fading.kitten Posted April 25, 2015 Share Posted April 25, 2015 Good mechanic. Read through the previous chapters again. It's nice to see how the characters have progressed over the course of the story. The ending will definitely be bittersweet when it comes. Link to comment
Hades Posted April 26, 2015 Author Share Posted April 26, 2015 Zeke/ Alexander Blackburn Link to comment
hifox5 Posted April 26, 2015 Share Posted April 26, 2015 More twists and turns love it Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted April 26, 2015 Share Posted April 26, 2015 Loved this, nice touch of the little girl belonging to Zeke's unwitting nemesis. Link to comment
hifox5 Posted May 15, 2015 Share Posted May 15, 2015 Wow great update, when are you going to update? Link to comment
hifox5 Posted May 15, 2015 Share Posted May 15, 2015 Wow great update, when are you going to update? Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted May 20, 2015 Share Posted May 20, 2015 Haven't read the update yet, but just wanted to post and say HELL YES UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! WOOT!!!!!! Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted May 21, 2015 Share Posted May 21, 2015 Ah, that was intense but in a good way. The incident with the alcohol really messed up James and Ashleys relationship. I wonder what Zeke is learning from Dante. He's closed himself off to keep the others from finding out, and to protect them, too, I think. Really enjoyed this chapter. Link to comment
Shotgun Diplomat Posted May 22, 2015 Share Posted May 22, 2015 I think Dante is an allegory for the devil, and James is playing both the Adam and Eve parts in that Dante is offering forbidden knowledge to him as Satan did the Apple. Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted May 25, 2015 Share Posted May 25, 2015 Poor Zeke. He's got some tough choices to make. Link to comment
SGTbaby Posted May 25, 2015 Share Posted May 25, 2015 Oh the inner fight of good and evil is always fun to deal with. Zeke knows the decision he needs to make, he just is having trouble making it. Awesome update. I really enjoy this story. Link to comment
hifox5 Posted May 25, 2015 Share Posted May 25, 2015 Great update, hope Zeke makes the right choice Link to comment
hifox5 Posted May 27, 2015 Share Posted May 27, 2015 Great update, just a bit short, still love your story. Link to comment
Hades Posted May 27, 2015 Author Share Posted May 27, 2015 Lol. The end is near. Im sorta taking it slow. Plus the wife is coming home and she hogs the computer. Link to comment
hifox5 Posted May 27, 2015 Share Posted May 27, 2015 Great update, just a bit short, still love your story. Link to comment
fading.kitten Posted May 28, 2015 Share Posted May 28, 2015 Daww. This is one of the best stories I have read. Looking forward to the conclusion. Link to comment
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