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  1. Critiques and Writer's Discussion

    For more in-depth critiques of stories and story writing discussion.

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  2. Completed Stories

    Area for Finished Stories. Message Elfy to have your story moved here.

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    For Pictures, Comics and Anything Else Artistic.

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  4. Story Contest: Best Night Ever

    Post your submissions for the December 2017 Story contest here!

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    • I've been fairly continuously in diapers for a while now.   This morning I was doing something on the computer and fell a little trickle on my leg.  Damn, my diaper must be leaking.    Thought about it a second.   Holy, crap.   I forgot, I'm not wearing one.   Oops.  
    • He watches Mommy dress him and pays attention for his turn to zip. He finally gets to. 
    • Yeah, sorry. Things are a little hectic on my end. We are in the process of moving so lots of construction to fix up the place. Hammers and drills don't make the best writing ambiance. 🥲
    • He is feeling bold and decides to open his mouth to object that he can't eat without knowing what it is, but before he can get the words out, he feels a spoon in his mouth and he tastes something sweet kind of like applesauce, but different.  He swallows the sweet stuff, but wonders why he's blindfolded in the first place
    • The premise of this one is very thoughtful, cute and heartfelt even. But the lack of revision shows very hard... Im not against AI assisted works, the tool sure has problems, too many for a forum post... But its uses can be very interesting, even change how we think some aspects of art production. That said, the text is so inconsistent with itself, with blatant contradictions every other chapter, sudden changes in voice that just distract and confuse for no clear reason, and so many weird wording choices throughout it all that it really hampered my apreciation of the story... Not to say that it's a bad story, the plot, premise, and ramifications from these few scenes are fascinating. The characterization of the couple was well made, and really thought out, even though their dialogues lack in it a lot, their actions through the Plot are superb. The way they are amateurs at kink is very well played, his insecurities, even after all the reassurances that things are okay, were so believable and grounded, and the conflict within the girfriend is an exploration Id love to see more often and look foward for further developments into it. The story really has lots of potential. I just cant shake off the feeling the text should've been through a few more re-reads and revisions
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