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I have no idea why I didn’t think about that. Probably because I’m feeling a bit under the weather this morning. Furthermore, any good ideas as to how I could keep my blankets dry as well, or is that something I just gotta accept as my life now?

Good morning everyone, So since October I’ve been monitoring myself and noticed that I’ve developed Bedwetting, and wet the bed at least twice a month, though, both October, January and February have at least four wet nights or more. It seems to be getting more frequent, and I’ve talked to my doctor about it. He suggested I get put on drugs for it, but if I’m honest I don’t see Bedwetting as so bad a thing so I’m just moving on with diapers (it makes me little to wake up wet, anyways). Anyways, currently to ensure that the mattress is protected in wearing Tena Supers as well as a Bedwetting pad under me. The Tena Super holds some urine, but not all that I need, but the Mattress pad collects everything else that the diaper might’ve missed, usually, except last night, I wriggled in my sleep and bunched the pad up causing me to pee through the diaper and onto the mattress because the pad wasn’t under me to catch it. On top of having pads and diapers, I’ve got some really cheap plastic pants that I haven’t used yet. My question therefore, is simple, to ensure something like last night doesn’t happen, what do you suggest I wear? What diaper should I wear (please keep in mind I don’t live alone and would rather not wear cloth)? Should I wear the plastic pants? Should I double down on the pads so that if one gets bunched up, the other doesn’t?

Alright, Thanks!

I know! I can’t wait to experience this! Do my you have any tips to help me achieve it?

So me and my girlfriend are looking into me trying to induce Nocturnal Enuresis, Bedwetting. And we have a simple, genuine question: Is it possible to mess oneself while they are asleep? I thought I remember doing that while I was eight. I had about 10 fiber one bars as a snack before I went to bed and woke up in the middle of the night with a giant load in my pants. But then I tried it about a year ago, and the most I came up with was me getting up at midnight with terrible pain in my stomach, curling over and messing my diaper. So is it possible to mess yourself in your sleep? Do you guys recall that happening in your life? How could we go about making this happen to me?

As Authors we’re called to write the story we ourselves would wish to read. Gotta give you respect for publishing your work and even asking for criticism, more so for skipping short stories and going straight for a chapter book. Hope all goes well and if you need someone to proofread, I’ll be more than happy to lend a hand!

Chapter 1 Maybe a little bit more description on Chris' family? I feel the story would have been better started with Chris doing something or in dialogue, for example, maybe instead of explaining that Chris was expecting to go on the annual trip with his family, but his parents bought him some long underwear that he didn't approve of, we could start with dialogue.This "Mom! They make me look like I have chicken legs!" Chris exclaimed, pulling at the garment. "It's not as if anyone's going to see your legs..." This works better because there's no unnecessary exposition and the reader is able to infer through dialogue that Chris and his family are going on a ski trip, rather than blatantly telling them. --- Once again, more description on Chris' family, on what he looks like. This is difficult, as just telling us what they look like can seem boring, almost like unnecessary exposition in the beginning of a fantasy novel, but if you can make it pertain to the story, it can make the details of the character stick a bit better. For example, what if Chris' mom bought him a size too small? You'd have to describe that the longjohns just barely fit him because his mother either forgot his size or that was the only option available at the time, meaning that Chris isn't a smaller guy. --- I do like that you've added, within dialogue, that Kathryn seems to be a bit more caught up in superficial things like make-up, showing off, etc. --- Work on transitioning. When there is a passage of time in your story that you don't wish to write about because it doesn't pertain to your story, you need to cut it off. Think of it as mini-chapters within the chapter. Do you see how I'm putting three dashes between each critique? It's transitionary, you know that when I put that down, I'm talking about a different part of the chapter all together. Find your niche, figure out how you'd like to do that, because to me it seems that you're skipping parts of the story, which you should be, but aren't giving the reader much notice. --- "Chris and Kate headed out to the slopes. For siblings they got along fairly well. Kate was 20 and went to college close to home. She was quite pretty and had been reasonably popular around school, a cheerleader and volleyball player. She knew her brother didn’t have a lot of friends so she was nice enough to him and even let him sit with her at lunch in school now and then when they had been in high school together. Chris was 18 and what a lot of people would call a nerd. He enjoyed Dungeons and Dragons with his few friends as well as being interested in Star Wars, Lord of the Rings and the like. He was part of the local swim team and was pretty good despite his small frame as his muscles were toned; he was actually shorter than his sister. (The swim team was in offseason now so his hair was longer than the brush cut he kept when he was swimming 6 days a week)" I like this. I used to swim competitively for 7 years and have coached competitive swim for the past three, most of the time that I swam I had a high and tight, most of the kids that I taught had high and tights. Very realistic. Usually people who are longer in swimming have a competitive advantage, and people with smaller frames are usually much faster. Being tall and lanky gives a kid a huge advantage in the water. I like that I'm able to see what life was like for Chris and Kate before this ski trip, I like being able to see them as real characters within a story, rather than just a catalyst for me to get off on erotica. Once again, however, this could be better conveyed in dialogue, or in some way that pertains to the story, say, if Chris saw a pool on his way to the ski lodge and Kate commented on his past. Or if they passed by their old High School and Chris was sucked back into nostalgia, thinking about what life for him was like as a student. But props to you for giving these characters depth. And that's all for Chapter 1. So far, I like the story and it has potential, you mention that you've been writing this off and on for a few years, yes? You're doing well! Chapter 2 "The next morning they all got up and ate a big breakfast. Chris went to get ready for a full day of skiing, “Mom, my long johns are still damp from last night they got all sweaty. I can’t wear them today.”' Very abrupt beginning. When trying to figure out a way to fix it, the best I can come up with is just more description. Something like, "Chris poked at his long johns, smiling as he felt a dry spot. Not thinking to check everywhere else, he started to put them on himself, only to find that at the foot of the longjohns, some of the sweat that accumulated from yesterday hadn't dried. He cringed as he took off the longjohns and poked his head out of his room, hoping not to reveal himself as he said..." --- You described Jamie and Jordan! Great! --- '“Don’t worry he won’t ditch his brother for me, unless he’s got a to hang out with too.”' What? --- '“I guess, I mean you’ve done a lot for me since I got to high school, I’d be in nerd hell without you.”' Two things. In the entire conversation here, neither party does anything but talk, if you can, it would seem more real for someone to be doing something as they talk. Like, Kate could be folding her clothes, she could be cleaning up her face after the makeup she put on for that day. Chris is being put up against a wall in this scene, metaphorically, what if you portrayed that literally? He walks in, they have this convo and he walks back into a wall as she gets up and starts looking her brother up and down, figuring out how hard it might be to feminize him. It would show the dichotomy really well, and would serve as foreshadowing. The other issue I have with this portion of Chapter 2 is that Chris seems to be going along with it. It's like he doesn't really care and just lets it happen. I understand him and Kate have quite the history, but he seems to be a very passive character and is just letting all of this happen to him. Now I'm a sissy, I like dressing up, I like feeling cute and pretty, but assuming Chris is a regular guy... you'd think he'd pick a better fight when asked to do something so emasculating. Chapter 3 '“Here put these on,” She handed him a pair of Uggs that matched her own and put his boots into a shopping bag. “They’re a little more feminine' Maybe that should be it's own paragraph, and you forgot a quotation mark, just a simple grammatical error. --- Things seem to be going pretty quickly for Chris. Once again, he doesn't seem to have any internal conflict, he doesn't seem conflicted or even caring that he's been asked out. Even if Chris isn't "normal" and does have a fetish or kink for dressing up or even if he was trans, wouldn't he be at least worried about what might happen if things get a bit out of hand? Or what if he gets too aroused and gets an erection, showing that he isn't really a girl? He seems to be all too willing to let this happen to him. I mean, he does complain that this isn't normal, but after just one line of dialogue his sister is able to convince him to shave himself, presumably in the eventuality that this might go a bit farther than he thinks. Once again, he just seems to go with it, like it's not too big a deal. Even if he does look the part and they don't figure out he's a guy, Chris is still fixing to have sexual relations with a man. Now the sexuality of Chris was never revealed in the text but we can see in the data for the story that Chris eventually only becomes attracted to men. Alluding to the idea that his attraction to women was negated some way? If that's the case... I don't think a straight guy, or a guy who thinks he's straight, would be very keen on the idea of partaking in homosexual sex. --- Kate even comments on the fact that Chris has kinda just went with it, they suggest that he might be gay, might even be transgender. This of course may all be true, but I would've liked to see much more character development on this because it seems like it's just a quirk about Chris. I want to feel happy that Chris feels he can be honest with himself finally, that he can be himself. Maybe, "herself" would be the better pronoun. But again, there was no real buildup to this revelation, maybe if he'd been in conflict with himself and when he realized he had feelings for Jamie, could have realized that this wasn't too bad at all. He likes this portion of his life more than he liked living as a guy. I really. Really want to feel happy for Chris, but it kinda just comes outta nowhere and Chris ends up accepting it and going forward like nothing changes. But everything changes. This being said, I'm excited to read the next few chapters and see where this goes. Chapter 4 Something I didn't notice until right now is that you're now referring to Chris as Kris, which, well, is his her name. I like that. I might be reading too much into it, but I think you referring to Chris as Kris is a reflection on how she looks at herself. When the character looks into the mirror, she sees Kris, not Chris. Very, very interesting. --- '“That’d be wonderful,” Kris said. “Picking up a box, with B cup breasts and a new midsection prosthetic in her skin tone.' - Lacking a quotation mark. --- You're becoming so much more descriptive in your writing. Great job! --- Things seem to be moving a bit faster, but you've gotten better at transitioning. All in all, a good chapter! Chapter 5 Once again, I like the support Kate gives to Kris, maybe a bit more description there would be nice. Mmmmmmmm. Personally I like some dominant men, would've liked for it to go farther, however, it is nice that Kris was very adament and honest about her boundaries regarding sex, and it was sweet that Jamie more or less acknowledged, accepted and was more than willing to accomodate for that. It's a short chapter, but a sweet one, definitely. All in all the story has potential! I like it alot, I just wish there was a bit more internal conflict in Kris's journey towards womanhood. There's decent buildup for Kris' eventual sexual encounter with Jamie and I think, given just a bit of editing in the earlier chapters and some equally sweet dialogue and events between Jamie and Kris we could see a very beautiful, wonderful relationship sprout in this story that I can easily see myself becoming invested into! I'll give it a 7.5/10! Good story!

I will reply to this thread when I finish the story or have something I need to say or ask. Okay?

I can’t report him to the chat room mod because it’s unclear who it is and I’ve gotten him to leave me alone. I’ve deleted the messages from him and left all chatrooms ABDL related. I’d like to keep my iFunny account as it’s relatively SFW. I post quotes and I have quite a bit of fun with it, but if I need to, I will. I made the post to ask for help, but also to let others know. You know, just to be careful. Great to know that I wasn’t overreacting though.

Fair warning on that community, there are a plethora of minors there. I was invited to a chat there, and me, wanting to try and be a bit more active in the ABDL community and find some friends accepted the invitiation to their chat room. Some 8 hours later I get a private message from someone. We get into it, we start talking and he asks for my age, I tell him honestly and I ask for his. He responds that he is 17, with just over a week until he's an adult. When I ask if anyone else knows, if this was allowed by the moderator (not that that's okay, but I want to know if an adult not only knows that minors are in this chat, but allows them to be there) he says that almost everyone does, and there are plenty of people there who are minors in the chat. Needless to say I told him it makes me a bit uncomfortable to talk to someone underage about a sexual kink, even if it's not entirely sexual for me, it still just isn't right. He isn't leaving me alone, unfortunately, and is asking me what got me into diapers, my favorite thing to do in them, etc. I am super, super uncomfortable rn, and I might be overreacting, but the last thing I want rn is to be accused of pedophilia and for them to have a point. So once again, I don't know if anyone else is familiar with iFunny, I don't know if this is even the right space to say this, but if you are on iFunny, be careful with the diaperlover123 chat. There are minors there. I might even be overreacting. IDK. Not leaving it up to chance though.

I usually say bum, rump or booty when I’m in little space, sometimes I’ll say “butt” but will never say “ass”, and don’t often say “tush”. In terms of bodily fluids, it’s either wet or mess.

Well I just binged this story over the past two days and I already know that this story is going to be one of my favorites once I read it in it’s totality. Having just finished chapter 9, chapter 10 is proving difficult already. But I guess I’ll just have to binge some of your other stories while I wait! Great job and thanks for sharing!

Sittin’ in a wet and messy pull-up that has given me one hell of a mood changer for the past week! I love dancing around in my messy diaper!

I’ve said the story before, but why not? Its Junior year of High School, I’m in theology class, my seventh period of school. Just another 30 minutes and I’m out, now what do I feel? Cramps. Cramps so bad they want me to cry. I can feel it push through me, I can feel it want to push through my butt and fill my pants. To be honest, I’ve always loved messing, always kinda toyed with the idea of messing my pants in public, but right there, in that moment, the thought terrified me that I might do what I’d always fantasized. I wanted to leave class, relieve my bowels, and come back, but I always had a fear of asking to go to the bathroom. I never really knew why. So I just decided to hold it. So close, just a few more minutes, I peered and watched the clock, tried to relax so I didn’t appear to be cramping, but not so much that I let something out. I tried not to fart, God, I was around so many people. My teacher kept droning on and on about some stupid explanation about how to engage in Catholicism within the real world and the clock seemed to be ticking at a pace resembling, or perhaps, slower to than a snail. I must have lost control as I stood up to leave, and I filled my underwear to the brim with hot poo. The mess felt like it bulged out of my pants. I prayed to God, hoped someone didn’t smell it, hoped someone didn’t see it. Needless I grabbed my phone and backpack and rushed out of the classroom and into the bathroom and studied my underwear and shorts. While my underwear were obviously ruined, my shorts, surprisingly, didn’t have any marks or stains. So I waited about forty minutes while the bathroom cleared out, put on a diaper in case my stomach had any other problems, and threw my underwear away.

Article 134 of the UCMJ Article 134: General Article This article of the Uniform Code of Military Justice is a catch-all for offenses that are not spelled out elsewhere. It covers all conduct that could bring discredit upon the armed forces that are not capital offenses. It allows them to be brought to court-martial. Maximum punishment under Article 134 is a Dishonorable Discharge. To be fair, I indeed might be reading too deeply into it, but even so, if I was in the military and was outed as an ABDL, I doubt it would do anything to help me promote and maintain my career.