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    • "Well, good," he said when she said it was dry.  "Because we really need to get going to catch the bus.  Just get dressed, and let's go." He was running his hand through his hair because of nerves. "Do you need to take a toy or a book or something?" he asked her.  "The Interview could take some time." He rushed to get her clothes on her, trying to get her to hurry.  He was watching the clock like a hawk knowing if they missed this bus, he would not make it to the interview. "Honey, the interview will be a loss if I turn up late.  You cannot turn up late for these things, so let's go," he kept harping on her until they were out the door, the stress too much for him to remember to check her diaper or anything as they took off.
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    • Sarah shakes off the next couple attempts to fully awake her,  but something about the word diaper startled her enough to fully wake up, she stretches her body checking the pull up again. "Its not a diaper and its dry," she grumbles. Every part of her body was tired she looked at the clock 7am she only got at most 5 hours of sleep. she rubbed her eyes a few times. she slowly peels herself from the bed slightly disoriented with everything.
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    • Larry got up and tried to wake her once, then started to get ready. He put on his nicer clothes, combed his hair, brushed his teeth, put on underarm and colon, and then went to check on the child again. "Get up, Sarah." He then went to make something quick for breakfast only to see her still sleeping, and exasperated, he walked over and shook at her trying to wake her. "Honey, you need to get up now," he was telling her.  "We need to get your diaper off of you, get you washed off if you peed in your sleep, and get you ready to go." He kept trying to wake her.
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