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Guess Max knows the school's anti-bullying policy is more form than substance. Still, there was probably little likelihood of the rest of the cowards jumping in if Max dropped Trevor. After all, if Max could beat Trevor before nothing has changed physically to reverse that. Max is just hampered mentally. Wonder if mommy would be happy to know that she put him in physical danger? Not much thinking going on in this crowd! Looking forward to the continuation of this interesting story.

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To say that the males in this future world are facing inequality is like saying the atomic bomb is a little loud. What happens when a boy suffers a serious injury on the football field? Does Mrs. Grigg shoot him like she might a seriously injured animal. Like how you soften the insults by bringing Melissa into the picture every now and then. Know it's fiction but seems a realistic reflection of what many feminists on line would like to see happen. However, extreme inequality foments revolution since when a group has nothing they have nothing to lose. Continue to love this story.

There are certainly bullies in the world but what amazes is that former best friends delight in denigrating the protagonist who is clearly having severe physical difficulties. As well as parents who seem to delight in humiliating their children for physical limitations that the child (regardless of age) can't control. Imagine if the Scott had a neurological impairment, what a hoot his parents and former friends would have with him. Sorry, having a hard time enjoying this story at this point given the fact that Scott never seems to have done anything wrong or been a particular problem to anyone. Yet it's "open season" on him.

Have to agree with the other reviewers that two adults (regardless of whether they are the parents) would not be permitted in a dentists work area without the express request of the patient. Add to that the fact that dental work areas are notoriously small. Finally, the dentist would have been within his rights and possibly required to order Craig and Beth out of the room after the spanking and inquire of Kelly as to whether she is safe and would she like the authorities called? Don't know the author's intent but this scene surprisingly did not seem to come off as infantalizing, which this reader would have expected to be the end result. The story continues to be interesting and look forward to more forced AB oriented situations in the future such as a babysitter, play dates with others under "regression therapy", etc.

Just finished reading up to this point for the first time. Definitely one of the better stories this commenter has ever read everything about the writing (plot, structure, story line(s), character development, syntax, even spelling) is top notch. Honestly not a fan of stories where the forced babying is imposed on a short (read defenseless) person and the protagonist(s) seem to fit that description. However, you bring the character to such vivid life that their stature doesn't seem to be too much of an issue in the overall plot. Hope you are recovering or fully recovered from COVID19 and are healthy, happy and safe. Given the state of the current economy and employment situation "too many freelance gigs" may not be a totally bad thing. ?

This is a great story, well developed plot and interesting characters. Can't wait for the mall trip. If you'll pardon my suggestions, might be interesting to continue on with Megan's final thought that maybe she'd act like more of a baby since she's being treated like one. For example, what if Mom decided that disposables for a month were too expensive and bad for the environment so cloth and plastic pants were in order. Or, Megan removes the diaper for #2 but is caught and Mom resorts to locking plastic pants, which Megan cuts, so mittens are in order. Not trying to highjack your story, which after re-reading my comments it appears I am trying to do, but merely giving you encouragement. Again, many thanks for a well written story. I know it must take time.