Silver

I kinda hope that when its done some parts go back to normal and other parts stay.

Spotted the Airplane reference ❤️

This story is so good. I keep refreshing this forum for it ❤️

Welcome back! You've been missed. *gives lots of hugs*

This keeps getting better and better.

Still loving this story.

+1 to an epilogue at least

Loving this story. Every little bit.

Your stories are always so well thought out, so detailed, there's a visible (readable?) effort in every single aspect of the environment the characters inhabit, as well as the characters themselves. Even if the world differs from the real one, it's always grounded in a way that people don't really notice. With my earlier post i wanted to point out some things that stood out to me as being "uncharacteristically unadressed": Little things which just seem odd to omit, at least to me, as if a little bit of the grounding i mentioned earlier is missing. It was only meant as constructive criticism. Reading my post back however i have to admit that it came across a lot more negative than i had intended, for which i can only profusely apologize. I still enjoy this story, as i do all your stories.

I'm very conflicted about this story. On one hand you do try to make it palatable by going into detail about how this society works, but on the other there's details that are missing which make it more than a little creepy. Maybe it's just me not understanding. The premise of Maisie getting sent there for example is odd. Where i live that would not happen for example, because if she spent most of her life here and doesn't (or can't) remember the homeland, she'd count as 'naturalized' and judge would block extradition just because of that, let alone the nigh alien nature of Lillikol and the lack of direct family that could take her in. A society like Lillikol would also not be very easy to hide or go unnoticed in this day and age, regardless of their (lack of) telecommunication. Wouldn't she have heard about it somewhere? I wonder whether this was addressed and i missed that, or whether this will be addressed later. Due to this i can't shake the feeling that there some malice in play somewhere.

That cliffhanger.... What's going on with Sam? Please don't let it be just a tease!

If latex and lockable metal underwear is involved i'll pitch in.... Maybe also if it's not.... *shifty eyes*

Is that coming?

Where do i send the order!?

That detail is what got my mind racing ^^