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    • I like the way you handled this here! I suspected we were looking at a AR virus type of story from the last couple chapters, always enjoy something in that genre that's well written. This one has a lot of potential! Looking forward to more! 🙂
    • Log for the day: After a little break I started to continue this adventure. The story is still gripping. I can't believe the protesters had success with their work. Good for them, but I guess there is always a catch. I'm interested in how the theater will play out for Beth. I'm sometimes a little confused who is who because there are so many characters. Maybe I should look up who Charlotte and Lila are again Do you have like a Persona list or something? It is really helpful in fantasy books.
    • I feel like Maddy should explore exactly what effect the pills have. From little you mentioned it looks like they are some form of Anti-Diuretic Hormone booster(?). That in an of itself is a little bit of a concern, I mean the pills aren't new, they are from whenever Grace stopped bedwetting. Using old presumably prescription medication is a huge no-no. Who knows what effect they might have after some years left languishing on a medicine cabinet shelf? 
    • That's really kind of you! I'm trying to give him the benefit of the doubt that maybe he forgot he donated, or didn't recognize the charge, but its getting harder to do that as he ignores me.
    • Hi Ingrid, and welcome to DD. There’s lots of likeminded people here, so come on in, make yourself comfy. Relax, have fun, and enjoy!
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