Agroml606 Posted January 14, 2015 Share Posted January 14, 2015 ok soo ive been writing this story.. but i have writers block.. and idk if i should even finish it.. like is it somthing that you all would read? do me a favor and look it over?? Link to comment
Dr_J Posted January 14, 2015 Share Posted January 14, 2015 Well, I can't say if I'd continue reading it or not due to how short this is. I'm not sure what the significance of Alexis looking down at her genitalia is. Also, why does the Blue Circle Inn hold the event? Is it a publicly known event? An "under the radar" event? What's Alexis' motivation for going? Your snippet states she just shows up, but how is she feeling about it? Nervous? Confident? Hopeful? 1 Link to comment
Agroml606 Posted January 14, 2015 Author Share Posted January 14, 2015 Well, I can't say if I'd continue reading it or not due to how short this is. I'm not sure what the significance of Alexis looking down at her genitalia is. Also, why does the Blue Circle Inn hold the event? Is it a publicly known event? An "under the radar" event? What's Alexis' motivation for going? Your snippet states she just shows up, but how is she feeling about it? Nervous? Confident? Hopeful? Link to comment
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