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    • Dahlia listened intently until her brain went blank. It was hung up on one single word. GIRLFRIEND?! D-did she mean like a girlfriend girlfriend or just a friend that is also a girl?! She can’t just throw that word around willy-nilly, right?! Dahlia was as easy to read as a baby book so Francine, in no time at all, was able to discern the origin of her surprised expression. Time to capitalize!
    • "Well, you see my dear, I CAN do whatever I'd like with you, since you ARE staying in my house for free..." she teased and gave her a playful smirk. "But you see, I am a merciful girlfriend, and so... You can choose." She stated softly. "If you really want to cover up, I won't stop you... But it means you might not get changed right away since I won't notice your mess through your pants." She shrugged. 
    • Feeling rather shy, Dahlia tried in vain to cover her big “plain” diaper with her hands. “Y-you can’t do that! Right…?” Dahlia retorted, afraid of having nothing to hide it behind. Well… that was before she processed the fact that she had been smothered in kisses just now. A shame none were on the lips but kisses were kisses! And if they were in unannounced, they’d always get Dahlia flustered. Most things Francine in specific did seemed to have that effect! It was adorable.    //sorry for the delay! My internet was been a bit spotty so it took me a bit to reconnect
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