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    • “B-but we’re not-!” She tried to argue back but she was honestly too embarrassed to come up with anything of value! But she took a breath and managed to get a few words out, even as Francine caressed her thigh with her hand. “We just met…! I d-don’t know if we’re even friends! L-let alone… anything l-like that!” She squirmed a bit, the caressing of her thigh was starting to get to her. But she got one more thing out before she got too embarrassed to speak” “B-besides, you… can do much better than s-someone like me!” She exclaimed before letting out a quiet sound, what was not quite a squeal and not quite a moan.
    • Mike made his way to the edge of the bed slowly as the bulk of the diaper made him waddle instead of walk. It was a lot thicker now that he was so much smaller. He yelled at Anya to come get him but she seemed to be ignoring him. "I AM SO MAD AT YOU ANYA WHY THE HELL ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME" He said as he felt his bladder finally give up. He stopped looked down as a hiss could be heard and warmth spread across his crotch as he peed his diaper for the first time. All of it was on full display for his wife as she watched through the camera. Mike stared down in disbelief as he wet himself. 
    • Francine sat down by her and shrugged a bit. "Why should I correct them, hm?" She asked and chuckled. "They're just some nice gossiping old ladies, it's no use trying to explain how we met. They don't know I'm a model at all." She said and placed a hand on her thigh, giving it a little stroke. "Besides... So what if people think that? Is it really all that bad? We live together, I've seen you naked." She stated and let out a little giggle to add to the teasing remark. 
    • “N-no!” She exclaimed just as loudly before circling back around to tell her to keep it down “And shh…!” Francine chuckled at this but this gave the other girl the chance to say what she wanted. “W-why… didn’t you tell them I w-wasn’t your… g-girlfriend…?” She asked, genuinely confused but obviously deeply embarrassed. She did end up taking Francine’s offer to sit on the park bench though. What a shame! Francine could only imagine how cute she would have been squatting! Not like she was actually pushing anything out though.
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