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    • Thank you for taking the time to write, I appreciate it and I am glad that you enjoyed it. Emily is aware (it seems a lot of littles in the Diaper Dimension aren't, or at least that seemed the case back when I wrote this, I think that's changed a little) and it was fun to write a character who was, in some respect, genre aware. She was not breaking the fourth wall.... but that could have happened. I'm not sure that Emily could have completely avoided Chase, barring never leaving her apartment. And even that might not have worked. Middles probably don't get that Bigs want to turn Littles in babies. When they see it, then it is just a case of a Little who was not really grown up. If they were really grown up it never would have happened...  As for a continuation, I've written some adjacent stories, but nothing that is necessarily a continuation. At the moment I don't have any good ideas for a continuation, but if something occurs to me then I might dive back into writing Emily's adventures.
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    • Mike knew what was coming, ever since Anya turned 29 it was baby this and baby that. He knew she was going to ask him to get her pregnant. Before she even asked he stopped her. "Sweetie, we talked about this when I started the company. I said I wanted to make money for us to live comfortably, we cant have a baby if I am working like I am now. Its not fair to you." He said using a little manipulation on his wife. He slowly ate her wonderful seafood and pasta dish enjoying every flavor. 
    • My name is Ingrid Guerci, and I'm new member. I wear diapers for incontinence, and hoping to make friends while I'm here.
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