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Critiques and Writer's Discussion
For more in-depth critiques of stories and story writing discussion.
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This was recommended to me by a friend in Second Life and I binged it on breaks here and there at work and such. And OH WOW did reading this mess me up. You did great with it, but this has killed my headspace. (... with a kn... no, it's too dark. I never do dark jokes, this messed me up) Excellent work, I will be reading more of your stories. But maybe after a bit of time so that I can get more of my stories written in a cheerful and not at all dark way. -
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By littlebopeeper · Posted
Terrific chapter. The household is beginning to take shape, and Vickie's past is now catching up with her. Ian is in bed with the Mafia, and it's implied that the end of this story will be very bloody. Thank you for sharing such a complex story with us, and keep it coming! -
By littlebopeeper · Posted
Didn't she get turned down when she applied for a business license from the state? Then go ahead and begin operating without a license? -
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