What makes a great story caregiver

[sonofninasayers]

I was just wondering something you know story care givers what makes a great story care giver and the caregiver in queston is a mum, someone to everyones taste that other people might see as their pin-up girl, Yummy Mummy will might fantasies that it's their pin-up of thier Yummy Mummy or what ever

[BabyJune]

When I wrote "Dirty Secrets," the caregiver was a pediatric nurse. A good story leads up to the "caregiver" part with interesting twists that the reader cannot predict. It can be someone whom you would never expect to play the role, or it can be a person who attains the role through "unforeseen circumstances." In the case of "Dirty Secrets," the nurse and her "charge" met as total strangers on a city bus. It makes things more interesting for your readers if they can't figure out what's coming next in the story--hard to do, but if you take your time and really think about the story, it can be done. Write...then re-write. Also, re-read from the perspective of your target audience and not as yourself. (In other words, write what other people want to read). Good luck meeting the challenge. It's fun!

[good kid]

The caregiver that acts sweet and kind but has a sinister agenda. knowing she gets a kick out of what she's doing or something like that.