Gawain

Some people just can't avoid sharing their opinion when it's the last thing people want to hear, huh? I'm not trying to offend you, bigbabybilly, but you're coming across as bigoted and ignorant, and so far it hasn't been a lot of fun for anyone.

In my country no one has guns unless they hunt, and to do that you need to have special licenses and undergo classes and testing. So no, I don't have a gun, and unless I get a burning desire to go hunting one day I can't see a single reason why I'd ever want one. The police here doesn't even carry guns.

We all have our turn ons and turn offs, so... The ones that don't appeal to me will make me move over to something else rather than finish reading. I'm not an AB or a sissy, I'm not into roleplaying or dressing up, so those things will make me move on. I'm tired of stories where the main character is a "really pretty girl who's kinda small for her age", too, so. Yeah. And then there's the quality issues. A lot of stories out there aren't written by people who care about writing. It's a sad fact. Far be it for me to judge too harshly; I haven't published anything here, but for something to be worth reading it has to be up to a certain standard. The plot has to be well thought through, the characters believable and refreshing and the grammar up to scratch. Writing isn't just something you sit down and do one day, it takes time and practice. However many diaper changes you insert into the plot.

Not everything needs to be AB, you guys. Submissive behaviour does not an AB make, after all.

Obviously, we all want to be accepted for who we are. With fetishes it's something we can't really help, and this particular one has a lot of shame connected to it for a lot of people. Keep that in mind. You've already been more accepting than most people. ALSO keep in mind that despite you finding this interesting and fun now, you should take some time to think and not jump into this head first. What seems to be a good idea right now can later feel rushed and uncomfortable (I've been there). Ease into it, think it through and talk to each other.

Aw, that was a sweet chapter! Thank you.

A chapter! Thank you so much for coming back to finish this, it truly is one of the best stories I've read. I can imagine you would have gotten burned out on it, writing about regular people takes a lot of anyone, I think. To make characters believable, a certain amount of energy has to be poured into the concoction For me it does, anyways! ^^ Leaving without finishing isn't unusual for me at all (though I rarely publish anything, because I'm a wuss), simply because I find I don't have more to pour into the characters, and they're not telling me where they want to go anymore. I think those of us reading appreciate the effort. Thanks.

It's a sweet story, and I can tell you picture it while writing. You might try to turn some of the conversation you've worked into sentences into quotes. Have your character say "Sweet dreams", for instance. It'll give some variation to the writing, makes it easier to read. It also makes the characters come alive (both for yourself while writing and for us reading) a bit more, though I find it takes me more time to write out a conversation like that. Great work.

That's true enough, I suppose (), but his stories aren't updated daily even when they're being updated. Let's cross our fingers?

Indeed, a month and a half is nearly the same as a full year. I'm sure NewGuy20 wouldn't leave us hanging like that! Or.. I'm not actually sure, but I'm sure crossing my fingers.

Thank you. I'm sad to see the last chapter, but I'm rather grateful you finished it! Good work. I'm not an AB, but your writing still kept me reading.

Good to see you back! Your writing never fails to heighten the general quality of this subforum, so thank you for that.