Feedback on "Time for a Change"

[Personalias]

Just posted a new one shot titled

[Cute_Kitten]

Time For A Change

[Personalias]

Thanks Cute_Kitten.

[WBDaddy]

I think you did a really nice job developing your protagonist in the short amount of time you gave yourself to do it.

[Personalias]

That's fair.

[WBDaddy]

Truth be told, I don't know how else you'd be able to get that scene set the way you wanted it.

[Personalias]

Yeah....yeah. (sigh) yeah.

[Personalias]

Anybody else write themselves into a corner like that?

[WBDaddy]

9 minutes ago, Personalias said:

Anybody else write themselves into a corner like that?

All the time.

[Cute_Kitten]

11 minutes ago, Personalias said:

Anybody else write themselves into a corner like that?

Many times!

[Personalias]

44 minutes ago, Cute_Kitten said:

Still reading ToC (been reading it with constant interuptions for like....over an hour now LOL)

Not to intrude:

[Cute_Kitten]

1 minute ago, Personalias said:

Not to intrude:

[Personalias]

Wow.

[Cute_Kitten]

8 minutes ago, Personalias said:

Wow.

[Cute_Kitten]

Now for my commentary:

It wuz good. I likeded it.

[Personalias]

CK, thanks for the feedback.

[Cute_Kitten]

Oh, yes, you conveyed that feeling those two are old hats at the game very well will little comments such as Mrs. Z saying she's getting old, not senile, etc. along with the tidbit of Ms. Avery preferring to change the strong willed ones. ^^

Smut, to me anyway- and this may be coming from someone who practically grew up reading fan fiction- "smut" I take to mean sex. Any and all kinds of sex fall under the "smut" umbrella.

[Personalias]

8 hours ago, Cute_Kitten said:

Personally, Personalias

[BabyWarlock]

I found it a unique story with an interesting plot. I love the hinted relationship between the two teachers. I enjoyed the reverse psychology part and how it fitted in with the persuasion. I enjoyed your writing and hope to see more.

[Cute_Kitten]

1 hour ago, Personalias said:

With regards to the puns CK, and I mean this in the nicest way possible:

[BabyWarlock]

Sorry to say this Cute Kitten but your puns are not the cat's pyjamas ()

[Personalias]

You know what C_K?

[Cute_Kitten]

I see you've been having fun using the force.

[JustinDB87]

I was just overly excited when I saw something new from personalias.

[Personalias]

JustinDB87: