Hades Posted February 23, 2015 Author Share Posted February 23, 2015 Ashley/ Maria Blackburn Link to comment
hifox5 Posted February 23, 2015 Share Posted February 23, 2015 Excellent update, can't wait for more. Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted February 23, 2015 Share Posted February 23, 2015 I really enjoyed this update!!!! Loved Ashley in this- especially the end, when she got up, held her hand up, then kicked the bully's...well XD that was just AWESOME! Link to comment
Ishigreensa Posted February 23, 2015 Share Posted February 23, 2015 What are the teachers really going to do? Link to comment
Shotgun Diplomat Posted February 23, 2015 Share Posted February 23, 2015 Excellent update, this was a great addition. Thanks for the posting. Link to comment
Drownedinp Posted February 23, 2015 Share Posted February 23, 2015 Loved that last chapter, what she did to that Lawrence kid priceless! Link to comment
Hades Posted February 25, 2015 Author Share Posted February 25, 2015 Short chapter I know guys. Sorry I didn't have time to write a little more. Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted February 25, 2015 Share Posted February 25, 2015 Loved it. Ashley's pacifier is adorable. Loved Zeke in this. Link to comment
Ishigreensa Posted February 25, 2015 Share Posted February 25, 2015 That was so adorable! Link to comment
hifox5 Posted March 1, 2015 Share Posted March 1, 2015 Loving your work Vampire4, I just need another fix of the awesome foursome, I think I'm having withdrawal. Link to comment
Hades Posted March 1, 2015 Author Share Posted March 1, 2015 Hifox. Ask and you shall receive my friend. Enjoy. Link to comment
hifox5 Posted March 1, 2015 Share Posted March 1, 2015 Thanks for that. Great chapter, Zeke is so badass. P.S So all I have to do is ask nicely and you will put another fantastic chapter up...... Link to comment
Hades Posted March 1, 2015 Author Share Posted March 1, 2015 Lol. I will always do my best to get updates out quickly. I can promise that this won't end up a dead story. Lots more to come and to be honest the only thing i don't have planned is the end. Im also considering changing one aspect, basically introducing a new concept, but i don't know if i want to or if you guys would approve. Link to comment
Ishigreensa Posted March 3, 2015 Share Posted March 3, 2015 This really is a great story! Link to comment
hifox5 Posted March 4, 2015 Share Posted March 4, 2015 Having withdrawal again Vampire4, we need our fix Link to comment
Hades Posted March 4, 2015 Author Share Posted March 4, 2015 Busy times my friend, busy times. Starting a new job tomorrow. Will update soon though i promise. Link to comment
Shotgun Diplomat Posted March 5, 2015 Share Posted March 5, 2015 I love this story, thanks so much for the update. In retrospect I really wish that I could apply what I know now to my childhood bullies, but hindsight is 20/20. Link to comment
hifox5 Posted March 6, 2015 Share Posted March 6, 2015 Congrats on the new job, although you already had a job keeping us entertained Link to comment
Hades Posted March 12, 2015 Author Share Posted March 12, 2015 Erica/ Laura Blackburn Link to comment
hifox5 Posted March 12, 2015 Share Posted March 12, 2015 Great update again, I like how the original owners are coming to the surface. It's your story Vampire4 and I enjoy reading ever update, but the kids drinking just doesn't feel right to me, when I asked before if Zeke and Tara relationship becoming sexual, you said no because he is under age, the kids drinking feels like it should be in the same boat as that. But again it's your story Vampire4 and your free to write what ever you want. Cant what to read the next installment. Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted March 12, 2015 Share Posted March 12, 2015 Loved this! The tension really wracked up at the end of the scene. Ooh, suspenseful. Loved them getting drunk- reminded me somewhat of some shenanigans I pulled as a kid. XD Zeke was adorable when he was asking Eruca for help with his diapers for his nap. Loved how you showed James differing thought pattern when Edward was coming to the surface. Gives us a glimpse of what's going on with he suppressed souls and how they're interacting with the squatter souls, and also shows us more of Eds personality- and from the little buts and pieces we've seen, my readers impression is this guy is a major schmuck. Link to comment
Shotgun Diplomat Posted March 12, 2015 Share Posted March 12, 2015 I am curious, when the nominal adults get drunk, were they experiencing a resurgence of the suppressed souls of the bodies they inhabit? Link to comment
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