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Champion of the Crescent - Prologue


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A note from the Author:

Hi, I'm posting first part of this story here because I'd like to hear some thoughts and of course, get some expert advice from some of the great amateur writers in the community.

As a means of establishing some of characters and setting, this prologue takes place a year after the events of story itself and references those events, although cryptically.

So what I would like to know is, is it too cryptic to the point the reader looses interest or does the mystery intrigue? My own view at the moment is that I'll probably need to rewrite and reveal some of what happened.

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