Cute_Kitten Posted January 20, 2015 Share Posted January 20, 2015 Wasn't expecting that. Enjoyable as always. Link to comment
Hades Posted January 25, 2015 Author Share Posted January 25, 2015 Zeke/ Alexander Blackburn Link to comment
Ishigreensa Posted January 25, 2015 Share Posted January 25, 2015 I just read this story start to finish today. Link to comment
fading.kitten Posted January 26, 2015 Share Posted January 26, 2015 This is one of the stories where I enjoy the characters' interactions quite a bit. Thanks for the update. Link to comment
Crimson_Wolf Posted January 26, 2015 Share Posted January 26, 2015 I have to say this is becoming a great story. Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted January 26, 2015 Share Posted January 26, 2015 Really enjoying this. Link to comment
Hades Posted January 26, 2015 Author Share Posted January 26, 2015 Hey everyone. A couple of things I wanted to point out. I didn't get to edit the last chapter and noticed I failed to mention that James had left for his trip. I apologize for any confusion. To be honest, I had to end the chapter a little sooner than I had intended but I really wanted to get an update out. I'm hoping to avoid such mistakes in the future. Also, As I was re-reading the earlier chapters, I noticed that I messed up on the names of Ashley's brothers. In the first chapter, I gave them names, which I later forgot a gave them new names later in the story. I don't know if anyone has noticed but I'm deeply sorry, They don't have much of a role at this point so I hope you can forgive the horrible typo. I get excited at pushing these chapters out so there are times when I end them too soon, or forget details that I wanted in there. Hope you all enjoy what's coming next. Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted January 27, 2015 Share Posted January 27, 2015 That was a good chapter, very dramatic. ^^ Link to comment
Hades Posted January 28, 2015 Author Share Posted January 28, 2015 Erica/ Laura Blackburn Link to comment
Hades Posted February 1, 2015 Author Share Posted February 1, 2015 Erica/ Laura Blackburn Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted February 1, 2015 Share Posted February 1, 2015 glue-eating snotgoblins XD I giggle-snorted reading that. Link to comment
Hades Posted February 1, 2015 Author Share Posted February 1, 2015 Found some extra time. Here's another very short chapter. Enjoy. Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted February 1, 2015 Share Posted February 1, 2015 Yay, two updates in a row! Really digging the character development- I think Zeke is slowlyyyy starting to let down his walls a little ,but he's still a prickly little bugger. Also liked having him run into the lady from the bookstore- and he thought he was going to get away with it, but Tara was on to him about his behavior. XD Link to comment
hifox5 Posted February 2, 2015 Share Posted February 2, 2015 I just love your story, it is so well written. The character development is great, Zeke is my favorite, followed by Erica, don't get me wrong the other two in the family are good as well and Zara's development is coming along nicely. I keep checking back numerous times though the day and night just to see if this fantastic story has been updated and I joined up now to leave a comment on your story. Your ability to engage the reader is just mind blowing. I dislike it when people leave comments on authors stories such as "you should do this to this person etc" so I'm conflicted when I say this 1. Please don't make it sexual between Zeke and Zara 2. Please let Erica and get back in the "grove" if you know what I mean. 3. Maybe Erica can still lactate after all these years, making her and Ashley bond even stronger and before people say that's impossible, my wife still can and its been 10 years and we have been to the doctors and everything is ok. Keep up the great work Hifox5 Link to comment
Hades Posted February 2, 2015 Author Share Posted February 2, 2015 Thanks for the kind words. I love answering questions. First i think you mean Tara not Zara, and i can assure you there will never be any sexual contact with Zeke. Because he is in a minors body im very careful with how graphic things are. Not sure what you mean about Erica and her groove. Sorry. But there's not going ti be any lactating. I've had this story planned out from the beginning. I have added a few characters along the way, but i still have a focus on where the story is going. To be honest, I've included far, far more diaper scenes than i had intended too, but i wanted an element that would appeal to all those littles out there. Hope to post more soon, but im so happy you're enjoying it. I hope i can keep your interest. Link to comment
hifox5 Posted February 2, 2015 Share Posted February 2, 2015 Sorry that should be "Erica and James get back in the groove, if you know what I mean" Link to comment
Shotgun Diplomat Posted February 3, 2015 Share Posted February 3, 2015 Thanks for the great story, I wonder what you have in store for us next? Link to comment
Hades Posted February 3, 2015 Author Share Posted February 3, 2015 School for Zeke and Ash. And a conflict that could tear the group apart. Lol. Just to tease you. Link to comment
fading.kitten Posted February 3, 2015 Share Posted February 3, 2015 Well, herp derp fart, sir. TEMPTING us I see. I can't wait. Link to comment
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