Well, what kills a story for me , along with the bad grammar, poor spelling ,and sometimes totally implausible plots is the continuity with some stories. Now I understand that the real world, meatspace whatever you call it happens to pull us away from time to time. I get that. My life is wicked busy. Please though if you can help it, let the audience know if your'e going to be away for awhile. Otherwise it just smacks of abandonment to me. That kills it because it's like good sex vs teasing. If you work the person your'e with up and up and then suddenly leave, well not to be vulgar here, but those are some of the bluest balls i have seen lol. Sorry should have posted a disclaimer that my reply was going to be a tad explicit. Oh well. I throw caution to the wind, oh my brothers and sisters .