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    • Hey Les Lea, I really like the set up with the stepmom forcing him to wear nappies. But I think the potentially best parts of the story are pretty rushed because it feels more like a summary what happened. I'd love to read more about the beginning how she diapers him the first time and what his life is when she puts him in them more often and often. What Does she make him use them. All these things pretty much already happened in the second you read about it. Place do a slower pacing. Please let the characters breathe and develop a little bit. The plot of this first chapter could be told in like 10 chapters.
    • Sounds like there is a problem with having things shipped to there home country.  Not everywhere is easy to ship to, some are very careful about shipping stuff into the country. On the other hand, if you have a friend somewhere like in the US, or Canada, that you trust to reship items to you, they might be able to reship things. It depends on how things are with the shipping, some are easyer to ship something personal, rather than from a company.
    • Update: At work, professional setting with casual dress and I am wet, an ABU Classico V2 diaper. I have a meeting in about 45 minutes and no one will have any suspicion that I have on a diaper let alone a wet diapee. I will probably wet a little during the meeting.
    • I never did understand tucking your shirt into your diaper.
    • I tried to back away, but it was no use as the worker dragged me from my cage!    “No wait! I don’t want them to take m-AH!” I screamed as I felt the needle go in and once again my body went heavy and sluggish.    Unable to even try to fight, I was helpless to stop the grooming process. Despite my drugged state, I could tell the process was more thorough, that the products used seemed to be more lavish and expensive. It wasn’t until once the bath ended that I really started to panic, as I looked down to see all traces of my body hair completely gone! ”No…. No…” I weakly protested as the powerful hands laid me down in the pink diaper and forced it on before I found myself in a station I’d never been before.    My legs and arms were splayed out, allowing easy access for the two workers to bring the tiny brushes to my fingers and toes as I watched the pink coating painted across their surface.    ‘This can’t be happening,’ I thought, too weak from the drug to even speak up in protest in this moment, ‘this lady can’t just pretend like I’m a girl!’
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