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Hey guys! Been on the site for awhile now and some of you may know me by now. :D Usually you'll find me in the chat room and I occasionally post in the forums but this morning I thought I'd take the plunge and write my first story attempt. :) please feel free to comment, I only ask that you state clearly why you like something or why you don't and if you don't, how I might do better. So, without further ado, my first story. :)

**based on a dream ;) **

Mayra gave out a frustrated groan as she pounded the steering wheel with her open palm, then laying her forehead on the horn with a sigh. Once again, she tried to turn the key to get the engine to start and once again, nothing. It wasn't even bothering to click this time. Trying to stay positive, she checked her cell phone again and for the hundredth time, it was still saying 'roaming' and showing no signal. She wasn't too surprised; being out in the woods of Northern Arizona, one could reasonably expect to lose their cell phone service from time to time. Mayra just wished it had happened back in the last town she'd passed twenty minutes ago rather than out here in the pines. She wasn't exactly worried so much as frustrated; her friend Lisa had provided instructions on how to get to the cabin out near Pinetop and all, but Mayra had decided to be extra clever and not even bother to bring her map, let alone Lisa's careful instructions. Now Mayra was fairly certain she was lost on top of being stranded. With nothing much else to do, Mayra settled down to get comfortable as she waited for the Ranger's service or whoever to find her. Thankfully it wasn't too cold this evening despite the fact that it was mid-March. Weather service had called for rain and even though it was overcast, no rain as of yet. Pulling up a blanket from the back seat, Mayra wrapped herself up in it and decided she'd just close her eyes for a moment to rest them.

Mayra was startled awake by knocking on her window. Hurriedly rubbing the sleep from her eyes, she gave a aj's cracking yawn as she turned to see who was knocking. A quick glance at her car's digital display clock informed her she'd been asleep for almost an hour. A bit surprised by this, she turned her full attention to the man outside her window. At first, she couldn't make out much; the rain had apparently started while she slept and the man wore a hooded jacket as he stood outside her car. Mayra rolled the window down and began to smile, feeling relieved. The man outside smiled back, and Mayra started to feel butterflies in her stomach. Whoever he was, he was quite handsome; Mayra could see even, pearly whites in a chiseled, well formed face with a pair of beautiful blue eyes. She couldn't quite make out his hair, but she was certain it would be blond. She found herself wanting to run her hand along the side of his head and pull his hood back to see and had to restrain herself with a blush. "Uh, hi." She found herself saying in response. She inwardly groaned at the lack of her usual aplomb. Thankfully the stranger just kept smiling. "Hi. I noticed your car in the road and found you asleep. Are you stuck?" He asked this while tilting an amused eyebrow. Mayra nodded and repressed the urge to gush at this guy. "Yeah, the damn thing won't start, I don't know what's wrong with it." Mayra felt honest irritation at this; she was nit your typical girl and could usually fix most problems with her car, but she'd tried to diagnose the issue herself before her little nap to no avail. Thankfully, the guy just nodded without comment. "Well, I'm pretty good with cars. Pop the hood and I'll take a look." Mayra complied and climbed out of her SUV to provide what assistance she could. Her cheeks started to burn with embarrassment when she say that he at least had a flashlight. Mayra has forgotten hers at home along with the map and the instructions. 'Oh yeah, you're doing aces to help this guy alright, Mayra' she thought to herself, 'well perhaps you can at least offer him a courtesy bj or something for his efforts'. Mayra smiled tightly at the image of what his reaction might be to such an offer. Her ego was not salvaged much when she saw the guy proceeding to diagnose the issue with sure, practiced motions as he tried to deduce what's wrong. "I'm Mayra by the way." Mayra heard herself blurt out loud. Christ, she was definitely on top of her game tonight, no doubt about it. The guy turned to Mayra and smiled. "Mayra? That's a pretty name. I'm Jake." He held out his hand which Mayra took as they shook hands. She could feel herself grinning like a little girl at being called pretty. "I think I know what might be wrong; could you climb up here and look where I'm pointing?" Mayra did as Jake asked, completely trusting as she did so. Her trust was rewarded by a sudden sharp pain being felt in her left buttocks. "Ow! Hey, what the hell...?" Mayra felt herself going quickly numb as she turned to Jake. He was standing there, smiling that smile of his and holding a hypodermic needle. That's all Mayra could make out as she slipped to the ground unconscious. The last thing she felt was her bladder letting go before everything went dark.

*ok, I know it was short, but tell me what y'all think! If I get ten responses today, I'll post more. ;) be good kiddies! :D *

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Hey great start. Was a little confusing as to why the character was where she was initially but it was somewhat clarified down a paragraph or two. Over all the content structure is clean, the formatting is easy on the eyes for reading. Please continue... I look forward to seeing where this goes. Huggies and Luvs.

BK

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I gotta tell you, even though it was short, I'm intrigued, & you've got me hooked already! I really connected with Mayra's emotions since you did such a good job of describing them. Obviously Mayra has been drugged by Jake & I want to know why. I do hope you continue.

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I certainly hope that this gets enough responses, so that it meets nanamartinez's 10 comments requirement & so we show her how interested we are in seeing this continued. So c'mon DD story Readers, comment away so this story doesn't go unfinished by the wayside like so many other great stories here do!

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Very nicely written and I am intrigued as well. The idea of being drugged and possibly made to do other things reminds me I need to continue on my story; which I promise will be forthcoming as soon as I read more of yours first Nanamartinez.

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Ok ladies & germs, I know I said I wanted ten responses to continue but I'll be honest in saying I want to share this story as well so, here goes the next section, typed out on my phone during my lunch period. ;) I'll do as much as I can.

Mayra felt herself waking up in stages, like a diver slowly emerging from the deeps. At first, everything was confused and fuzzy. Next came unfamiliar aches and pains as she started to regain conciousness. Groaning, Mayra went to put her hand to her aching head. Instead of feeling her fingers touching her forehead as she expected, she instead felt something soft and padded where her hand should be. Confused, Mayra squinted her eyes open and tried to sit up. Again, she encountered something she didn't expect as her head connected with hard metal. Wincing and hissing in pain, Mayra went to put her hands to her face. She felt that odd softness where her hands should be again. Carefully opening her eyes again, Mayra examined her hands. Each one was covered to the wrist in a white leather mitt that rendered her hands into cartoonish looking white balls. Each one was strapped to her wrist with a leather and metal buckle and secured with a tiny padlock. "What the Hell?" She said as she lowered her hands to her sides. Taking stock of her surroundings, Mayra was alarmed to find herself in what appeared to be a basement... & locked in a cage. The cage resembled a dog kennel, but appeared to be made of studier metal and construction. Feeling her heart beat start to quicken, Mayra carefully started to sit up. It was at this point that Mayra realized she was naked.... save for the diaper she wearing. Stunned, Mayra gently touched the crotch of her diaper with her gloved right hand. She couldn't feel it to confirm its presence, but the all too familiar crinkling sound it made confirmed it for her ears along with her eyes. Mayra had seen diapers before; any number of her cousins were still babies when she was a teenager after all. She'd even seen the adult versions having candy striped at a hospital as well. The diaper she was currently wearing seemed a mix if the two; big enough it would fit an adult with a baby block motiff on the front one might expect to see on a bay diaper. The word BAMBINOS was proudly emblazoned on the front of it. "What the Hell is going on here?" Mayra said aloud, her voice quivering in fear. As she was still trying to calm down and make sense of this, Mayra heard the basement doors opening. Light and voices from upstairs could briefly be heard before someone entered the basement. Mayra attempted futilely to cover herself and hide in the furthest corner the cage allowed for as the man descended the stairs and approached her cage with an all too familiar smile. "Wakey wakey, little baby."said Jake.

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lol, you could always say to use your imagination! great second part, spacing was a problem for me though... but great none the less.

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Personalias: thank you very much for your comments, I will certainly work in those areas. As for the description of 'Mayra', I didn't think to describe her because... that hapoens to be me. ;)

Oh...so what do you look like?

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