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Wonderful chapter. I think Nina is coming around and is developing some stronger material feelings. Nina saying that she could get used to this didn’t come as a total surprise. I think she has been wanting to take care of Sam for some time. It’s only now that Sam is allowing herself to be taken care of that. Nina is more willing to step in and take charge. Before she didn’t want to embarrass her. I am looking forward to seeing more.

Such a heat breaking chapter. I feel so bad for Hortensia and Jennifer. You can tell Jennifer truly cares for and loves Hortensia. I just wish she would open up and start to heal. I honestly don’t think she was responsible for the break-in and there’s a good explanation for her having the pickle jar. I hope to see the next chapter soon.

I absolutely loved this chapter. It’s just what the doctor ordered. After the horrible day at work yesterday (I was in a knock down drag out fight where I ended up being bit and getting a black eye). This was extra sweet and heartwarming. I loved the name for his new lizard. I was also very happy to see Mike back in the picture and visiting. I am sure Mommy has a special meal planned for them. They say the road to a man’s heart goes through the stomach. Am excited to see the next chapter.

This was a fantastic chapter. It was a very emotional chapter. I was a little surprised at the information in the beginning of the chapter. Sarah telling us that she is planning on letting Vickie and Ian have several babies. I thought all along the plan was for all three to give birth. Then Priscilla is also planning on getting pregnant with Ian. In some respects I am really enjoying the bouncing between stories to tell the story. Both stories are independent tales yet are pretty tightly intertwined. I am just not sure what story I should be reading first to keep a better flow. I would actually appreciate it if you could drop a hint as to which one should be read first. I am looking forward to seeing both continue.

Great chapter. I was actually surprised that Susie fed him the two bottles and didn’t make any attempt to scalp him. If fact it was just the opposite for her. Learning someone’s weaknesses can have a profound effect on them. Court the next day should be an interesting day. I will be looking forward to seeing how it all works out.

Almost missed the ending. That would’ve been terrible. Daniel sure doesn’t have much of a future to look forward to. At this point, knowing there’s no chance of escape, the best he could hope for is to loose his mind. He might even come to enjoy being a baby. Great job! I will be watching for your next story.

I am very happy to hear you plan on continuing this story.

I am honestly very happy you stepped up and said something. I refrained from commenting eventhough the desire was strong. This isn’t the place for that kind of discussion and I would not want to be any sort of a distraction from your story. If the person would like to pm me I would be very happy to discuss the issue with them privately.

Loved this extra long chapter. I had actually thought about involving CPS but thought Officer Riley would make a better attempt to discover who he is and where he belongs. In truth you are actually more correct. The officer would try and as soon as possible transfer responsibility for Zack to someone else, namely CPS. Now given time and a potential leade they would rather find family to release the child to than CPS. That would most likely be the best for the child. Still her responsibility is on the streets and not babysitting so CPS is normally contacted immediately. For Zack this might actually be a good thing. He might have an opportunity to escape the system and once again be on the run. Certainly his chances of escape are far greater in the care of a foster family than they would be in police custody. I am already patiently awaiting the next chapter.

I know that feeling. I have opted to go with the payment plan this year they wanted so much more. I am definitely getting sick of trying to support people who would rather sit around than work. Especially when I am struggling to keep things going for myself. I hope it doesn’t get you down too bad.

I have really come to looking forward to Fridays and Sundays. While not too much was going on with this chapter it’s also good to get a chance to just absorb all that has been going on. I think I actually laughed at some of the comments more than the story itself. Yes you can be just a touch evil with us at times. But then we must all be a bit sadistic because we can’t be stopped from following along with this story.

Well I really let myself get way too far behind on this story. It’s taken me several days to get caught back up. You have been doing an awesome job with it. It’s a pretty complex relationship you have created with Darlene and Avery and then further complicating things with throwing Christy into the mix. I think John is about finished. Letting a woman like Ashley loose on him, he doesn’t stand a chance. She is going to find a weakness and exploit it. I have to agree that this cliffhanger is a cruel thing and now that I have caught up I am forced to wait like everyone else. I should have waited a bit longer and then I could have just read on. I will be looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Great chapter. I was a little surprised that Sam didn’t have a meltdown after this latest accident. But then when you explained her reasoning, it made sense. I could actually understand how she might be relieved having the pressure to be an adult removed from her. I still see Nina taking on more of a maternal role with Sam and Sam still seeing it as a romantic relationship. I will be waiting for next Thursday again.

I was very very happy to see a new chapter. Now I want to see John out running around with two big dogs. I can see him rigging up some kind of a harness to have the dogs pulling him around the yard in his wagon. I can also see John going to help Mr Frank with the vegetable stand. Still loving the story and couldn’t ever get too much of it.

I enjoyed a look into the background a lot. It makes understanding what’s going on in their heads a little clearer. I am looking forward to getting back into the meat of the story again now that we know a little more.