Finished (Extrasolar Diplomacy)

[Denube]

So... lay into me. xD Here's the link.

[WBDaddy]

Disclaimer:

[BoTox]

I started reading this story when it was first published and liked it because of the sci-fi hook. Well written and good dialog but I'm just not into the mommy fantasy angles and never finished it. I didn't see any issues with the style, just of no interest to me personally and I can't force myself to read something I don't enjoy.

[Cute_Kitten]

I think I already gave my peace on this in another post, and WB Daddy already pointed out the mechanical hiccups. Mechanical- I think that's my word of the day.

I hope not, Botox. I think it might just be a busy time of year for a lot of peops