DiapersInTheNaturalState

I appreciate the feedback! I will certainly break my next story up in to paragraphs. As far as the girls' age, it plainly states it in the story, but the girls are both over the age of 18. None of my stories will ever have minors in it if the story includes sexual content.

This is my first ever story. I warn you that it does contain explicit material involving two girls. So if that doesn't interest you please do not read. I do not want a bunch of hate comments on my story. As a writer I welcome constructive criticism but as a person I ask that you keep it respectful. It is quite long but I hope it as enjoyable to read as it was to write.