears in his eyes rushed out of the store cursing slurs to everyone in the store. Anderson continued to pace in his living room, as he was expecting his manager to come knocking any moment now. The whole world saw him shit himself. His bad boy image ruined like those jeans peaking in his master bathroom's trash can. Anderson in some clean grey sweats and an old band tee decided to change the channel and hope there was one that wasn’t covering this morning's incident. “Crybaby of the week goes Anderson Keller,” a young woman wearing a skimpy business suit announced. Anderson changed the channel once more. “Let’s talk about Anderson Keller, is his career ruined like his pants?” A man in a cardigan asked a panelist of entertainment specialists. “Let’s face it, not even my 3-year tantrums that bad when they go poop in their big kid undies. And they make it to the bathroom 90% of the time” One of the entertainment specialists commented. “Looks like Anderson is going to need a lifeline and some pull-ups,” Another specialist said laughing. Anderson decided just to shut off the tv. Letting himself fall onto the couch. He deeply sighed, rubbing his temples, getting his brown curly hair out of his face. DING DONG! The doorbell announced. Anderson slowly got up from the couch reluctantly going to answer the door knowing it was his manager, and ex-boyfriend. Anderson slowly opened the door to see a man in his mid-fifties with salt and pepper hair and a well-trimmed beard. Lucas Mills, stood in the hallway Anderson's former boyfriend, and now business manager. He carried a leather briefcase. “Well, are you gonna let me in,” Lucas asked. Anderson let Lucas in walking to the kitchen to get a glass of water. Lucas followed. Before getting a glass Lucas rustled Anderson's perfect brown hair. A long silence erupted as both men were standing in front of each other at the kitchen island. Anderson filled the glass with filtered water from his fridge. “First order of business how are you holding up buddy,” Lucas asked, breaking the silence. “How do you think I am doing,” Anderson replied with a hint of anger. “The whole world saw me embarrass myself. My life is over, my career is over, “Anderson blurted. “Hey bud, we don’t self-deprecate. Not while I’m here,” Lucas replied as trying to console a child. Anderson faced palmed and groaned in frustration. “2nd order of business, Marvel pulled out. This morning incident confirmed you weren’t the right person to represent the brand in their next featured project. The edgy tv show about vampires also does not want you to return. They are gonna kill off your character. And well, you lost a handful of brand deals. I know. I know it looks grim right now.” Lucas explained. Anderson sighed. Putting his hands on his face again. “Hey bud, look at me, I want to see those lovely eyes.,” Lucas said, reaching out, touching Anderson's arm. Anderson removed his hands from his face. Staring at Lucas. “There are those ocean eyes,” Lucas announced. Anderson wanted to just disappear. “3rd order of business. Things aren’t that bad. We spin this. You were acting out because you have bowel issues. You were never an arrogant brat. Some good pr, we turn you into a boy next door who was hurt and embarrassed. We get you on some late-night talk shows. Fuck it, we get you on daytime ones too.” Lucas explained. “You want to spin this into I’m an adult in their early twenties who can’t hold their shit,” Anderson growled. “It’s not that bud, plenty of people….” Lucas stared before getting cut off by Anderson. “If you call me bud again. I’m gonna crash out. You will be out of this apartment needing stitches. Get to the point already,” Anderson angrily snarled. “Well, there is a brand willing to work with you. It’s a little unorthodox, but if you let me run the pr. It can be great. If the boy next door image works, you can play heroes not villains. There is also a reality competition series interested in you. Oh, and a movie part. Not a superhero one but a romcom.” Lucas continued. “What’s the brand willing to work with me?” Anderson asked on the verge of losing his patience. Lucas gulped knowingly that Anderson would not like the deal offered. “Kozi Kare….an adult diaper brand….” Lucas nervously stated. Expecting the worst coming from Anderson. “You got to be kidding me. I am not an unpotty-trained child.” Anderson angrily snarled. He grabbed the closest thing near him which was the glass of water he got when Lucas first came to the kitchen and threw it against the wall shattering. “You said you are not a child and yet you throw a tantrum breaking glass in the kitchen. I have been very empathic and patient with you Anderson. You have options. Clean up the mess you did and clear your head. I will be back first thing in the morning and expect an answer,” Lucas said at his limit. Lucas grabbed his leather briefcase and stormed out of Anderson's apartment. Leaving Anderson, to clean up the mess he created. Sweeping up shards of broken glass and pieces of his dignity. Before heading to bed, he looked at himself in the mirror. Was he prepared to change his image to save his career or was he ready to leave Hollywood behind? Become a has been who’s acting career plummeted due to a short temper and an accident. Both were terrible choices. He did not want to make either. Anderson took a deep breath and sent a text to Lucas falling into the only comfort he had left his bed.

Okay so a little bit ago I said I wasn't going to try to make a daycare story with Ash and Zoe because I couldn't really think of a good motivation to get them separated but I really really wanted to do something for Halloween and include a daycare story yes I know it's completely late and I'm actually still writing this so what I'm going to do is release the first two parts because I have those done and I'm actually currently working on part 3 At the moment I will say the pacing does bother me a little bit so I really would appreciate feedback and yes my story probably is a little bit different from the average but understand I am a very different type of writer than the average you will normally see. So either way here is part 1 and part 2 of my story that and I was going to ask a question about Grammarly but after looking at the section about that I only use it for spelling and grammar and nothing more so that's yeah I got my question answered on that and honestly after using it I'm not exactly I don't want to say I hate it it's just man if you're writing a long story it is exceptionally annoying to use. Part 1 Happy Halloween everyone it’s the day before Halloween Eve in the Sinnoh region and our heroes are Excited for this year’s Halloween Ball now ash and company are getting ready to go costume shopping and prepping For the ball this evening what mysteries will they find who will they run into Get ready for some spooky fun and adventure what surprises will they find what Pokemon will they run into and who is going with who to the ball today find out The answers to these questions and more as we join our heroes and find out. “Ash Brock come on if we don’t hurry all the good costumes are gonna be gone.” “Okay okay Dawn we’re coming We have all day to shop don’t worry and Ash why so down? The ball is going to be a lot of fun. “Ya I know I know Brock I’m just a little bummed still though I guess a ball could be some fun.” “WWWWWWWW WHAT HOW CAN YOU BE BUMMED ABOUT GOING TO A HALLOWEEN BALL. ASH IT’S AN IMPORTANT EVENT IN A YOUNG MAN’S LIFE. THINK ABOUT IT HOW MANY OPPORTUNITIES DO YOU HAVE TO DRESS UP AND BE WHATEVER YOU WANT WHETHER IT BE A PRINCE OR A HERO AND EVEN FIND YOUR PRINCESS A JOURNEY IS ABOUT MORE THAN POKEMON TRAINING ASH IT’S ABOUT LIVING AND GROWING AS A YOUNG MAN THIS COULD BE YOUR TIME YOUR TIME TO BLOSSOM AND TO A PROPER YOUNG MAN AND FIND THE MAIDEN OF YOUR LIFE AND FIND LOVE LIKE IT SHALL FIND ME HOPEFULLY.” “Ummmmmm…………..Ya Sure Brock whatever you say although He does have a little bit of a point Ash you could focus on something else aside from Pokemon training and food for once.” “Ummmmm………Maybe Dawn but Proper young man? And find a young maiden to love? Bit much don’t you think?” “I’m not disagreeing with you on that Ash but theatrics aside Brock does have a little bit of a point but still you’re not wrong.” “Right anyway let’s head to the- “Well well well what a surprise its Ash Brock and DD.” “I thought I heard a familiar voice Nice to see you Guys again and I see Brock hasn’t changed much giggles.” “KENNY FOR THE 1000000TH TIME STOP CALLING ME THAT IT’S DAWN NOT DD.” “Wow Zoe Kenny nice running into you too How are you two?” “Well I don’t know about Kenny but I’m fine so are you guys here to go shopping for the Halloween ball today?” “Of course they are why else would they Be heading to go costume shopping Zoe By the way have you guys decided what you want to be I’m going to be a prince.” “Of course I know what I’m going to be THE MASKED HERO OF LOVE AND MYSTERY ZORRO TO CHARM BEAUTIFUL YOUNG MAIDENS HEARTS OF COURSE” “Er………Right Brock I don’t know yet still kind of deciding.” “You Kenny a prince yeah only he could pull that off on Halloween I intend to be a beautiful glamorous princess of course.” “Ummm…….I I’m kind of with ash on this one I’m still deciding.” “Well hey if all else fails Ash you can always just be a prince and Zoe can be a princess.” “Er………….How about we just go to the costume shop and maybe me and Ash will get some ideas.” “Ya…………..Zoe’s Right let’s head to the costume shop and we’ll figure that out.” “Awwwwww Zoe What do you mean I bet you would make a really cute princess giggles.” “Ya I bet you two could pull off a prince and a princess pretty good Even if ash isn’t a coordinator.” But before the conversation between the friends could continue they were interrupted by a very familiar purple haired trainer with a Smug scowl on his face. “Well well If it isn’t Ash Ketchum and his weakling friends Here to waste your time with that pitiful Halloween ball I suppose.” “PAUL WHAT’S YOUR PROBLEM YOU JERK THERE’S NOTHING WRONG WITH THE HALLOWEEN BALL MAYBE YOU SHOULD TRY HAVING SOME FUN MR. GRUMP YOU’D MAKE A REALLY GOOD GRINCH.” “As if I would waste my time with such illogical silly folly then again I suppose it makes sense for you to waste your time with it ash which is why you’ll never beat me Just like your friends your pathetic and weak.” “That enough Paul just because you beat me twice doesn’t mean I’m weak. My Pokemon are my friends and I have a bond with them you’ll never understand.” “Yeah and who are you calling weak Paul Ash may Have lost you but at least he knows how to treat his Pokemon.” “I treat my Pokemon as there i should I train them hard so that they’ll live up to their true potential if they have any And if not I release them plain and simple Bonds are weakness feelings are weakness nothing more.” “Oh Yeah how about a battle Mr. Jerk put your money where your mouth is.” “You? Battle ahahahahahahhahaha Don’t make me laugh coordinator In a real battle you’d stand no chance. You rely on points for victory not strength Pathetic nothing more.” “What are you even doing here Paul if you’re not here the costume shop then what?” “That’s not your concern, mind your own business.” “Okay that’s enough Paul I know why you’re here or what you’re here for but obviously you’re not here to a costume shop Now please leave You and Ash Will settle your business at the Pokemon League.” “So you actually managed to get all badges did you well It still doesn’t matter you lost me Twice and the league will be the third you’ll always be Be weak Ash Ketchum plain and simple as long as you rely on feelings for strength Same thing with your week coordinator friends.” With that And one final smirk before Paul walked off Leaving ash and his friends in a very very infuriated Zoe to say the least. “TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT THAT STUPID PURPLE HAIRED HEARTLESS JERKFACE TRAINER I HOPE YOU LOSE IN THE FIRST ROUND YOU JERK THAT’S ALL YOU DESERVE.” “Ummm…….Zoe It’s okay Paul’s a jerk but don’t- But Ash and the others were cut off and before anyone could say anything Zoe turned around and stomped. Towards the exit with her fists clenched with absolute anger and rage. And shouted I’ll be back later Before stomping off leaving Ash and the others. “Well what now? When Zoe gets like this It’s hard to reason with her at all.” “I’m going after her I’ll catch up with you guys later with Zoe but we just can’t leave her by herself she’s our friend after all.” “You sure ash I mean maybe we just let her come down and she’ll come back on her own?” “Kenny don’t bother Trust me when Ash puts his mind to something it’s impossible to tell him not to do it.” “Yep Completely fine Go bring her back Ash but remember don’t take too long or all the costumes are going to be gone And you don’t want to be the only ones going to the Halloween ball without a costume right? So just make sure you two get back before then.” “You Got it Dawn.” Ash giving his signature thumbs up before bolting after Zoe leaving the others to simply shrugged her shoulders and head into the first costume shop. The 3 of them Just hope that Ash and Zoe would be okay. After all Ash Is known to have trouble follow him and outside of Glameow and Pikachu other other Pokemon are at the Pokemon Center resting. And the two of them still need a costume shop Dawn may tease the two of them But she would never wish her friends not to have a good time at the ball. And goodness knows it wouldn’t kill Ash to pay attention to girls a little bit more. Meanwhile with Zoe and Glameow Outside of the mall And on the out Of the forest of Lantern Town Zoe Was simply just pacing trying to calm herself down. “OH THAT PAUL HE GETS UNDER MY SKIN SO MUCH PATHETIC ME? CONTESTS AND LEAGUES ARE COMPLETELY DIFFERENT YOU’D KNOW THAT IF YOU PAY ATTENTION TO THAT YOU JERK AND WHO IS HE TO MAKE FUN OF ASH SO WHAT IF HE LOST TO HIM TWO TIMES HE’S A WAY BETTER TRAINER THAN HE’D EVER BE JUST AHHHHHHH.” “Zoe please calm down? You getting mad about it isn’t going to help anything besides all that matters is that Ash knows what he’s worth And I’d say he certainly does.” “Does he? Glameow does he really? I’m not so sure then again why does Paul get under my skin? Especially when it comes to Ash he just Irritates me so much.” “Perhaps you should think about it after you actually go costume shopping For the ball tonight?” “AHHHHH Another problem I don’t even know what I want to be Then again Ash doesn’t either Ash Would he even want to go with me I mean he’s traveling with Dawn wouldn’t he rather go with her?” “ZOE Don’t think like that Dawn Maybe traveling with him but she obviously hasn’t made a move and ash is a little bit clueless to girls so I see you have just as good of a chance As she does to go with him and You know it wouldn’t kill you to wear a dress every once in a great while just saying.” “Ahhhhh oh not you too Glameow First mom and Dawn now you to I have my own sense of style I’m just not a girly girl and I just don’t like dresses.” But so his thoughts were interrupted by the arrival of a very familiar raven haired trainer along with his Pikachu Much to her shock and surprise. “Zoe Glameow there you two are look I know Paul can be a pain but you shouldn’t have wandered off like that. We were all worried about you especially since you’ve only got glameow. On you you’re our friend after all right buddy.” “Yep Everyone was worried About you too don’t worry about Paul Me and Ash will handle him in the league But don’t just wander off by yourself ok. Besides Goodness knows my trainer here is probably going to need your help to Help him actually get a decent costume.” “Giggles Thanks you two Although I assure you I’m no damsel in distress but I do appreciate it I just Are that Paul gets under my skin I just kind of want to walk for a bit.” “Unfortunately when she gets like this it’s the only way to get her 2 calm down. So it may be a little bit before she wants to go costume shopping.” “Hmmmm Well if that’s the case the Me and Pikachu will walk with you to It’s always easier to deal with problems With friends than alone What do you say Zoe?” “Huh but Ash Are you sure I mean aren’t you worried about getting a costume for the ball tonight?” “You’re more important than that Zoe besides. Like Pikachu said I don’t have a fashion sense to save my life lol. So I’m probably going to need your help or Dawn’s anyway.” “Giggles well I guess I have to accept your offer then Seriously though fashion isn’t as hard as you think hasn’t Dawn ever taken the time to at least show you a little bit?” “Ummmmmm Zoe Have you ever seen her shop?” “Oh……..Right Point taken Anyway Let’s go for a walk.” With a nod from ash And their fellow Pokemon they start walking into the forest Zoe explain it’s a shortcut back to the Pokemon Center. If nothing else the walk would help her cool her head. Their Pokemon couldn’t help but notice though Zoe seemed a lot happier when she was talking to Ash. “Hmmmm Zoe sure does seem a lot calmer when she’s talking to your trainer Pikachu.” “Oh you noticed Still though ash does talk a lot more when he’s around Zoe.” “Really I would have figured he was a little bit closer to Dawn?” “Please Glameow don’t even say that Here’s the thing with those two They’re good friends but There’s a word I’m searching for and I’m not finding it er Dawn is A little too Obsessive over certain things.” “Oh How do you mean I mean I know she likes the shop but it can’t be that bad can it?” “Not that bad? Have you ever shopped with her before? 100 Stores in 5 minutes with 10 bags each How does that even make sense?” “Er…….Well Us girls like to look good what can I say but That does seem a little Obsessive 100? In 5 minutes really?” “Yeah my point that and well if you haven’t noticed my trainer is a little clueless when it comes to girls to be blunt. And The whole You should know this already doesn’t really work with him. He needs a girl that’s going to be honest.” “Oh i see What about you then Pikachu? Hmmmmm you and Buneary Seemed awfully close.” “Huh that well she’s cute but er……again It would be like the first time I met you And saying that you and I are dating Despite that never actually happening.” “Wow That’s one obsessive bunny that’s for sure.” “Tell me how do you think I feel? Honestly though I think I need to work on Mr. Clueless here about girls before I can even think about that Although I’ll say it does kind of give me an excuse to not think about that.” “Hmmmmm so What would you say if Said I like you?” “Huh ? you Ummmmm well I don’t know Kind of hard for me to answer that I don’t know you that well I mean you’re pretty You’re very talented when it comes to contests and very graceful if that’s what you mean?” “Awwwww Pikachu That’s so sweet of you to say Who knows Maybe if mistress makes a move on your trainer. This cute kitty just may snatch you up Wink wink.” “Blushes Ummmmmmmmmmmmm………..Er no comment.” Ash and Zoe continued with their conversation In order to cool her head and got so distracted they didn’t notice until it was too late. That the forest they were in looked nothing like the forest They had been in before To the point where the trees were a different color And it seemed darker what made things even stranger is the clocks on their Pokedex had frozen at 12 PM. It didn’t help things that it had a very creepy feeling A feeling very reminiscent to Ash and Pikachu of When they went into that haunted house to catch ghost Pokemon Not the best of memories for the two of them to say the least. “Ok I don’t have the best sense of direction but I’m pretty sure this is not the forest that we walked in 20 minutes ago.” “Yeah you’re not wrong ash even weirder why are our clocks frozen at 12 noon?” “No idea but hey what’s that?” “Ummmm Well I would say it’s a Pokemon Center but it looks too big to be one With different entrances It almost looks like a school?” “Yeah looks really old though but it looks like there’s power on At the very least Still kind of gives me some flashbacks right buddy.” “Yeah you said it I mean I’m happy we’re still alive but That was a weird experience That’s for sure.” “Yeah I don’t know though Being a ghost was kind of fun.” “Ummmmmm…….Ash Pikachu explanation please?” “I mean It wasn’t that big of a deal Zoe Just because me and Pikachu died once it’s no big deal lol.” “ASH KETCHUM DON’T YOU DARE JOKE ABOUT THAT THAT’S NOT FUNNY YOU KNOW IT I WOULD BE VERY SAD IF YOU WERE TO DIE AND SO WOULD THE REST OF US SO DON’T YOU DARE JOKE ABOUT THAT AGAIN GOT IT AND WHAT DO YOU MEAN ONCE?” “YEAH ZOE’S RIGHT WHAT ARE YOU TWO THINKING I WOULD BE VERY SAD IF ANYTHING HAPPENED TO YOU PIKACHU SO DON’T YOU DARE JOKE ABOUT THAT GOT IT.” “Okay okay calm down girls let me explain Maybe I should have worded that different?” “You think but then again Not really sure how else you word becoming a ghost?” “Again Ash Pikachu EXPLAIN NOW.” One very long explanation about what happened at Sabrina’s gym the haunted house and the SSN and the island of Giant Pokemon later. “So that’s what happened Right Pikachu?” “Yep that’s 100% what happened to me and ash And how he became ghosts For About an hour I think?” “..............Ok So let me get this straight On your journey through Kento You and Pikachu and your traveling companions Misty and Brock went to a haunted house to catch ghost Pokemon And they decided to play some tricks on you and they pulled your spirits from your bodies thus making you ghosts?” “And this psychic gym leader Sabrina turned your friends Into dolls because her psychic powers somehow split her personality into 2?” “Wow You know When Dawn and May told me trouble follows you I really thought they were overexaggerating but no it really does since the beginning. Wow just wow I can’t even Glameow?” “Don’t look at me Zoe what do you want me to say? Not gonna lie there’s kind of a part of me that wishes we had met up with them earlier. In their journey I mean just think of the things we could have seen.” “Er…….To be fair I’ve grown a lot but anyway Memories aside it is getting cold out here And it looks warmer in there than it is out here Haunted or not.” “Yeah besides the last place we went into that was supposedly haunted didn’t have electricity Unless you count me of course.” “I don’t think that’s the same thing Pikachu to be fair But they do have a point Zoe Then again Why does that place look familiar?” “Ya…….Now that you mention it wait……..Holy Toledo it’s the Pokemon Center from the pictures we saw in the Pokemon Center and Lantern Town earlier Glameow.” “Huh What pictures I didn’t notice any pictures in the Pokemon Center earlier?” “Ash Outside of Room and the cafeteria and maybe the training field do you even pay attention to anything in a Pokemon Center outside of nurse Joy?” “Okay Okay point taken Zoe point taken but seriously what legend?” “Apparently a long time ago when the town was still small there was a combination of a Pokemon Center school and daycare center ran by a very kind couple they couldn’t have any children of their own however 1 day the wife ran into an injured Gastly after nursing back to health the couple learned to love the Gastly like their own child Eventually the couple passed away but it said even now They stay with the Gastly As ghost So that they can keep their beloved Pokemon company.” “Wow So That’s really bad Still though I can’t say I wouldn’t do the same thing Hey buddy if anything happens to me would you want me to hang around you as a ghost?” “Hmmmmm……..Can we not think about that please being a ghost was fun and all ash but I don’t want to think about what it’d be like to be a permanent ghost You know what I mean.” “Anyway Can we please not start talking about our funerals thank you I know it’s Halloween and everything but still a bit much.” “Yeah Zoe’s right it’s still wild to think that you two are ghosts at that point anyway though. We should probably head in it’s getting cold out here and dark Whatever is going on I think the last place we want to be is outside right now Besides this forest is starting to give me the creeps.” With that the group gave a nod and headed in the abandoned Pokemon Center which they quickly noticed Looked more like a school And a lot more modern than they expected. However much to Ash’s and Zoe’s disappointment their Pokedex phone fixture wouldn’t work. Meaning they couldn’t call anyone and even if there were phones in the Pokemon Center they didn’t seem to be working either to put it simply they were stuck Literally and figuratively. “Well at least it’s warm in here Still A real bummer that Our phones don’t work so what do we do now?” “Hmmmm well Hmmm wow look There’s drawings everywhere Wow a lot of these are really good This was definitely a school that’s for sure. What do we do well I guess we just look around?” “Yeah I guess we should Still though kind of crazy everything looks so modern here you know?” “Yeah I know what you mean Ash on top of that all the pictures all the dates? Are all over the place 1990-1970 And everywhere in between this is a real time capsule.” Before The four of them could go any further They were greeted by a very odd sight A ghastly a Haunter and a Gengar and an aberration of a Title A woman that looked to be about Delia’s age aka Ash’s mom. Putting the group of trainers on guard as well as their Pokemon. “Okay okay everyone let’s just calm down Pikachu Don’t attack they don’t seem to be hostile Ummmmm hi miss Me and my friend here kind of got lost and we ended up here would you mind helping us get home or at least pointing us in the right direction?” “Ash you realize you’re talking to a ghost?” “You have a better idea look we’re stuck here Zoe we can’t call anyone So who else would we talk to?” “I you I mean You know what Point taken Ash Is right we kind of got lost and ended up in your Er…….Pokemon Center school Nursery? Although I don’t see a nursery and this doesn’t smell like one anyway Please ma’am We’re just trying to get well out of here.” The ghostly figure simply Motioned The group to follow the three ghost Pokemon Without any really other options they figured they would play along for now After all There’s always the chance that they’re being pointed to the exit. “Soooo……We’re just going to listen to a ghost and follow ghost Pokemon?” “Yep they’re not hostile so why not?” “Oh Ash One thing about you is you’re always so trusting for better or for worse.” “Well It’s a part of who I am Zoe I guess I try to see the best in people.” “I guess it just Not to be mean to our Er……..Pretty ghost hostess but I just can’t help but gain an uneasy feeling around her.” “Oh come on Zoe she hasn’t done anything Besides you’re probably just talking about the fact that this is a haunted Pokemon Center that’s all You get used to it.” “And exactly Never mind Never mind right I don’t even want to know of how many haunted places you’ve even been in.” “Hmmm…….You know that’s a good question Am I including towns or just where things happening in the towns? But I’ve also been to towns where there’s just been a lot of ghost Pokemon so I’m not sure if you could call that haunted or not?” “Ash Drop it please just drop it Again I say what would it have been like if I had met you at the beginning of your journey I can only wonder The thought terrifies me and intrigues me at the same time.” The group walked for a while until they Entered a fairly long hallway where the three ghost Pokemon stopped this caused Pikachu and Glameow once again to take up defensive positions However Ash and Zoey were quite confused they were just in a hallway no doors by it or anything So they were trying to trap them what were they trying to trap them in? “Ummm…..ok Even I’ll say it why did the three of them stop?” “Not sure I mean I don’t think they’re trying to trap us what would they trap us in?” However The coordinator and trainer duo were taken off guard when they heard a giggle behind them A very feminine and sweet giggle That couldn’t help but unnerve them just a little bit. “My my my such a curious one aren’t you dear Don’t worry my ghost Pokemon mean you no harm And we’re not trying to trap you we’re trying to help you my little lovelies.” “Ummm…..Ash? Ghost lady just talk and Help us little lovelies?” “Nope Zoe she definitely talked but Ma’am help us with what exactly look we really need to get out of here So please let us leave.” “What already but I haven’t helped you yet As far as what I’ll help you with all in good time dear you’ll see Trust me Ash and Zoe You’ll be at the hit of the ball tonight I absolutely promise you.” And before Ash or Zoe could do anything. The ghost snapped her fingers causing a trap door to open up beneath Ash Zoe. Hunter removed their backpacks and Ash’s hat. While Gengar put Glameow and Pikachu under hypnosis before the two trainers fell through the trap door. “Huh ahhhh MY HAT AND BACKPACK GIVE THOSE Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh” “Ash what are you Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh.” As Ash and Zoe fell through the floor they did notice their Pokemon seemed to be okay and unharmed Much to the two trainers relief however They soon found themselves going down a very long and slippery slide Ash on instinct Grabbed Zoe protectively And accidentally ended up grabbing her chest. Zoe are ok?” “Er…….im Fine ash but could you move your hand down a little You’re kind of touching my chest.” “Huh………Ahhhhh I’m sorry Zoe I didn’t mean to I just- “Giggles wow Ash Never knew you had such a cute blush and it’s fine it’s not like you were trying to do something to hurt me I actually appreciate the concern.” “Thanks Hold on you’re not mad?” “No why would I be mad? It’s not like it bothers me besides You’re just trying to make sure I was safe So I appreciate it And like I said you do have a cute blush.” The two trainers continued to fall down The slide picking up speed Finally jettisoning them both into what looked and felt like a pool of water As they swam to the surface of the pool and to the end of it Both Ash and Zoe seemed to be okay Wet but okay. “Ahhhh My hat I can’t believe she took my hat?” “Really really ash that’s what you’re worried about? They have her Pokemon Pokedex and backpacks and the first thing you’re worried about is your hat really?” “Zoe Do you know how many box tops I had to send in to get that hat Besides I’ve had it since my journey started and Umm…….Zoe? Is it just me or does your vest look like it has a crack in it?” “Crack Ash what do you……Ummm You mean the way your jacket looks to?” It was a matter of seconds before Ashes and Zoe’s clothes including their shoes And Underwear were nothing but dust on the floor leaving them both as naked as the day they were born Much to Ash’s embarrassment and Zoe’s amusement. “Ahhhhhhh Ummmmm Great just great er….Blushes sorry Zoe it’s kind of hard not to you know.” “Oh not To what Ash Ketchum Hmmmmmmm Giggles.” “Huh You’re not mad I mean aren’t you you know a little embarrassed?” “About what? You see me naked it’s not like you did this on purpose if anything it’s my fault for running off besides I gotta say I don’t mind the view Man what dawn and May wouldn’t give to be in my position right now I wonder Yum yum.” “Turn Scarlet WWWWWWW WHAT DO YOU MEAN ZOE?” “Ahhhhhhh I can’t help it you’re just so fun to tease Ash And again such a cute blush Giggles.” As Zoe Walked over to Ash and gave him a peck on the cheek Much to the poor boy’s embarrassment. “Ahhhhh Anyway let’s just look around besides I’m starting to feel a draft This just feels weird?” “Guess you’re right but Still though it’s interesting to see this side of you Ash Ketchum But we should probably go find some clothes Let’s go Ashy Wink wink.” “Ashy what? Grumble grumble grumble yeah let’s go.” As the two made their way Through the underground tunnel into a wide open area ash and Zoe both noticed a whole bunch of different icons Zoe specifically noticed the smell and recognized it immediately. “Is that? Sniff sniff That’s lavender And baby powder I’m sure of it And the icons This has got to be some type of nursery Ash.” “Is that what that smell is and Hold on nursery? This size and underground why?” “Never said It made sense But that smell of lavender and Baby powder and the icons this is definitely some type of nursery well nursery daycare center.” “Weird Even for me this is weird legendary Pokemon I can handle ghost Pokemon I can handle But losing my clothes and being er….. Naked with a female friend is a little bit much.” “Giggles Only you Ash Ketchum Wait hold on ash come over here for a minute let me see something?” “Ok Zoe wat?” Ash walks over to Zoe so she can smell his hair so she can confirm her theory. “Yep that settles it we both smell like lavender but wow Ash Your hair is so dry even wet seriously what conditioner do you use?” “Ummmm……….How mad would you be if I told you I don’t know?” “Right oh ok what colors the bottle you use?” “Hmmmm…..Ummmmm A blue one Let’s see what does it have on it oh it has a two on it that’s right I think it’s called- “2 in 1??????? I think is what you’re searching for but I really hope not.” “Oh ya That’s what it is right a 2 in 1 That’s what I’ve always Ummmmm Zoe? Are you ok?” Zoe was breathing in and out to calm herself while she massaged her temples before speaking “Ok Ash How many girls have you traveled with on your journey How many?” “Ummmmm Let’s see technically 3? Why ?” “Ok How many of them were coordinators?” “Technically You If you want to include Dawn Ummmmm Again I ask Zoe are you okay you look a little mad.” “It’s okay it’s okay ash I’m not mad at you I’m not I’m really not but And all the time you’re traveling can I just ask……..WHY ON EARTH WOULD YOU USE A 2 IN 1 ON YOUR HAIR ON YOUR GORGEOUS RAVEN HAIR YOU HAVE REALLY THICK HAIR HICK RAVEN HAIR NO WONDER YOUR HAIR’S SO DRY ON TOP OF THE FACT YOU’VE TRAVELED WITH 3 3 GIRLS 2 OF THEM COORDINATORS AND YOU’RE TELLING ME NOT ONE OF THEM EVER OFFERED TO GIVE YOU HAIR ADVICE EVER ARE YOU JOKING ME? AHHHHHHHH.” “Ummmmm Yes I guess? Would you believe me if I never mentioned it?” “Yes yes I do not the point that’s it as soon as we get out of here I’m taking you hair shopping and I don’t care what you say you are going to a hairstylist and gain a deep conditioning So your hair doesn’t feel like a desert Ash Ketchum.” “Hold on you can’t just make me go to a hairstylist Zoe That’s a little far.” “Oh Really Ash Ketchum So do you think if I called your mom Which I could easily get the phone number from Don We couldn’t convince you to go to a hairstylist Evil smile.” ‘..............You wouldn’t?.” “Try me Ash Ketchum try me.” “Shivers Girls are scary very very scary.” “Only when we’re angry Ashy dear Besides I bet you look a lot better With your hair moisturized maybe get some more attention from girls wink.” “Is that really something I should even focus on I mean Not to point out the obvious Zoe but Brock does that and look what happens to him?” “Ok First off there’s a very big difference between you and him and That’s not the same thing he literally asked every single girl out in existence I’m pretty sure that’s around his age I can’t see you doing that.” “Well no but I mean Brock is so honest about that I mean If that happens to him I really don’t want that to happen to me And all three of my traveling companions always seem so well angry about it.” “Do you mean angry about it angry about what?” “I don’t know it’s like even with Misty Like when she would be in the bathing suit she would always point out To show off and she was mad at me because I didn’t stare at her but Brock does the same thing to other girls and they get mad at him and normally hit him with something And the same thing with May and Dawn.” “Hold on okay okay so You’re past traveling companions were mad at you because you didn’t notice them but you saw Brock give girls attention and you didn’t want the same thing to happen to you Is that what you think?” “Yeah I mean what am I supposed to think Zoe I mean Gary was always the popular guy in Pallet Town and all the girls seemed to like him I wasn’t I really don’t have that much experience with girls overall unless it’s my mom and she always said I should be more assertive with girls but I’m supposed to think when I see you know That happened with Brock it’s not like I have a lot to go on.” “Hmmmm……I think I’m starting to get the picture a little bit Ash I’m going to ask a question you don’t have to answer What type of relationship did you have with your dad?” “My dad? Ummmm Kind of a hard thing to answer because I don’t have much to tell about him For as long as I can remember it’s always just kind of been me and my mom I’ve heard I have different family members but never actually met any of them All I really know is My dad went on a journey 1 day and he never came back That’s all I know.” “I see You know while I’m on the subject I mean you’re so focused on your journey but What are you gonna do at the end of it after it’s over after you become a Pokemon master what then?” “I what do you mean when it’s over? I mean I I don’t know I’ve I’ve never really thought about it I mean I was offered a position as a frontier brain from Scott and he said I can talk to him whenever I want I guess I would do that maybe I don’t know?” “I mean I’m not saying you should think about it entirely but you know Do you really want to spend the entire journey alone I mean I travel alone it’s true but sometimes it is well lonely I mean you travel with different people each time but Brock’s always been there what would happen If he had to stop what then?” “Ummmm wow Zoe I’ve I mean I’ve never thought about any of this stuff I guess I I don’t know I mean I guess I mean I wouldn’t want to be alone at the end of my journey but I guess on the same end I’ve never really thought about it either I don’t know.” “Well you know just putting it out here I can think of a certain coordinator that wouldn’t mind Traveling with you to wherever you go next You know I also wouldn’t mind being your date for the dance.” “Huh? You want to go with me Zoe? I mean just so you know I’m not that good of a dancer.” “Giggles Well lucky for you there’s a certain red headed coordinator that would love to teach you how to dance Ash Ketchum.” “Ummmmm……Well thank you Zoe but Before anything else maybe we should try to find some clothes and you know get out of here so we can actually go costume shopping?” “Fine fine Ash Ketchum I’ll let you off this but don’t kid yourself Buster as soon as we get out of here and after the dance is over I’m taking you shopping And before you say it no I don’t shop like Don I’m gonna help you pick out some conditioner and I’m taking to a hairstylist and no I’m going to make sure it’s for boys not girls you’re not going to get some psycho lady that says something like I’m going to make you beautiful so don’t worry Okay.” “Wow You really knew what I was afraid of I take it.” “I’m a coordinator ash I deal with a lot more stylists than you and I’ve seen Dawn shop Maybe not directly but considering how many bags that girl normally has I can only imagine what that’s like for you.” “Shivers I would rather not think about it Zoe.” “Awwwww I’m so sorry Ashy don’t worry You’ll have fun when you go shopping with me I promise.” After another kiss on the cheek Much to Ash’s embarrassment The two made their way throughout the Huge and modern daycare center to try to find some clothes they wanted to get out of there however leaving there without clothes was not on their priority list. As the two made their Way throughout the daycare center Both of them noticed something As they made their way throughout the daycare center they noticed a large billboard with their names on it What concerned them both is It listed both of their names. “Ash? What do you think the billboards for?” “You’re asking me Zoe? No idea Although I’m kind of wondering how it got our names?” “Well The ghostly did take our Pokedex Along with your hat Maybe that’s how she got our names?” “I mean yeah but how Do ghosts use technology Exactly let alone How did this place even get built?” “Let’s not dawn on it I don’t think it matters right now Because as much as I love your cute blush staring at me And I certainly don’t mind the show you’re putting on for me we really should get clothes on at some point Giggles.” “I YOU I MEAN I WASN’T AHHHHHH Grumble grumble grumble It’s not my fault you’re hot sides don’t like you’re complaining too much Zoe.” “Who said I was complaining I did say I liked the show didn’t I? Wink wink.” “You’re having way too much fun with this You know that.” “Yep It’s just so fun Especially to see the dense Ash Ketchum actually stare at girls And at least I kind of know your taste in girls now.” “Let’s just try to find some clothes Zoe please?” “Giggles Fine fine.” The two made their way over to a room that had an icon for clothes However not seeing a doorknob Or any way to open it both of them are quite confused of how to even open the door? However before They could say anything electronic voice Echoed out please enter for Health analysis and Clothes Ash and Zoe They weren’t sure what they were in for What outfits they would get Or what they would be wearing Or how their stay At this mysterious Pokemon Center school nursery hybrid would go but one thing was for absolute certain. This was going to be one heck of a Halloween For better or for worse neither one of them could deny that. To be continued Part 2 Immediately upon entering the room Ash and Zoe help but notice how huge everything was and how modern everything was. If they wouldn’t know any better they’d say that they were in a room in a modern Pokemon Center. The only difference was it smelled like lavender and baby powder and It had two changing tables needless to say the two trainers were taken aback. “Wow I mean everything’s so modern those changing tables look like they could fit you or I on them? Really easily Zoe do you see any clothes or anything maybe in those closets?” “Yeah you’re not wrong Ash this is literally just one giant nursery but why would anyone make a nursery for anyone our age?” “That’s like asking why would anyone make a nursery underground.” “Point taken well I guess let’s look around see what we can find?” “Ya let’s.” “Still crazy this nursery looks newer than. The Pokemon Center up above is kind of weird don’t you think Zoe?” “Ya maybe they built the Pokemon Center first and renovated down here later? Honestly who knows?” However before the two could walk any further the two were locked in place. By two beams that shut out from the ceiling . And scanned listing a whole chart of everything and anything about them. Weight height gender the works even go as far as to list that Ash. Wasn’t getting enough vegetables in his diet and his hair was dry Making Ash groan and Zoe giggle. What annoyed Ash even more was it going as far as to list a 2 in 1 is not appropriate moisturization for his thick hair. And offered alternative conditioner and shampoo ideas and suggestions and even diet adjustments. Ash was starting to feel he was listening to a computerized version of his mother Zoe’s Giggles certainly didn’t help things. And since the two of them have yet to be dressed the two were moved via tractor beam. To a different room that had a bath icon on it Into a giant Bathtub that resembled a hot tub. Ash had a helmet like device covering his head the robotic voice explained. It was using specially designed conditioner to moisturize his extremely dry hair much to his displeasure and annoyance. However Zoe managed to calm him down. And that he had a very cute pouty Ash just grumbled something about how he doesn’t have a pouty face which made Zoe giggle. Zoe was given shampoo and conditioner for when she wanted to shampoo and conditioner her hair. And also encouraged once his deep conditioning was done to assist her. As the computer put it grumpy boyfriend which made Ash blush and Zoe giggled Ash just sighed and tried to enjoy his bath. “Giggle oh come on Ash it’s not that big of a deal girls have this type of thing done all the time. Besides this wouldn’t be happy if you didn’t condition properly.” “I’m a boy Zoe boys don’t care about their hair like girls do I don’t have a pouty face grumble grumble.” “Awwwwww but Ashy you’re so cute when you make that pouty face besides. There are plenty of boys that care about their hair.” “Maybe if you’re a coordinator but most male trainers don’t.” “Really have you ever asked Brock of how long he spends on his hair?” “I mean no that’s not something guys would talk about.” “Well maybe you should ask him you no? I happen to know he spends a good amount of time on his hair Probably not as long as I do or Dawn but still.” “How do you know that? Zoe I mean I don’t picture Brock and you chatting a whole lot.” “It depends when I ran into you guys I’ve had a little chit chat with him here and there. And I happen to know he spends not a huge amount of time but at least 15 minutes.” “15 MINUTES ON HIS HAIR? Why? I mean I get he wants to get the attention of girls but still.” “15 minutes is about average Ash Seriously when we get out of here I’m having a chat with Dawn and Brock and we’re giving you a lesson in proper hair etiquette.” “Hair etiquette? How is that even a thing?” “Hair etiquette taking care of your hair properly pick your phrase either way. You need work at it. I mean seriously that helmet’s been on your head for what 5 minutes now? And it’s still going I mean it’s gotta make you feel a little relaxed.” “Not really it’s weird It’s like a bunch of mini water guns going through my head. On top of a bunch of mini whirlpools.” “Giggles go figure only you Ash Ketchum would compare a massage to Pokemon attacks. Hey just be happy you’re not a girl then you’d have to deal with makeup.” “Shivers Please Zoe don’t even talk about that. I don’t see how you girls deal with it. Then again, do you even wear makeup Zoe?” “Yes i do Ash Ketchum. Just because you can’t tell doesn’t mean it’s not there one of the tricks to being good with makeup.” “Wait hold on why would you wear makeup if you want to look like you’re not wearing makeup????? So why wear makeup then?” “Oh Ash you have so much to learn about girls. The point of makeup still makes you look good. But when you wear too much makeup everyone can tell that's what I mean.” “So it’s about wearing just the right amount? That’s weird I am so happy I was born a boy.” “Giggles well for the record Ash so am I and I’m sure all your friends including Dawn would agree. Still though If I catch you using a 2 in 1 after this I will personally. Travel with you and make sure you use a proper shampoo and conditioner got it.” “Okay okay Zoe I got it still I wonder how long we’re going to be here.” “Who knows I mean from everything I can tell time seems to have frozen here so might as well enjoy it.” “I don’t know never taken a bath with a girl before. Or with any one for that matter i just not sure feel about it.” “What if you had a girlfriend? Do you think she wouldn’t want to take a shower or bath with you eventually?” “Blushes IIIIIIIIIIIIIIII WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT ZOE I DON’T HAVE A GIRLFRIEND. AND even if I did I mean wouldn’t we be a little bit young for that?” “I guess that would depend on the girl. I know if I was your girlfriend I certainly wouldn’t mind grins wink wink.” “Grumble grumble Zoe you're having two much fun with this you no.” “Giggles maybe you can’t blame me too much. This is the first time I’ve ever actually seen you act like a normal boy. The clueless Ash Ketchum realizes girls exist gotta say I kind of like this side of you.” “I don’t know it just if Dawn and the other girls I traveled with would probably skin me alive. If they were in your place so I guess it’s weird to me that you’re not mad.” “I mean if that were the case I’d call them all unfair it’s not like this is your fault. And for the record I’m not so sure about that? They may act like it but I bet if they were alone with you. They’d act a little different especially if you were acting like this.” Zoe moved a little closer to Ash. “Ummmmmm Zoe Why are you getting closer to me?” “Hmmmmm giggles because I can and because I want to I like looking at those cute brown eyes you have.” “I’m cute? My eyes really look cute?” “Well ya of course you’re cute what? Are you really gonna tell me that I’m the first girl ever to say that to you?” “Ummmmm Does my mom count?” “No wait……………..NO WAY YOU’RE TELLING ME OF ALL THE GIRLS YOU’VE TRAVELED WITH NOT ONCE DID ANY OF THEM CALL YOU CUTE AT ALL?” “Well yeah I mean I’ve gotten kissed on the cheek once or twice and a girl called me sweetie. At a point but no you’re the first girl ever to call me cute. So thank you Zoe blushes.” “I mean it’s just so hard to believe with your raven hair and your brown eyes and you’re so sweet? Seriously what were the other girls like that you traveled with? On top of that what is Dawn like when you travel with her?” However before the conversation could continue Ash’s helmet was removed and a computer voice announced. Deep Conditioning completed recommendations for Normal conditioning will be listed and included in your leaving packet. Ash I was just happy to have the helmet gone however Zoe had to take a double take Ash’s Hair was shining almost. “Wow Ash your hair is shiny let’s see Zoe In her hand through Ash’s still wet but now much softer hair wow Ash your hair is so soft and shiny now I like.” “Er……..Thanks Zoe can you stop please blushes.” “Oh I think someone likes it when I run my hands through their hair don’t they? Hmmmmm Ashy.” “Zoe don’t call me that my mom calls me that grumble grumble grumble.” A couple of minutes later after Zoe helped Ash properly shampoo and condition his hair. And despite his protests Zoe could tell he was clearly enjoying it and after they got done washing their hair and bodies. Which even Zoe would admit she had way too much fun with. Ash’s reactions especially when she pressed herself up against him and nibbled on his ear and gave him a kiss on the cheek. A robotic voice signaled them both that their bath was at an end Ash was just happy it was over. Although in the back of his mind he had to admit he did enjoy it a bit and his hair did feel better. Either way as they were moved back to the now named Changing Room after being dried off va towels and heat fans. Ash and Zoe were lied on the two changing tables Much to both of the trainers confusion to say the least. The two trainers weren’t sure what they were in for or What they would be wearing But one thing’s for sure that they both could agree upon This is turning out to be quite An eventful Halloween. To be continued