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Baby Sammy Diaper Days

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chapter 1 Rebecca's trick

"Samantha" Madison yelled

"Yea sis?" Samantha said

"I need to go run an errand can you make sure Rebecca doesnt do anything bad"

"Okay"

"Ill be back in 10 minutes okay"

"Okay"

After Samantha's older sister left, she went to check on her younger sister Rebecca who is only 12 even though Samantha is 14

"Hey Becca" Samantha said

"Oh hey sis wheres Maddie" Becca said

"Left she'll be back in 10 minutes"

"Okay" Becca said " Hey can I show you something"

"Sure"

"Over here"

Samantha followed her sister into her room

"Okay so what is it" Samantha asked

"Lay down on my bed" Becca said

Samantha lays down on Becca bed when she noiticed her hands and feet were taped together

"Whats going on Becca" Sanantha yelled

"Ill let you free if you do what I say" Becca said

"Okay"

"Okay answer this do u need to use the bathroom"

"Yes"

"Pee poop or both"

"Pee"

"Go now"

"I cant move how am I supposed to use the bathroom"

"Just pee in your panties"

"Im not a baby Becca and you know it"

"Do you want to be free"

"Fine"

Samantha lets the pee flow into her panties and looks at the smile on Beccas face and she just stared and said

"Did baby have a little acident"

Samantha just got mad and before she could shout Becca lets her go as soon as Maddie walks in and she walked towards her

"Maddie look what Samantha did"

"Okay"

They walked in as soon as Samantha got up to change into clean panties

"Samantha i cant believe you" Maddie said

"But but" Samantha said

"No buts apperanly you need proper clothing"

Chapter 2 Diapered

All three girls walk into the living room and Maddie says "wait here Becca make sure the baby doesnt leak" Becca nods as Maddie leaves the room for 2 minute and comes back holding a pull-up diaper and changing supplies

"Here Becca put baby Sammy into her diapers ill make sure she doesnt run off"

Becca removes Sammys panties and cleans her up as Maddie looks there disappointed at her sister

"Sammy why did you do this" all Sammy can do was give a guilty stare

"Sammy from now on your wearong diapers and only Me and Becca can change them and well do whatever we want to you while were changing you"

"Way ahead of you sis" Becca said as she was rubbing Sammys vagina

"Becca stop before I-" she shes fresh cum in her new pull-up and Becca puts it on anyways

"You look good in a diaper Sammy" Maddie said

Sammy takes a look and she agrees

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Oooooooookay, so, you say at the top that "this story has some events of my life but not everything is true"...Which was the true part, then?

This story looks like physical and sexual abuse/incest, especially with minors in the story...Not cool.

~ moogle

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It's a little wrong and way to quick. You need to explain the characters a bit more, what they look like etc.

Also are these blood related sisters? Coz its a little odd to me...incest..and also..they are way underage...need to be over 18 or even older depending on what country you're in. If that parts true about being sisters etc and ages its a tad bit wrong.

"Do you want to be free"

"Fine"

Samantha lets the pee flow

I doubt someone would say yes just like that to doing something like that, you'd be wondering why on earth they are asking you to do it. There'd be a little more resistance there.

I'd start again Sammy. :) Make all characters at least over 18 and no incest. And explain in more detail.

Just my opinion. :D

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OK, I don't really critique stories very hard(if at all), but I'm going to be brutally honest here. Please don't take anything I say in this post personally.

Number 1, this story has absolutely zero substance other than diapers, wetting, and humiliation. You need to flesh out your characters more and make these so-called 'chapters' a lot longer than they currently are.

Number 2, your characters need to be over 18. What you have depicted in this story could be construed as incest or something similar and this site could get into trouble. (I think. I'm no lawyer.)

Number 3, you need major help on your grammar and punctuation.

JMHO.

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You see a lot of stuff like this on www.[That site].com Yes, it is kinda sick. For instance, one story that struck me was one titld "Heather the Babysitter." My husband and I read it together and just thought, "Um, okay. Kinda strange." that story is found at www.[That site].com/Stories/heather_the_babysitter.html

I read a lot on [That site].combecause I was interested. Don't worry, we all know that the AB/DL community is not twisted like that. I mean, I'm living the lifestyle myself and lovin it.

If I were you, I'd definitely change the age of the characters.

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You see a lot of stuff like this on www.[That site].com Yes, it is kinda sick. For instance, one story that struck me was one titld "Heather the Babysitter." My husband and I read it together and just thought, "Um, okay. Kinda strange." that story is found at www.[That site].com/Stories/heather_the_babysitter.html

I read a lot on [That site].combecause I was interested. Don't worry, we all know that the AB/DL community is not twisted like that. I mean, I'm living the lifestyle myself and lovin it.

If I were you, I'd definitely change the age of the characters.

That was one of the first things I thought of when I was reading this. [That site]'s site definitely has some sick things on it.

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That was one of the first things I thought of when I was reading this. [That site]'s site definitely has some sick things on it.

Not to mention [That site].com is very one-sided in that [That site] makes very clear that he wants nothing to do with girl fedishists. Everything, stories, pictures, citings, and all, has to do with boys and boys only. That was a turn off for me. Nonetheless, i've read his entire site because i was curious.

the beginning of learning about you guys, I read everything I could, since I was curious. Then, I found this site and thought I'd join and be a part of the community and learn everything I could straight from the sources, rather than deal with hearsay. And what do you know, I'm actually living the lifestyle now and loving it. I share my experience in the Baby Talk forum. It's like something has opened up to me, like some sort of revelation or discovery. It's as if i had an awakening.

I do agree that the [That site] site definitely has a lot of disgusting things on it. I mean, it is very boarder line sexual abuse on minors, which I do have issuance with., Furthermore, some of the stories actually feature some horrific things that parents do to their children. The scary thing is, some parents DO ACTUALLY do these things. I've seen children humiliated beyond belief in real life in some unspeakable ways. I can't understand how some parents could be so horrible. I guess it is one thing to have those stories on the site, as humiliation does really happen, and people do like reading that stuff. As a matter of fact, my story will have a parent/child relation where the child is severely humiliated. So, I guess the humiliation stories are not that bad. What nags at me though is that the humiliation in a lot of the stories hosted on [That site]'s site is indecent and is border line abuse. Sometimes, it is actual abuse. But the fact that [That site] hosts stories that have gruesome sex acts with minors brings chills down my spine. Now, I think I'm rambling...

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