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(All characters are adult and 21+. This is fictional story with fictional characters and should be treated as such.) (I'm just looking for constructive working from a small snippet of my short story and better ways to edit) "Are you sure you want to do this? What even is an ABDL?" Mark said as he held the white diaper in his hand. Mark was standing in his boxers in front of his bed when his wife told him the news. Mark's world was falling apart as Kelly had made a final choice to spice up their sex life by getting into ABDL role play. "I do. I've told you for months that are sex life was dead. Some how when I pleasuring myself, I found a point video that turned me on and I just dove deeper. Adult Baby Diaper Lovers is the proper name. I feel the sexual need to be dominant." Kelly said as she wiped away tears from her eyes. "Kelly.....I'm sorry I didn't listen. I just don't think I can add diapers to my sex life." Mark said as he laid the diaper down on the bed. "That's what I'm talking about Mark. Its always about you, I knew I should have listened to my mother before I married you!" Kelly yelled as she started to storm off. "Kelly! Wait, your right. I'll give the diaper thing a try or this adbl stuff a try. But can I just ease myself into please." Mark pleaded as Kelly stopped in her tracks. "Either we start tonight or I'm going to my mothers for the rest of the week." Kelly said. "Look, just no diapers or baby stuff tonight. Why don't we cuddle, pick out your favorite movie and you can be the big spoon tonight?" Mark asked. "That's fine." Kelly softly said. Kelly was shocked that Mark was trying to meet in the middle. Kelly had never been the big spoon since there five years of being together. "But I get to pick the ice cream." Mark grinned.

Hello, So I'm thinking about getting back into writing but I need advise. I'm looking to improve my skills of having the character speak. I usually have the mistake of having "this character said this" John doe said nervously. And then describing there action. (So any advise would be good for that) Then any advise of short story planning and describing the scene or actions. Thanks FB (Sorry for the long post)

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