Babyrob Posted May 5, 2010 Share Posted May 5, 2010 Damn, this is good. Plz continue??? Link to comment
larsend Posted May 15, 2010 Share Posted May 15, 2010 Please go on soon! This is good! Link to comment
pins Posted May 20, 2010 Share Posted May 20, 2010 You write very well and to the point. Your story line is well structured and concice. Continue Please. Link to comment
larsend Posted May 24, 2010 Share Posted May 24, 2010 Please go on soon! This is good! Link to comment
NewGuy20 Posted May 25, 2010 Author Share Posted May 25, 2010 How do you all feel about that 'twist'? I actually don't consider it to be much of a twist but, then again, I'm the one writing it lol. Any criticisms? It is what it is I guess. Link to comment
Guest little_jonny Posted June 18, 2010 Share Posted June 18, 2010 keep it up.. little sad that taylor became mean to brandon. wonder what his science parent is gonna say if she finds out Link to comment
diaper24/7 Posted June 19, 2010 Share Posted June 19, 2010 Nice chapter it got nice twist so far to it keep it going. Link to comment
diaper24/7 Posted June 20, 2010 Share Posted June 20, 2010 Nice chapter sound like it getting really good so far . Link to comment
Guest little_jonny Posted August 19, 2010 Share Posted August 19, 2010 awsome! i thought you weren't gonna continue. but what a great way to continue. can't wait to see what happens next Link to comment
:dlb Posted August 19, 2010 Share Posted August 19, 2010 rofl funny twist there at end of that one. Link to comment
Guest little_jonny Posted August 20, 2010 Share Posted August 20, 2010 keep it going. very good Link to comment
peelover Posted August 20, 2010 Share Posted August 20, 2010 One thing that really annoyed me was that they were mad at his for using t5he toilet without permission. They should have been happy that he used the potty. Link to comment
Guest little_jonny Posted August 21, 2010 Share Posted August 21, 2010 wow! hope nicki s understanding about the whole thing and doesn make fun of him Link to comment
:dlb Posted August 21, 2010 Share Posted August 21, 2010 Poor kid that woulda been end of world mortifying. Link to comment
diaper24/7 Posted August 25, 2010 Share Posted August 25, 2010 Nice chapter love how you still doing this. Link to comment
diaperboy4life Posted August 26, 2010 Share Posted August 26, 2010 I just caught up with the story and I must say it is excellent! Good job on the story so far and please continue. Link to comment
Guest little_jonny Posted August 31, 2010 Share Posted August 31, 2010 wow, very good. hope we can get a update on what nicki thinks about it.. please keep it going Link to comment
diaper24/7 Posted August 31, 2010 Share Posted August 31, 2010 Yeah I look forward to your next chapter this is one of my favorite stories here. Link to comment
timmyc Posted August 31, 2010 Share Posted August 31, 2010 I only discovered this story this week, it is good, well written. I haven't read the whole thing as it is long and I didn't start when it was new. The only question I have is how is this story any different from [That site], and all the outrage there. Link to comment
diaper24/7 Posted September 1, 2010 Share Posted September 1, 2010 Wow this keep getting better every time I read it. Link to comment
jeremy12312 Posted September 1, 2010 Share Posted September 1, 2010 The only question I have is how is this story any different from [That site], and all the outrage there. The outrage surrounding that other site had more to do with the creepyness of requiring that all stories HAD to follow a certain pattern, not necessarily the stories themselves. Thankfully this story has no mentions of wearing multiple layers of underpants or multiple cloth diapers pinned to shirts. NewGuy, this story is great. Hope you continue for a long time to come. 1 Link to comment
jeremy12312 Posted September 1, 2010 Share Posted September 1, 2010 The only question I have is how is this story any different from [That site], and all the outrage there. The outrage surrounding that other site had more to do with the creepyness of requiring that all stories HAD to follow a certain pattern, not necessarily the stories themselves. Thankfully this story has no mentions of wearing multiple layers of underpants or multiple cloth diapers pinned to shirts. NewGuy, this story is great. Hope you continue for a long time to come. Link to comment
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