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By willnotwill · Posted
I think he's distinguishing the forums Story and Art section (https://www.dailydiapers.com/board/index.php?/forum/17-story-and-art-forum/) from the main website Stories directory (https://www.dailydiapers.com/content/stories.html). -
By Apache Raccoon · Posted
I'm not sure I understand the question to be honest. What do you mean exactly? The NORMAL DD website and the NORMAL story section? What do you mean normal? as far as I know there is no alternate version of Daily Diapers or its story forum, unless it's mobile maybe...I don't know. -
By PamperedPrince · Posted
Update: I am beginning work on Chapter 10 today. Be on the look out as I will be posting it when it's finished! 😀 -
By PamperedPrince · Posted
LILA’S 2nd BIRTHDAY Lila smiled as she flashed with the faint aura surrounding her as a result of all the past wishes that she made. Her DNA was magically altered. She was now a magical girl that always got her wishes granted thanks to the magic diapers that she wore. She glanced at her diaper, which was now soaked. With one single touch, it was dry again. She touched it again and it instantly became soaked. A pair of wings sprouted out of her back and she made a baby bottle appear in her hands by just looking at them. She touched the baby bottle and it filled with her mother’s breast milk. She flew up to the ceiling of her room and drained the entire bottle using telekinesis, every drop of milk somehow going down her throat without any suction to the bottle. She flashed and was in princess clothing once again. Her mother opened the door and gasped when she saw her daughter flying in the air. “I fwy in woom!” Lila shouted. “Lila!” Cynthia shouted. “W-what’s going on? You have wings! And you’re dressed up like a princess…” Lila smiled, and made her wings vanish. She touched her mother and she forgot everything that happened when she first entered the room. She turned her princess clothing back into her footed sleeper and laid back in her crib. Cynthia smiled, seeing her now two-year-old daughter laying in her crib, contentedly sucking on her pacifier. “Guess what, Lila Loo? Today’s your birthday!” Lila smiled. Guess what, mommy? You get a surprise! Cynthia laid Lila down on the changing table and unzipped her footed sleeper. She unpeeled the tabs of her soaked Size 3 Pampers Overnights Diaper. She lifted back the front of the diaper and was squirted in the face with another one of Lila’s many peeruptions. “Lila!” Cynthia shouted. “You do NOT pee on mommy!” Lila always played this up, so she began to cry. Her crying turned into wailing. Cynthia then gasped. “Lila, mommy’s sorry that she yelled at you. But it’s your birthday, dear. No more peeing on mommy…” Lila nodded. “No pee pee!” Hours passed. Lila was now finished eating her birthday lunch. She was sucking down her baby bottle full of apple juice. Her eyes then began to droop. “I tired…” Cynthia nodded and carried Lila up to her room. She placed her in her crib for her nap. She kissed her on the cheek and closed the door. Lila smiled, as she made wings sprout out of her again. She emitted a faint flash and flew around her room, giggling as she peed her diaper. She touched her diaper and it was dry again. She giggled and soaked her diaper once again. She then made a bottle appear as she made a gentle landing in her crib. She made her wings disappear and she touched the bottle, to fill it with her mother’s breast milk. She touched the bottle again, and all of its contents was now in her stomach. She let out a contented sigh and fell asleep, as she began to soak her diaper and the crib… Lila was now sitting at her high chair. A quarter sheet Baby Shark Cake sat there, with just two candles. Her mother and father were there, along with Camden. They all sang to Lila like they did a year ago: Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday dear Lila, happy birthday to you! “And many more!” Cynthia sang. “Okay Lila! Blow out the candles! Do you need mommy to show you how?” Lila shook her head. She stood up and blew at the two candles. They both went out and everyone cheered. Everyone got a slice of the marble cake that they made for Lila. Lila had a little piece, along with a tiny scoop of Neapolitan ice cream. Cynthia, John, and Camden all had the ice cream after the cake. About four days later, it was time for Lila’s two-year checkup. Lila was back in an examination room with her mother and Dr. Sterling. Cynthia once again held Lila, with her white onesie open to reveal her Size 3 Pampers Cruiser. Dr. Sterling smiled when she saw Lila’s growth. “Hi Lila! It looks like you grew some more!” She took Lila’s measurements. “30 inches. She would’ve been perfect if you brought her in a year ago. Lila is now the height of a 12-month-old.” She placed Lila on a scale, while Cynthia held her still. “20 pounds, 4 ounces. Yup! She’s the same weight as a 12-month-old. And you know what, Mrs. Watson? That’s perfectly fine for a girl like Lila. She’s growing at her own pace! Just watch her. Maybe she’ll be the size of a two-year-old next year?” Cynthia nodded. “I can only hope. So, would you say she’s healthy? She eats well and I try to keep things healthy at home.” Dr. Sterling nodded. “Lila is very healthy. When you think that Lila is ready, try to get her potty trained.” Cynthia grinned. “That’s the plan. Lila has shown no interest yet, but I’ll keep encouraging her!” And with that, the appointment was over. Cynthia put Lila in her car seat and they drove home. Lila smiled as she hugged Mr. Stuffykins. What wishes could I make next? I love this magic diaper…Her giddy smile continued, as a gentle stream of pee began to flow into her diaper. Lila once again had a dream where she broke the rules. She wished that she was as magical as the magic diaper. In the dream, she became aware that she was dreaming, so she smiled. “It’s a dream!” Lila shouted. “I’m not awake so I still get to keep it, right?” “Correct,” the voice told her. “While you do get to keep the magic diaper, I do want to talk to you about your attitude toward your mother. She does have a point with the way that you are behaving. I know that you are enjoying all the wishes that I am able to grant for you, but remember to be nice and respectful to her.” Lila nodded, as she glanced at the magic diaper, and the glow that was emanating from her body. Since she broke the rules and was still dreaming, she was still flashing. “Yes. I know the rule. I know every rule. Be nice and respectful. But how do I do that when she wants me to grow up? I don’t wanna grow up! I like this age and I wanna stay two!” “That is your choice, Lila. Your mother already told you that. And with each choice that you make, there is a cost. What will that cost you to stay young? I want to keep you happy, but you still need to make sure that you follow all the rules.” Lila flashed and outgrew the earth, until it was like a marble in the palm of her hand. “I want my mommy to be happy, so I will grow up when I am ready.” “And when will that be? Ten years? Twenty years? 100 years? You are already one of the kids that have had this magic diaper for the longest time. There is only one other kid I had that had it longer than you.” Lila tossed the marble-sized earth into her other hand. “And who is that kid?” “I cannot tell you that. You will have to find out for yourself. I am not allowed to give the names of any of the kids that I have helped. Now, if you want to spend that much time with me, I have no problem with that. Just know that everything has a cost. You would be outliving your loved ones. Are you okay with that?” Lila nodded. “Uh huh! I can always wish for a new mommy and daddy to take care of me. And when I outlive them, I will wish for another mommy and daddy…” “If that is what you wish, I will keep serving you. As long as you are happy and continue to follow the rules, I will keep serving you. And when you’re ready to grow up like you said that you would, just let me know. I will find a new child once you get to that point. Is that okay, Lila?” Lila nodded, as she began to outgrow the solar system. She held the sun in her hands. Since it was a dream, her hands were not burning. Lila smiled, as she flashed brightly with the magic diaper that she was wearing. From what the magic diaper told her, she made her decision. She was going to stay two for a very long time. Lila giggled as she began to approach the size of the Milky Way galaxy. “I don’t wanna gwow up! I wanna stay two as long as I live! Oh, how I wish that I could no longer get any older!” The magic diaper tickled her and she giggled, letting a gentle stream of pee flow into her diaper. Her youth was now secure and was unable to escape Lila. Lila woke up in her crib with a smile on her face. She could still hear the whisper of the magic diaper. “Lila, you just had a dream where you wished that you could no longer get any older. Is this what you really want? I want to be sure that wish is granted with your approval while awake.” Lila stuck her pacifier in her mouth and nodded. “Mmm hmm!” And just like that, the magic diaper tickled her. Her wish was officially granted and Lila flashed for a brief second. Lila took her pacifier out of her mouth and gasped. Did the wish work? I guess I’ll find out next year, during my third birthday! Hee hee! Lila still felt tired, so she slept a little longer. She cuddled Mr. Stuffykins, suckled her pacifier, and fell back asleep. -
<hug> That's worse than mine gets. I usually at least get a Sunday off. I hear those hours though! That is the part I hate, being so exhausted I couldn't even focus to read anything last week, let alone write... I have I think sixteen tabs open right now of chapters I didn't read. We'll see if the focus improves later today, not going so great at this point... Thanks for understanding and the responses. I hope your own workload improves there!
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